Conversation Between Ninja Caterpie and インフェルノの津波
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January 29th, 2010 3:11 PMインフェルノの津波Oh, that'll be explained later. I keep him as a dick, but seriously, when he was fighting With Harmony when he "Fell down some stairs", or in the past?
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January 29th, 2010 3:08 PMNinja CaterpieLol, you made a lot of those, I guess you should keep him as a dick.
Doesn't explain why his Larvitar likes him though.
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January 29th, 2010 3:04 PMインフェルノの津波*Sigh* Looks like I'll have a lot of work tonight...
So, you found nothing funny?
Which part him being a dick? I made a lot those, that's why I'm asking. -
January 29th, 2010 3:02 PMNinja CaterpieI've read through the whole thing, and none of it has really interested me except for that very last part which made Zeke look like such a dick.
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January 29th, 2010 3:00 PMインフェルノの津波Thanks. I'm gonna change my writing style, so...look out.
What do you think is the funniest/favorite scene so far? I need to see how I can make my jokes funnier for most people, so that more can read. -
January 29th, 2010 2:55 PMNinja CaterpieOh, right, that.
Well, Zeke seems like a bit of a dick if he just yells at her, scares her off, and then calls her a selfish ***** afterwards, doesn't he? Unless that's meant to happen (which I doubt very much), you need a reason for Harmony to be called a selfish *****. Provoking him is quite a good enough reason. -
January 29th, 2010 2:51 PMインフェルノの津波Hmmm, okay, but that's not what I meant. Like, why should Harmony say: Don't be such a chicken? Please explain.
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January 29th, 2010 2:49 PMNinja CaterpieWhat do I mean what?
Oh, when I said shrink, I sort of meant back to normal. It's still a size big.
Also, when you post new chapters, just post them. Don't add them to the first post. Link them if you want, but post them in a new post. -
January 29th, 2010 2:46 PMインフェルノの津波What do you mean?
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January 29th, 2010 4:09 AMインフェルノの津波Eh, I don't know.....
Now You'll tell me your favorite part, now that it's easier to read. -
January 29th, 2010 4:07 AMNinja Caterpieo_O
Why does it break my page?
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January 29th, 2010 4:05 AMインフェルノの津波Refresh, I fixed it.
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January 29th, 2010 3:58 AMNinja Caterpie+D
Oh well, I'll try. =| -
January 29th, 2010 3:52 AMインフェルノの津波Fine....I'll fix it, hold on a minute.
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January 29th, 2010 3:50 AMNinja CaterpieOH HUM.
I didn't even really read it properly, to tell the truth. Too wall-of-texty and too massive.


