Conversation Between Ninja Caterpie and インフェルノの津波
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  1. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 3:11 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    Oh, that'll be explained later. I keep him as a dick, but seriously, when he was fighting With Harmony when he "Fell down some stairs", or in the past?
  2. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 3:08 PM
    Ninja Caterpie
    Lol, you made a lot of those, I guess you should keep him as a dick.

    Doesn't explain why his Larvitar likes him though.

    Massive plot hole created.
  3. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 3:04 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    *Sigh* Looks like I'll have a lot of work tonight...

    So, you found nothing funny?

    Which part him being a dick? I made a lot those, that's why I'm asking.
  4. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 3:02 PM
    Ninja Caterpie
    I've read through the whole thing, and none of it has really interested me except for that very last part which made Zeke look like such a dick.
  5. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 3:00 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    Thanks. I'm gonna change my writing style, so...look out.

    What do you think is the funniest/favorite scene so far? I need to see how I can make my jokes funnier for most people, so that more can read.
  6. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 2:55 PM
    Ninja Caterpie
    Oh, right, that.

    Well, Zeke seems like a bit of a dick if he just yells at her, scares her off, and then calls her a selfish ***** afterwards, doesn't he? Unless that's meant to happen (which I doubt very much), you need a reason for Harmony to be called a selfish *****. Provoking him is quite a good enough reason.
  7. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 2:51 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    Hmmm, okay, but that's not what I meant. Like, why should Harmony say: Don't be such a chicken? Please explain.
  8. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 2:49 PM
    Ninja Caterpie
    What do I mean what?

    Oh, when I said shrink, I sort of meant back to normal. It's still a size big.

    Also, when you post new chapters, just post them. Don't add them to the first post. Link them if you want, but post them in a new post.
  9. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 2:46 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    What do you mean?
  10. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 4:09 AM
    インフェルノの津波
    Eh, I don't know.....

    Now You'll tell me your favorite part, now that it's easier to read.
  11. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 4:07 AM
    Ninja Caterpie
    o_O

    Why does it break my page?

    o_o
  12. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 4:05 AM
    インフェルノの津波
    Refresh, I fixed it.
  13. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 3:58 AM
    Ninja Caterpie
    +D

    Oh well, I'll try. =|
  14. インフェルノの津波
    January 29th, 2010 3:52 AM
    インフェルノの津波
    Fine....I'll fix it, hold on a minute.
  15. Ninja Caterpie
    January 29th, 2010 3:50 AM
    Ninja Caterpie
    OH HUM.

    I didn't even really read it properly, to tell the truth. Too wall-of-texty and too massive.