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  1. Lambda
    March 19th, 2011 11:25 AM
    Wow i liked you story "Young Rockets" very much great job!
  2. Buoysel
    July 3rd, 2010 10:54 AM
    I wanted to congratulate you on your story. We get people here all the time who post a story and at the first sign of someone saying they need to improve they give up. You, you on the other hand not only edited your story, you made it much better. There was at least one Grammar error, but as long as you don't give up, people are willing to help you. I suggest that you find a beta reader to help you iron out all grammar and spelling mistakes. You can find out more about them here:

    If you have any questions, Fell free to contact me.

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  • About feebakarp
    I'm an average teenager, one of the few in my neighbourhood who still loves pokemon.
    South Africa
    Male ♂
    Favorite Pokémon
    Charizard, Blaziken and Infernape


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  • Last Activity: June 8th, 2014 2:00 AM
  • Join Date: July 3rd, 2010
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