Pardon my curiosity but have you ever thought about publishing an actual novel? I'm just wondering because it seems like something you would do. :) You're a good writer, though not all good writers get or go into publishing. I'm just wondering if it's crossed your mind :)
:) :P I'm good at adapting to advice now XD. Reviews that both praise and instruct are very useful. I will likely have yours resent to you tomorrow when I'll have time to make sure it gets sent properly.