You have fifty points now. Also, I'll be sure to make those edits you wanted me too. I have another question, and excuse me for being kind of rude, but do you think I might be able to join in on your little adventure thing? If you say yes, I don't mind being some pointless guard or something. Ah, and for the record, I'm quite capable of making a huge post like you, so if that's a requirement I really don't mind. I'm just really into your story at this moment. I was super curious about Oddish's head, and now I found the explanation for it which is cool. (The poor thing. )
I don't see why not. However, I would like to discuss this in further detail later on the line so as not to have the entire storyline flop or become so rigid it no longer flows naturally. For starters, let's see what kind of trainer you come up with! A Young Trainer with an affinity for shorts? A bug catcher that refuses to evolve his Caterpie because he hates Metapods? A Roughneck? A Baller? Swimmer? Don't worry, if you're not sure how they'd fit into my puzzle, I have scissors to make them fit.
Tell me his stories or you know, what he does when he's not working as a pizza delivery boy because he needs money for his Aunt's medicine. Since I'm a long time role player, I do, as you said, have slightly higher expectations. They're not unattainable, and are actually quite exciting and easy to obtain through sheer imagination and a little bit of writing skills (I still play RP when gunning down filthy xenos on the tabletop), and it's a tad more difficult than the spoken word, of course. I'd mainly like to see how you can handle a certain archetype and situations you didn't necessarily create.
If you're willing: As an exercise I'm putting you into the boots of the first Rocket Grunt ever encountered in Mt. Moon (cave). You have yourself a Sandshrew, a Ratatata and a Zubat at your disposal all at lvl.11. On your routine patrol of the cave you encounter a brat that struts right into your business. You fighting a losing battle. I leave what Pokémon Red has up to you. You also have a whip:
I don't know why you have the whip, but have fun. It can be lengthy, it can be only a couple paragraphs. As long as it's imaginative enough to not snore your reader.
Also, I would like to tell first off that it may be a few posts before I can encounter you, so if you would like to wait it might be along wait. So I suggest setting out and doing your own thing perhaps. Maybe it's a story in the past, or the present?
So long as it's a bit of a story you should be fine and clear: "I walked my Slowbro out to get the mail. Man, Slowbro is soooo slow. I hit him on the head with the newspaper and he doesn't even notice until we're back inside. The end." is not an acceptable way to play the game. Although I began to chuckle at why I'd hit the Slowbro on the head with the newspaper in the first place. Why did I do that? Explain! It's an acceptable opening sentence, but I'd base it in the low C grade.
So what I'm saying is for now: do whatever the hell you want. Let me see your mind and imagination at the workplace. One last, but final rambling note: I like to play dirty. Things tend to get far worse before they get better when I write. Depending on how long this can go, people can get seriously hurt, maimed, or outright killed. I'm still pondering how far I'm going to take this, you see, as people tend to freak out when Pokémon are harmed. But to me, that's the nature of the game. So in short: 'Boy, that escalated quickly.' can apply in these situations.