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  1. Sheep
    December 14th, 2017 5:53 PM
    late af my bad
    Hey omg long time <3 Love that avatar!!!!
  2. Bardothren
    August 18th, 2017 6:37 PM
    I've noticed that myself. That's why I avoid that trope as much as humanly possible. I just had a fantastic idea for a story that ventures into something I would normally not consider, but I got inspired by a story in a similar vein that went in a completely different direction. I think I'll start working on it... which may be a bad idea given the fact I'm already working on two, but we'll see.
  3. Sheep
    July 23rd, 2017 6:21 AM
    very cute and i approve
  4. Bardothren
    July 15th, 2017 7:34 PM
    True. I'm not sure what character I'd say I'm best at writing... but it might be fun to pair a stuck-up, highly logical intellectual with a trickster just out for laughs. The logical entity keeps trying to manipulate the trickster only to find that it cannot comprehend the other, while the trickster keeps trying to get a rise out of the logical entity but never quite manages to get the desired reaction.
  5. Bardothren
    July 8th, 2017 11:51 AM
    Hmm... if we're comparing openings, then I'd say Revolution starts stronger. Reyes has more bite as a character, and the background starts interesting right away, rather than waiting for the end of the chapter to drop the 'oh muk' moment. And while the battle with Red is fun, there isn't a lot of tension behind it, since there's no buildup to it. Revolution has some buildup through the dialogue and description of the rebels. It's hard to say which is better since they're both good, but Revolution wins out by building tension from the get-go.

    Aside from that, there's no telling, since it's so early. My advice is that your main character needs someone to balance him out. He's very calculating and cold, and if he was paired with someone hot-tempered, caring, unhinged, cowardly, and/or stubborn, it could make for interesting character dynamics. Also, make sure to keep an eye on the tension, make sure to wind it up and let it loosen up periodically so the reader stays interested.
  6. Bardothren
    July 7th, 2017 5:57 PM
    ...busted. Yeah, I read it, and I thought it was quite good so far. I haven't posted a review yet, because I was short on time when I read it.
  7. Sheep
    June 5th, 2017 5:41 PM
    I really hope we get to see it wrap up with some romance. I mean come on! natsu x lucy before it ends pls
    how long've I been waiting for thissss
  8. Sheep
    June 5th, 2017 3:37 PM
    aaaw it's been awesome lately haha. Really really good episode, they hyped up Deku vs Todoroki so much and it lived up to expectations ~

    FT surprised me. :0 The constant fanservice has made me a lot less interested in the series than before but I'm still pretty hyped to see what happens to Natsu!!
  9. Sheep
    June 4th, 2017 6:41 PM
    dang congrats ^^ I'm fine!! mental health has been draining last few wks but I'm managing. why must it be monday tmrw ;w; did you see the new hero academia episode btw? hot dang 10/10
  10. Sheep
    June 4th, 2017 5:08 PM
    omg hey
    how u <3
  11. Aisu
    June 2nd, 2017 2:53 PM
    poppin bottles n muk cuz im graduated
  12. Taro Tanaka
    May 3rd, 2017 2:05 PM
    Taro Tanaka
    At least Scaramouche made it out alive. Chop-chop cottity chop-chop, babycakes!
  13. Taro Tanaka
    May 1st, 2017 2:13 PM
    Taro Tanaka
    I'm not gonna lie. I'm gonna miss his badass hair and beard combo. XDDDDD
  14. Taro Tanaka
    April 25th, 2017 6:30 AM
    Taro Tanaka
    Someone on Discord yesterday started making the theory that Ashi will die soon, now that she's supposedly fulfilled her role. So enjoy that booty while it lasts. XD
  15. Taro Tanaka
    April 24th, 2017 11:03 AM
    Taro Tanaka
    To his credit.. he did in fact look like a talking penis. I was thinking it, but I didn't expect him to say it. XDDDDD

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  • About Aisu
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    I'm irascible, sarcastic, and the epitome of bad adolescence.
    I love writing. I plan on being an author someday. Besides that, I draw comics and pixel art, even though I haven't done the latter in a couple of years now. I'm also an intermediate pianist and beginner guitarist.
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Emblem Showcase - 7 Awards
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Name: The Silver Pen
Woah! You managed to take second place in a writing competition! Keep up the great work and you'll take first in no time!
Issue time: July 23rd, 2014 7:52 PM
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Name: X/Y Test Taker
Thanks for taking the X/Y Anniversary Quiz! You may not have gotten the highest score in the class, but have an emblem anyway.
Issue time: October 13th, 2014 3:14 PM
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Name: Kalos Videographer
Thank you for participating in the X/Y PR Video Contest! Here's an emblem for your time and effort.
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Name: Ten Weeks of Anime Participant!
You participated in the first ever Ten Weeks of Anime! 素晴しい!
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Name: Ring ring! It's your friends calling!
& they want to thank you for keeping the good vibe at the Agora, GT12's Skype Chat. We all enjoyed your company.
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Name: Primordial Sea
You participated in the ORAS anniversary event, and answered at least 7 out of 14 questions! Thanks for counting down with us! It may have been a year, but there’s still an entire primordial sea of fun to be had in these games!
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