popplio25

Well in my experience working on too many things at once will usually result in nothing getting finished xD

Bored with the Essex one already? =p

I think you might wanna make a new post that doesn't have all the edit lines in them, it reads a bit messy tbh

also
''the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, after the events of legands arceus in the kanto region, made experiments on every pokemon in the region, be it wild or a trainer's pokemon. By using their specially designed signal ray, they made the Pokemon change their typings & overall appearance."

The bold part reads weird to me, as if the events of legends arceus took place in Kanto instead of Hisui? Dunno if the comma that comes after it is in the wrong place? So like:

''the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, after the events of legends arceus, in the kanto region made experiments on every pokemon in the region, be it wild or a trainer's pokemon. By using their specially designed signal ray, they made the Pokemon change their typings & overall appearance."

Also, it's just in the Kanto region now then, not Johto too?

I did, but it's not like I always have time to immediately think on them.
Tend to save it for last on my forum browse as idk how long it will take.
Sometimes I come up with them fast, others I easily sit there for an hour or more =p

Kinda curious why they would only go after wild mons though? =p
Any mons out of their ball could be fair game 😈
^^

Idk anything about randomizers, but if it's a matter of checking some boxes you can probably enable Celebi somewhere.
But like, legitly speaking in a non-customized game, Celebi is only still obtainable in the Crystal VC afaik.

You could either have the ray have a random effect on whatever its pointed at, or could have it be equipped with like a focusing prism or something like that, where the color or type of prism would affect what the targeted mon ends up as.

For just backlore for a playthrough I think it suffices.

It's just that when I read through it, it just feels like you avoid mentioning any specifics. Like for example:

"the team of the region, Team Fable, waaaaaaay in the past, made experiments on every 1st stage wild pokemon in the region, by using some kinda flute/some kind of signal ray to make them come to their hq hideout, "

Why not just mention a number or perhaps a general indication of when it was instead of saying 'waaaaaaaay in the past'? And then there's 'some kinda flute/some kind of signal ray'.
Personally I'd just be more specific, like "the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, made experiments on every 1st stage wild pokemon in the region. By using their specially designed signal ray they made the Pokemon come to their hideout."

Also this Team Fable doesn't have any mention of their motivation. It just says what they did, what the consequences are, and that they disbanded after their leader having a change of heart. Why did they do those experiments, what were they hoping to accomplish? Why did their leader have a change of heart? Did she realize something on her own or were there events that led up to it?
Team Fable in particular is the biggest thing here that lacks substance imo

Also...
"the legendaries & mythicals have also somehow been affected..... or maybe not.... "
which is it? xD Again a case of no specifics I guess. I guess you might not have made your mind up yet, but just mentioning how they were affected or how they avoided being affected would sound a lot better imo. Like, for example:
-"The legendaries & Mythicals couldn't resist Team Fable's signal ray and have all become more aggressive and undergone a type change."
-"The legendaries & Mythicals were able to resist Team Fable's signal ray and are unaffected by their experiments."

Anyway, I'm hardly a professional writer lol
Just my thoughts =3

I don't really hang out in the Writer's Lounge tbh =p

Seems a bit barebones atm, but not bad.

Sorry, I haven’t been thinking of nothing, sadly
I’ve been busy with school and stuff, so I didn’t have the time to think of anything, sorry!

Oh ok then
I can help you with it. But recently I’ve been having a creative block because, you know, school and stuff. But I’ll give you episode names when I get ideas for them. I promise I’ll think of something :)

What’s this?
Is it a new project of yours?

I think it was on the DS, Explorers of Sky.

Afraid I don't know anything about the Mystery Dungeon games at all.
I played one of them long ago and lost interest fairly quick and never finished it 😅

Sweet :)

Nice, then uoy''ll get them at least :)