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December 2nd, 2008 8:11 AMstar88um by the 6th because it is a long chapter:) i can make the deadline sooner if you want though:P
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November 30th, 2008 10:50 AMBlue AngelI seem to be moving farther away from this place by the minute ;p
Can you give me a deadline in which to proofread your message? Might get the ball rolling :p Can't promise, but at least it'll give me a force to read so I can get it done for ya. ^^ -
November 27th, 2008 8:53 AMstar88ok i will pm it you along with chapter 3 [ i have just finished it]
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November 26th, 2008 9:13 PMBlue AngelSure, if you want me to proofread it for ya ^^
It is 100% fine with me :) -
November 26th, 2008 12:32 PMstar88hi i know i have done it completely out of sequence but i have finished the epilouge. shall i pm it you to check?
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November 12th, 2008 11:46 AMstar88oh i have got several inter storys in my head word for word i just need to put them down on paper. what i meant was the very end [ well the part were someone dies] i keeps playing over and over in my head. [i see everything i type or right before me as though i am a computer in a way. and i see storys as films in my head if that makes sence.]
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November 11th, 2008 11:56 AMBlue AngelLol ^^
Do you mean the end to the chapter or to the story?
You can do both/either. Just save it to a Word document(or something similar) and refer to it later. If it is the very end, you can always refer to it at the end, and see if your intentions for the ending have changed.
It's best to write what you got flowing. Good Luck ^^ -
November 11th, 2008 7:41 AMstar88nearly finish the next chapter will get it to you asap:) [ i keep trying to write the end by mistake]
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November 10th, 2008 8:16 PMBlue AngelDo you have anymore of your story you want me to proofread?
No pressure - I am just free tomorrow, and open for proofreading. -
November 4th, 2008 4:39 PMBlue AngelBy tomorrow? Sure. I'll do my best to overcome homework, so I can read.
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November 4th, 2008 11:07 AMstar88well when i send it you i would like it checked and back for the next day:) [ is that a good deadline]
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November 3rd, 2008 4:13 PMBlue AngelGive me some sort of deadline. I need some "push" because I am prone to procrastination. Mostly it's because I have homework,etc. and I need someone to give that little push in order to do something.
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November 3rd, 2008 7:13 AMstar88it is ok thankyou for giving it. astinus says you will check my other chapter before it goes out:) so thankyou for offering to help
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November 2nd, 2008 8:26 AMBlue AngelIt looks much better with the line there and no bolding.
I like the look much better now. Somehow it looks like it has more calm and flow.
Thanks for taking the advice ^^ -
November 2nd, 2008 8:15 AMBlue AngelIt's just cause bolding is one of those things that makes it harder to read. I think it's a rule. I don't think it's that big of a deal, but the better the presentation, the better the first impression ^^

