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  1. ReKoil
    May 29th, 2022 5:38 AM
    I did, but it's not like I always have time to immediately think on them.
    Tend to save it for last on my forum browse as idk how long it will take.
    Sometimes I come up with them fast, others I easily sit there for an hour or more =p
  2. ReKoil
    May 25th, 2022 1:46 PM
    Kinda curious why they would only go after wild mons though? =p
    Any mons out of their ball could be fair game 😈
  3. ReKoil
    May 25th, 2022 12:23 PM
    Idk anything about randomizers, but if it's a matter of checking some boxes you can probably enable Celebi somewhere.
    But like, legitly speaking in a non-customized game, Celebi is only still obtainable in the Crystal VC afaik.

    You could either have the ray have a random effect on whatever its pointed at, or could have it be equipped with like a focusing prism or something like that, where the color or type of prism would affect what the targeted mon ends up as.
  4. ReKoil
    May 25th, 2022 8:52 AM
    For just backlore for a playthrough I think it suffices.

    It's just that when I read through it, it just feels like you avoid mentioning any specifics. Like for example:

    "the team of the region, Team Fable, waaaaaaay in the past, made experiments on every 1st stage wild pokemon in the region, by using some kinda flute/some kind of signal ray to make them come to their hq hideout, "

    Why not just mention a number or perhaps a general indication of when it was instead of saying 'waaaaaaaay in the past'? And then there's 'some kinda flute/some kind of signal ray'.
    Personally I'd just be more specific, like "the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, made experiments on every 1st stage wild pokemon in the region. By using their specially designed signal ray they made the Pokemon come to their hideout."

    Also this Team Fable doesn't have any mention of their motivation. It just says what they did, what the consequences are, and that they disbanded after their leader having a change of heart. Why did they do those experiments, what were they hoping to accomplish? Why did their leader have a change of heart? Did she realize something on her own or were there events that led up to it?
    Team Fable in particular is the biggest thing here that lacks substance imo

    "the legendaries & mythicals have also somehow been affected..... or maybe not.... "
    which is it? xD Again a case of no specifics I guess. I guess you might not have made your mind up yet, but just mentioning how they were affected or how they avoided being affected would sound a lot better imo. Like, for example:
    -"The legendaries & Mythicals couldn't resist Team Fable's signal ray and have all become more aggressive and undergone a type change."
    -"The legendaries & Mythicals were able to resist Team Fable's signal ray and are unaffected by their experiments."

    Anyway, I'm hardly a professional writer lol
    Just my thoughts =3
  5. ReKoil
    May 24th, 2022 11:18 AM
    I don't really hang out in the Writer's Lounge tbh =p

    Seems a bit barebones atm, but not bad.
  6. Cosmega
    May 16th, 2022 2:20 PM
    Sorry, I haven’t been thinking of nothing, sadly
    I’ve been busy with school and stuff, so I didn’t have the time to think of anything, sorry!
  7. Cosmega
    April 7th, 2022 3:40 PM
    Oh ok then
    I can help you with it. But recently I’ve been having a creative block because, you know, school and stuff. But I’ll give you episode names when I get ideas for them. I promise I’ll think of something :)
  8. Cosmega
    April 7th, 2022 1:40 PM
    What’s this?
    Is it a new project of yours?
  9. ReKoil
    April 4th, 2022 12:16 PM
    I think it was on the DS, Explorers of Sky.
  10. ReKoil
    April 4th, 2022 9:39 AM
    Afraid I don't know anything about the Mystery Dungeon games at all.
    I played one of them long ago and lost interest fairly quick and never finished it 😅
  11. Free3
    November 8th, 2020 9:58 AM
    Sweet :)
  12. Free3
    October 24th, 2020 11:28 PM
    Nice, then uoy''ll get them at least :)
  13. Free3
    October 24th, 2020 6:30 AM
    Alright, why dont you just get the Games then?
    Your pkmn are safe here with me till then :)
  14. Free3
    October 8th, 2020 10:10 AM
    Of Course, No problem
  15. Free3
    October 8th, 2020 6:04 AM


    Just let me know when to trade

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