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  1. Buoysel
    November 24th, 2008 9:43 PM
    Oh wow, what languages do you speak?

    I think staying on topic was out the door at the "orgy" phase
  2. Buoysel
    November 24th, 2008 7:08 PM
    I'm enjoying my time off, I was just wondering how its going in general.

    Still liking the conversation in the lounge?
  3. Buoysel
    November 24th, 2008 10:02 AM
    Hey Solovino, how's it going?
  4. An-chan
    November 23rd, 2008 2:36 PM
    A-ha, I just found out that you read the whole Journey to Isle of Jade. I don't know many people who read the whole thing, and I can't remeber getting any feedback from you... So, tell me, does my memory fail me or did you give me any comments about that fic?

    If you did, I'm sorry for not remembering and I shall go and look for that comment right away. If you did not, I think I'm going to pester you with my army of insane Sentret with flamethrowers until you tell me your whole opinion about that damned fic! xD
  5. Buoysel
    November 20th, 2008 8:56 AM
    Thanks for giving me time off, I was just wondering.

    I need to get a hold of my other client, I have yet to receive anything from him.
  6. Buoysel
    November 19th, 2008 6:31 PM
    Hows chapter 2 coming along?

    I finally started on a Fic that I had been wanting to write some time, I just couldn't come up with a plot.
  7. Buoysel
    November 12th, 2008 7:11 PM
    Okay, I will tape my eyelids open if I have too to stay awake to make sure that I get the story back to you before I go to sleep.
  8. Buoysel
    November 12th, 2008 6:52 PM
    I am working on your chapter, you can beat me later for taking so long.

    Anyway where are you going to end the chapter, I need to know where I can stop editing. Are you going to finish the chapter just before the flashback?
  9. Buoysel
    November 11th, 2008 10:23 PM
    I'm really sorry its taking me so long, Its supposed to be rainy tomorrow, and I don't have to work, so I'll make sure I get the rest of that chapter back to you.
  10. Buoysel
    November 9th, 2008 9:25 AM
    I have no idea what you mean by the last part, and that was my almost exact reaction.

    I was like "Ohoo that has toaahhahahahaha."
  11. billie_lightning
    November 9th, 2008 12:22 AM
    My character is originally from Lavender So they could connect through that maybe

    don't forget Brock! He's goin' down! >D
  12. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 11:29 PM
    I like funny things, I also like Buizel, so...

    Maybe its getting attacked, either way it's getting its but burned.
  13. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 9:02 PM
    I have an answer to your question.

    I am torn really, I think that either place would be a good place to stop the chapter. The first one is great, it leaves the reader wondering.

    However; the way you end it is... great. It shows some character development, and a little but of humor. I think that Syd's recation could be worked on, but it's still worth keeping, so I'm sorry I am not much help here.

    Either way, the chapter ends with enough of a cliff hanger for the reader to be chomping at the bit for the next chapter.
  14. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 8:49 PM
    Sorry its taking so long with beating, I am working on it.
  15. billie_lightning
    November 8th, 2008 8:10 PM
    if it goes against your character, you don't have to. Or we could write it in a way that made it seem forced, lol.
    "Where are the Vine Whips coming from!?!?!"

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