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October 11th, 2008 12:55 PMBayCool. :)
'kay, will look over your beta more indepth when I have time and if I have any questions, I'll let you know. ^^ -
October 11th, 2008 12:49 PMBlue AngelI really liked how you explained why Cyrus is the way he is today. It was certainly a believable reason.
You might want to make the clarity about it being a different Cynthia when you submit the story. -
October 11th, 2008 12:39 PMBayHey, Blue Angel! Sorry for not replying eariler...internet crash. >.>
I was trying to use past tense. Ack, I suck at tenses! >.>
Also, Cynthia is not Cynthia the Sinnoh Champion. ^^; Cynthia in my story died when she was really young. XD
Thanks for betaing my story! What you think of it, anyways? -
October 10th, 2008 9:09 PMBlue AngelIt took me a bit, but I finished the review.
if you are confused or have questions, send me a VM -
October 10th, 2008 8:12 PMBlue AngelIs this story in present progressive or past tense? Because you swapped the form a couple times throughout. I want to help you make it flow in one tense.
Although, I understand if you use a past tense helping verb then use a present progressive verb afterwords. It works like a past progressive when you format it in that manner, and I personally like that style and use it quite frequently. -
October 8th, 2008 9:01 PMBayYeah, Friday would be fine. :)
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October 8th, 2008 2:33 PMBlue AngelHey Bay. I got your message. I have just had a huge amount of homework from our English teacher.
I'll try to get it done today, if not, Friday should be perfect. That work? -
September 13th, 2008 6:08 PMBayYou're welcome.
The thing is pretty much the reason I'm trying to be nice is because I've been learned to keep my patience. However, that doesn't mean what I say can get through you. Sometimes people need to be a more tough cookie, to put it in a nice term, to get through someone.
Just because Astinus is a bit more harsh while trying explaining to you that doesn't mean you shouldn't listen to her. Heck, probably she could explain something more depth than me. Eh, I guess the thing is both Astinus and I have different styles when trying to explain things but none is better than the other.
On an unrelated note, shall give you my one shot I've been telling you about sometime in early October. I gave my one shot to another beta at the moment and it's going to be a while. -
September 13th, 2008 1:33 PMBlue AngelThanks for trying to say it nice.
It's a step in the right direction *wink* -
August 23rd, 2008 7:58 PMBayHehe, cool. ;D Warning though, fifteen chapters. XD
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August 23rd, 2008 6:53 PMBlue AngelHi! I think I'll put your story on my reading list, because you did cover a little bit about a Pokemon Diamond quote/reference, which I am using in my story. Who knows? May find inspiration ^^
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August 13th, 2008 2:18 PMBayHey, Blue Angel! Just want to let you know I PMed you something very important...;)
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July 21st, 2008 8:03 AMBlue AngelIt's gore that I am against. Technically, violence is in all stories - pokemon battling LOL
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July 20th, 2008 9:20 PMBayThat's cool. I'm not a big fan of it either, but I felt some of the violence and such in the story are important factors...^^;
And yes, avatars need to match genders. XD -
July 20th, 2008 5:41 PMBlue AngelI'd read your story, but it is violence and gore and i'm not much for either of those.
I accidentally posted my comment back to you on my own page. Here it is:
Lol me too, my computers having problems with this site. Sorry, the avatars are so confusing! Astinus has a guy as her avatar and Thesis has a girl for his. Why can't we have a picture matching our gender? Or at least have the little caption on the side saying "Isn't (he / she) adorable/beautiful?" or something?
Needed to rant.
Well, if people want to be noted by gender they should have avatar genders to match. They can't blame anyone else for that =P

