Conversation Between Giratina ♀ and Cнαяcнιc
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  1. Giratina ♀
    August 25th, 2009 10:55 AM
    Giratina ♀
    I did read it, first chapter included. I've edited my review to include the first chapter as well, but not a complete grammar run-through.
  2. Cнαяcнιc
    August 25th, 2009 10:50 AM
    Cнαяcнιc
    We are still in the first chapter 8-) But fine, don't read it then.
  3. Giratina ♀
    August 25th, 2009 10:40 AM
    Giratina ♀
    I reviewed it. From what I saw, it doesn't seem so much like an adventure of heartbreak and courage so much as a common and illogical ploy to make up some antagonists for a story with some Legendaries involved.
  4. Cнαяcнιc
    August 24th, 2009 4:40 PM
    Cнαяcнιc
    Well it is a tale of heartbreak - adventure and courage 8-|
  5. Giratina ♀
    August 24th, 2009 4:26 PM
    Giratina ♀
    Convince me.
  6. Cнαяcнιc
    August 24th, 2009 4:19 PM
    Cнαяcнιc
    http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=191946

    Hey, will you review my fan-fiction, Pokémon: Project Victory? Thanks.