SonofWiseii

Well, if you come into any problems, just let me know.

Any other problems? Cause it shouldn't be freezing that often. Also, if you're interested, I recently came across a PDF version of the Pokemon HeartGold & SoulSilver Johto Strategy Guide. If you want, I can send you a link.

The game's still freezing on you?

Difficult win works for me. KO in the 2nd round, or should Theron lose and attack you with another Pokemon?

So, how do you want this battle to turn out?

I'm not telling you off; I don't have the ability to do tha, as I'm not a mod. I was just making a suggestion. I don't like seeing other people get in trouble, and you might've if you went on like that. ^_~

I feel so foolish. :( I should've read around a bit more. I may be new, but that's no excuse. You can be sure I'll never do something like that again.

If you reckon that fanfiction was 'awesome', I recommend you read around a little to see what the standard is. Valentine's Anima Ex Machina is a good fic to look at. As well as that, there is a sticky thread in the Writers' Lounge called "Reviewing and You: The PC Version", which I highly recommend you take a look at before reviewing another fanfiction.