Conversation Between Banjora Marxvile and Patatas Fritas
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  1. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:43 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    *Runs back to the chair originally sat in, and assumes watching over this place*

    Hmm... Seems weird, but fun!
  2. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:41 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    *Some how is alive* ... THAT IS IT! I'm going home! *storms of*

    This is WEIRD!
  3. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:39 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    *Runs back, pokes body with stick, goes back to hiding*

    Wait, this has gotten silly. But I love it!
  4. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:38 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    Gasp! Oh noes! He escaped! Now I cant get his mothers number, to tell her! *Dies*

  5. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:35 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    *Runs away* *Hides in a secret area, just off the M1*
  6. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:34 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    *Escorts to door* I'm telling your mother young man!
  7. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:32 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    Aww... *Picks up litter*...
  8. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:30 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    xD Tut!
  9. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:29 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    *Whistles whilst stuffing litter beside chair*
  10. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:25 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    Thanks, please exit through the door on your left, and take all rubbish with you.
  11. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:22 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    Anyway, that was a good little fanfic.
  12. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:21 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    I guess... Yeah... I'll keep that in mind if I do soemthing like that again.
  13. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:20 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    Ah. Makes sense now. If you could do a little colour key, and have the different views in different colours, it would make it easier to understand for readers.
  14. Patatas Fritas
    May 24th, 2009 12:18 PM
    Patatas Fritas
    It was a switch of view, I switched to the Umbreon's sister.
  15. Banjora Marxvile
    May 24th, 2009 12:16 PM
    Banjora Marxvile
    Well, let's just think... Contains a dilemma, has revenge, and a family theme (I absolutely love themes based on family!). May be a little short for my liking, but for a short one-off thing, it is great in my eyes! Something that i re-read that is confusing:

    "I came out as an Umbreon"Fine, however:

    "I took it upon myself to teach Espeon to fight, teaching them great Psychic strategy,"

    this is kinda weird, as why would an Umbreon teach Espeons? And Espeons tesch Umbreons bite? Or is it a switch of view?