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September 2nd, 2009 9:45 AMcolcolstylesTake your time. I still have to get breakfast :D
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September 2nd, 2009 9:44 AMBanjora MarxvileOK, well, thank you. Shame I can't Copy and Paste the review I sent to Alice. into Word, to make editing easier, as my computer crashes when I do, so this may take a while.
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September 2nd, 2009 9:42 AMcolcolstylesSure thing.
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September 2nd, 2009 9:37 AMBanjora MarxvileAh ha! I knew I made that error somewhere, it's There are 2 modes... It's because I was rushed for editing, and originally put "another" mode, but changed it to "2". I'm an idiot... Either way, I'll take the original I sent, and if I improve the grammar and add my opinions, then send it to you, without removing anything, can you rate it?
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September 2nd, 2009 9:34 AMcolcolstylesThere is 2 modes as well.I see this a lot these days so you're not the only one who makes this error, even when I'm talking to someone face to face. Anyways, I'm not saying that there are errors everywhere; just a few here and there. The whole thing just needs to be tidied up and polished. It's not as bad as I probably made it seem at first.
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September 2nd, 2009 9:29 AMBanjora MarxvileI will rewrite it, but probably not majorly. Just adding my opinions, and changing bits here and there. That "casual" style you talk of, it is the only way I can right, it invites a kind of... Friendly feel, I find. If you treat it serious, it just sounds... Monotone.
The point of a review isn't just opinions, but also features. I am adding more opinions now, as I forgot to add them, for some reason... As for grammar... Actually, to be honest, you are seeing errors, that probably no one else will ever see. Remember, the people who read this aren't all like... You.
Anyway, I'll probably send my next one directly to you, so at least then you can directly send your thoughts back. -
September 2nd, 2009 9:25 AMcolcolstylesEr, I didn't say it was impossible to fix. It's just that given the way it was written, even if I had gone through and rephrased everything, the article at its core just didn't seem very good. Like I said, it was more like a description of the hack than an review.
If you don't want to rewrite the entire thing, I could go through and actually point out what I think needs to be fixed but even after I do that, you're still probably going to need to do some further revising. -
September 2nd, 2009 9:17 AMBanjora MarxvileI here from a little birdy called Harry you grammar checked my review. I know I didn't include many opinions, but how was the grammar incorrect, and impossible to fix?
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July 20th, 2009 10:10 AMBanjora MarxvileYeah, that would be nice. I don't mind, would just save time.
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July 20th, 2009 9:57 AMcolcolstylesActually, I can't at the moment. Right now I have to prepare for a two-night camping trip with some friends of mine. I'll be back on Wednesday but I'll look it up for you when I get back. You are talking about Emerald, right?
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July 20th, 2009 6:58 AMBanjora MarxvileYou said you faound the door animations offset. Could you please tell me where they are? Thanks.

