Conversation Between Legendarian Mistress and Sgt Shock
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  1. Sgt Shock
    October 19th, 2011 5:21 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Sent to your yahoo account.
  2. Legendarian Mistress
    October 19th, 2011 3:16 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Yeah, I'm good. I started thinking about your comments on what was the old chapter 1 last night and I realized "I know what I wanna do, but don't know how to start."
  3. Sgt Shock
    October 19th, 2011 3:11 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Oh wow. That was a bummer. ;/ Make sure you have the receipt and everything. :) So how have you been?
  4. Legendarian Mistress
    October 19th, 2011 3:10 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    So I picked up the dvd, only to find it had no discs. Am going back there today to get a new copy with discs.
  5. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 5:12 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Like an wow moment. :0 Sorry for throwing my vocab at you again. ;/ My bad. See ya later!
  6. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2011 5:08 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    How am I sposed to know what that means? Anyway, gotta go. Got a Digimon dvd to pick up and get back home before 1pm
  7. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 5:07 PM
    Sgt Shock
    That's what I meant. :/
  8. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2011 5:06 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Epiphany?
  9. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 5:02 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Random, have you ever had an epiphany just slam across your head suddenly? It just happened to me and I'm still processing the scene I have in my head. Wow that was intense. ;/
  10. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2011 5:00 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    Righto.
  11. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 4:57 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Personally, I think you need to build it up first. The storyline and the feeling should come, and then fill in the blanks.
  12. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2011 4:52 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    True enough. I'll start chapter 1 afresh tonight. Oh, should the flashback be in 1 or a later chapter?
  13. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 4:50 PM
    Sgt Shock
    This is actually fair. You could skip directly to the first chapter. But that will also require you to explain what is going on subtly. :)
  14. Legendarian Mistress
    October 18th, 2011 4:49 PM
    Legendarian Mistress
    None really, but I will take your advice on board. 'fell said the prologue isn't really needed, but it could be used as more of a flashback and she wants me to finish chapter 1 entirely.
  15. Sgt Shock
    October 18th, 2011 4:46 PM
    Sgt Shock
    OH YEAH. :D
    Do you have an questions on anything I said in my review? Especially with explaining the setting and envisioning dialogue.