Me trying to do a "French" accent:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1dZGVbBmtrv (also I think I figured out d'angliscismes after looking at it; it would sound like dong-les-sees-may).
Your accent sounds very American to say the least but if that song's words are comparable to how you sound I'd say you sound better than the Quebecois to me xD.
Well if you feel the same way about English as I do about French I can completely understand wanting some feedback it's so hard. It's much easier to read that to speak/write for me also. Also to be honest when I was younger I messed up right and write all the time too! Anywho, yeah a lot of Europeans I know and a few Quebecois think in English a lot but speak in their native language.
Also some corrections I'll let you know (if you don't want me to tell you then just tell me and I won't :P ):
First of all just if you care about proper spelling place names and languages in English are capitalized. I know in French place names are capitalized so that's probably just how you type but English is also a word that should always be capitalized.
Now for grammatical corrections
"something I found difficult
when I was younger was 'right' and 'write'."
Also "We I write I can look back at what I've wrote." I don't quite understand what you mean unless you meant, "
When I write..."