Heaps better! I just noticed one other thing. The very tip of the gun is looking a tad blurred. Sharpen it up a bit and you could also get a Orange/Yellow/White 100px Soft Brush and brush a single dot where the light coming from the barrel is. Change the blending mode to Soft light or linear dodge or something that looks nice.
Hm, looks much better, except the smudging now. I think you went overboard with the blurring, and it looks a bit eh compared to the first one. If you can, erase some of the blurring with a 50% eraser because somewhere half way between the two banners is perfect.