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October 17th, 2011 7:44 PMLegendarian MistressOkay, bai. I wasn't saying it was odd, btw.
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October 17th, 2011 7:42 PMFuyuREplying tomorrow bai. ill leave a message for you.
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October 17th, 2011 7:29 PMFuyuWait what? Are you saying it's odd to write them years later after a sudden prologue? Well first you'd have to write them... I'll talk about that in the edit.
It'd be a good experience for you to write their drastic changes between the time frames. One alone wouldn't be able to convey the way the world has changed after everything, how they have changed. Also he's right though. In general, you need a lot more emotion in your characters. -
October 17th, 2011 7:25 PMLegendarian MistressThat aside, I have a problem. I was talking with SS earlier about whether I should have a year gap between the prologue and chapter 1. He interpreted that as one year, but I clarified and said no, one-several years, adding that I'd already started chapter 1, yet it felt freaky that seven years had passed. He said do 1 and have emotion. Then I said I'll make them their proper ages later. What do you think?
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October 17th, 2011 7:21 PMFuyuwebs.com It's not that hard. And I deleted it. No point in us using it anymore. It'd be better if you made your own. There's also wix.com, the Dreamweaver program, all sorts of things.
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October 17th, 2011 7:18 PMLegendarian MistressYeah, a website would be lovely, 'cept I don't know how to make one. And while we're on the topic of websites, what happened to Legacy of the Digi-Destined? That site you created that I was a mod of?
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October 17th, 2011 7:13 PMFuyuYou really need to make yourself a website. It's cluttering up your profile. Other than that... you're so formal. I get that we're on the 'net but sound a bit more welcoming to people. They don't just know you're friendly. ANd I'm more worried about your story summaries. For anybody who hasn't read your stories (or in the case of JL getting messed up) they'll have no idea what's going on unless they read your profile. Put short summaries for DH and SoIS
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October 17th, 2011 7:07 PMLegendarian Mistresshttp://www.fanfiction.net/u/2591506/Wizardmonfan
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October 17th, 2011 6:56 PMFuyuokay
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October 17th, 2011 6:54 PMLegendarian MistressI haven't had a chance to update my profile yet, the system at the Centre wouldn't let me, but I'm gonna do it now.
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October 17th, 2011 6:10 PMFuyuI have a complaint about your summaries. That doesn't tell the reader anything about the story. THey may not have read your previous works, especially with OaS having barely been out long enough to read. I'll beta the chapters later.
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October 17th, 2011 5:33 PMLegendarian MistressOkay bai.
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October 17th, 2011 5:33 PMFuyuThat happens. I'll look on my ipod. Thanks. Later.
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October 17th, 2011 5:31 PMLegendarian Mistresshttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/7473088/1/Spreading_of_Insanitys_Scales
Spacing's shot, even though I fixed it earlier before SS read it. -
October 17th, 2011 5:30 PMFuyuOkay. Cool. Please get me the link to SoIS. I have to go in a couple minutes.

