I just read your chapter 4 and I must say, that was amazing. I'll tell you my points when you get online. I'll be chilling on Meebo since my brother yanked me away from Fable and Elder Scrolls.
YES! That's perfect. The funny thing about it is Gabriel is being commissioned to play mind games on Josh like right now. No joke. :D I didn't think about using it to snap him out of it. THANKS!!!!!
Heh, sorry – I love that line from Giovanni in The Resurrection’s Beginning. Anyway, onto business... I have the answer to your problem. I asked not only my first adult friend, but another as well, and they both said “in order for Josh to snap out of the mindset of a killer, Gabriel should torture him”. In response to that, I thought that he should take Lt. Surge and Romy hostage and use not only mind games, but electric shocks – that’s if he has an Electric partner – to bring Josh’s good side back.