Conversation Between Legendarian Mistress and Fuyu
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  1. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 4:30 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Just did, cool. So there'll be your Schism and mine, completely different of course.
    Ah, that's the other thing. Can you please either VM or email me a list of all the Ferros, from Hanabi and her husband to the youngest kid? I just want to have it to look at. Thanks in advance.
  2. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 4:25 PM
    Fuyu
    Schism was an actual word in truth. Look it up on the online thesaurus.
  3. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 4:16 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    The Schism was a term you thought of, wasn't it? If I wanted something similar, what could I use?
  4. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 4:11 PM
    Fuyu
    No it's not. Think of it as a publishable novel, there aren't character bios before the story. The writer needs to be able to write the characters without someone having to constantly look up how they behave. A bio can be put up somewhere for keeping your information straight, such as weapons and all of that, but the author should be able to express the characters well enough.
  5. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 4:07 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    I've seen some authors put bios before the story. Is that the right way to do things or not?
  6. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 4:05 PM
    Fuyu
    Keep in mind when you write your characters, unless the bios are put up somewhere publically, they won't be reading them. So the characters need to be expressed as much as possible and as distinctly as possible for the reader.
  7. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 3:56 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Not atm, but maybe some will pop up later. Mind's working on bios right now. I'll be sure to ask you if I need advice.
  8. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 3:55 PM
    Fuyu
    Any questions about previous betaing or help you need?
  9. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 3:39 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Cool.
  10. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 3:38 PM
    Fuyu
    Got it.
  11. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 3:29 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Sent.
  12. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 3:25 PM
    Fuyu
    Go ahead. When you finish editing the other two resend those.
  13. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 3:23 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Yep. Got it Wednesday afternoon when I hopped onto a internet kiosk. Did you want me to send chapter 2 or leave it?
  14. Fuyu
    October 13th, 2011 3:19 PM
    Fuyu
    You get the beta?
  15. Legendarian Mistress
    October 13th, 2011 3:14 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Thanks.