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My apologies, I have no idea. I lack when it comes to writing. Nice avatar change btw.

i see cool but how would i mold that into the story i'm working on the next chapter now.

Well Arbok goal is to ulitmately eat Dawn and Misty right? I figured the easiest way to do that would be through Arbok using her hypnotic powers to take over Dawns mind and use her as an avatar in the same way Nightmare from Soul Calibur took control of Siegfried.

i like that but what do you mean by Arbok posses Dawn completely

Though i've never written fan fiction; I would suggest that now that Dawn is under Arboks hypnotic suggestion why not have her use Dawn to lure more victims in the same way a puppet master controls his/her puppets. Or you can even have Arbok posses Dawn complety. Misty would never see it coming and it would make for an interesting plot.

yeah but remember she was hypnotized. hey can you give me some ideas for chapter 3 i want this to go on as long as possible before Arbok Eats Dawn and Misty.

I liked it, Especially Dawn's mother's reaction to Arbok. O.O though i'd be hesitant to let a 60 foot tall talking Arbok with hypnotic powers message me.I would be thinking the entire time that i'd be crushed to death.

yep that's the one can you give me your input about it.

Cool i'll check it out. Arbok, Dawn, and Misty right?

cool i like to write fanfiction right now i have one completed and i'm working on another one.

I spend most my time either in the Pokemon Club,Gaming Central,Competitive battling, and Anime sections of the fourm. While I do check all other fourms I find that the listed are the ones I'm on the most.

nice to meet you to. i was wondering what do you like to do here on pokecommunity.