Conversation Between Legendarian Mistress and Fuyu
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  1. Legendarian Mistress
    October 19th, 2009 3:10 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Hey, can you come online?
  2. Fuyu
    October 19th, 2009 2:53 AM
    Fuyu
    Hi Kyuu-chan.
  3. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2009 5:11 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Hey 'fell.
  4. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 6:33 PM
    Fuyu
    Good.
  5. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 6:07 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Ah yes, I remember. This morning, I started work on rewriting the prologue of AD.
  6. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 6:06 PM
    Fuyu
    Oh okay.
  7. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 6:04 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    It's not as long as the other one, coming in at 3 pages.
  8. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 6:03 PM
    Fuyu
    Ah, I see. Please email it to me. I might pass it to a friend of mine who betas my stuff.
  9. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 5:59 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Bay's a female. She's Cambodian.

    Edit: But yeah, maybe I'll PM you "A Mere Raindrop" and let you evaluate it.
  10. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 5:58 PM
    Fuyu
    Okay taking a look at it, he's got a point. There probably should be a little more emotion and backstory in there. It also feels like a bit of a Mary-Sue fic. But you kind of are stepping out of your comfort zone. You're willing to go into someone else's point of view. It's true that writers are kind of the way he ays but they write in their comfort zone too so you're not the only one. Post A Mere Raindrop and other backstories and let Josephine become a bit of a background character or show her flaws a little more obviously.

    I wouldn't leave PC over this. I'd look it over, be grateful the dude has time to point out some flaws, and keep on stepping. No offense. Then again you don't have to take me seriously as I've prefer people dismembering my stuff. Every now and again you'll get those reviews. Just take what you can get out of them and make things better.
  11. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 5:48 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Okay.
  12. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 5:47 PM
    Fuyu
    Ah jeezum... hold on let me go take a peek at it.
  13. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 5:45 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    I completed "A Mere Raindrop". But looking at Bay's review for the prequel makes me wanna leave PC.
  14. Fuyu
    October 17th, 2009 5:43 PM
    Fuyu
    Ah jeezum. WEll this sucks. So what's up?
  15. Legendarian Mistress
    October 17th, 2009 5:42 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    I can't. AIM won't even let me IN. Keeps saying my name or password are wrong. I'm like "I don't think so!! I know they're right, I've been using them long enough!!"