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  1. Chalifoux
    November 16th, 2013 2:13 PM
    Chalifoux
    Yeah... the appearance is still very, very short and so is the personality. And if you keep them like that, not only will others have trouble picturing how your character looks like, but you'll also have trouble trying to have him respond to whatever me or Songbird throw at him. I don't ask for something this long (but if you can do something as detailed and descriptive then by all means go ahead) and, to be honest, something as simple and well-fleshed as this could suffice.

    As for your new team, you might want to change it, as you have a case of "too much of a good thing". Three starters before the RP even begins (or a four member team, for that matter) is definitely a no-no. Plus, what fun is there to already have 3 starter Pokémon when they will show up in the wild at some point in the RP for you to catch? Lastly, A regular Flabébé is okay, but making it shiny is... kinda overtone. I could allow it, but, you'd need a better, improved and by far more detailed sign-up that proves to be worthy of already having a shiny Pokémon.

    Plus, I don't really believe a 12 year old could beat all the gyms in Kalos... It just seems a tab bit illogic and, again, defeats the purpose of earning gym badges if he's already earned Kalos' eight.

    And trust me, I do not intend to offend or upset you with this, but a sign-up sheet takes time to be neatly developed and, to be honest, Songbird would have dealt some more brutal critiques than I did just now...
  2. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 11:12 PM
    Chalifoux
    I'm not trying to make it a hassle or to annoy you, tho. It's more fun if you earn your achievements at the RP and not before it :P
  3. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 11:06 PM
    Chalifoux
    The only thing I have trouble with by now is... winning the Kalos League o.O
    Putting yourself in a Trainer's shoes... how long and harsh wouldn't the road to each gym be? Furthermore, battling every leader that increases in strength the further you go? I'd get beating Viola, but then you have people like Wulfric and Olympia who are quite adept at being Gym Leaders. Maybe it would of actually taken him years to successfully earn all badges? Or at least a share of them? And even if he had made it to the league, I said before that canon from X/Y cannot apply here as to not break continuity, so there wouldn't be Shauna to give him HM Waterfall and stuff like that, so, how would he go around the region where there are mountains to climb, places to fly to, puddles to swim across and the like?

    Now, assuming he overcame all these difficulties, how exactly did he "struggle" against the E4? Let's put ourselves again at a Trainer's place. Here they lie, the E4, Trainers whom have been there for years and are known to rarely loose (if at all). You have Wikstrom, whose iron defenses are hard to break and most of times end up ravaging one's team badly if they're not careful. With some planning he can be overthrown. And then, what about Malva? Her being hotheaded as is means she relies on strength: her pokemon hit and they hit hard. Unless your Pokemon are fast as light and can soak their way thru her high offensive, then she's quiet the opponent. Drasna is quite cheerful for a Dragon-type E4, but she's one of the strongest Trainers within the four, and he Dragons do not hesitate to hit of defend themselves accordingly to their threats. And finally Siebold... he's Siebold. Nuff' said.

    Now, assuming he's the lovechild of Champion Cynthia and Chuck Norris and he's beaten them all: What about Diantha? She's not the champion for no reason. Yes, she has Hawlucha, but she's also got Goodra and lord dangit that thing has a base defense almost as high as Ho-Oh's. And then Mega Gardevoir and her Pixilated moves.

    I'm not saying it's unlikely for the above to be bested and defeated. But all in all, having someone who's /already/ won a Pokémon League beats the whole purpose of the RP that is to improve, become stronger and in time beat the League. I can allow him being beaten at the league or not reaching it at all, but nothing else, sadly...
  4. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 10:36 PM
    Chalifoux
    I'd like to see a more detailed appearance, mostly about body complexion, skin, hgow his face looks and stuff.
    We can't actually allow Mega Rings, tho, there are events resolving about Mega Pokémon planned already.

    I also cannot allow canon characters, for the sake of not destroying the games' continuity, so Serena needs another name or has to go. The Rhyhorn race part is okay, but the backstory is awfully short. For an instance, how did he end up in Hoenn if he's from Kalos. Plus, what exactly has happened to him in both regions? Did he challenge the gyms? Was he successful? Be reasonable, tho, not all ten year old kids become Champions :P

    The personality could also be extended considerably, perhaps with a psychological profile or just a wider range of reactions and behaviors in general.

    Also, why take Junior the Chespin and not Chesnaught herself? Seems non-logic, so could you please dwell into it and explain fursther?

    How did this bandana look like and how did they come around wearing it in this Snivy Gang to begin with? Was it man-made, or... ? Also, you shouldn't reference url stuff in a Pokémon RP, because New York doesn't exist there (either Castelia City or New Tork City could make for decent replacements, tho).

    It overall has potential, but it needs to be further developed upon. For reference, why not look into the SUs of those who have been accepted? :3
  5. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 10:25 PM
    Chalifoux
    Hmm, odd indeed. She /is/ quite active, tho, so we shouldn't have a problem with that :3

    Sure, why not :D
  6. Sniper
    November 15th, 2013 10:17 PM
    Sniper
    You know, I can't make it without the rom. I need it.
    So I'll know the NPC's number and such. PM me the rom.
  7. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 10:16 PM
    Chalifoux
    :P Not that surprising seeing her avatar, tho. Two girls and all.

    Correct.

    Then you might be looking at the wrong profile or something? Her being in invisible mode means the last activity but of her profile page does not show up to others.
  8. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 10:12 PM
    Chalifoux
    Lol xD

    Well, then you'll have some extra training to do xD

    Sweet! :3

    Alrighty then :3

    What you talking about? Songbird was online an hour ago and I even talked to her via PMs xD
    She goes around PC in invisible mode, is all :P
  9. Sniper
    November 15th, 2013 10:11 PM
    Sniper
    I'm not that busy, sure why not.
  10. Sniper
    November 15th, 2013 10:05 PM
    Sniper
    I'd appreciate that. But make sure I'd help you real good xD
  11. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 10:00 PM
    Chalifoux
    That should feel pretty awesome xD

    Just you wait until Moth Balls evolves, then it shall kill everything!

    Hooray :D

    As for that question, I'd say one of those could be caught at some point and the other could be your starter, although first, you'd need to let know the other GM of the Roleplay, Songbird, about you trying to sign up for Snivy/Chespin, and, if we both agree on it being good enough, you'd be allowed to join with said starter :3
  12. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 9:48 PM
    Chalifoux
    Yeah, that software is actually pretty neat xD

    That is actually a pretty rad team :D

    Click this sentence!
    Although the sign-up sheet is far more extensive than Mystery Dungeon's and needs to be considerably detailed, just so you know :3
  13. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 9:30 PM
    Chalifoux
    Well, I use a Mac and there really isn't a VBALink that is supported by it (there is another way of running it, tho, but it involves messing with some coding that could kill everything in the progress and is also quite tedious) so yeah, sorry about that :[

    And I gotz a bunch of Pidove and Lillipup in Pokemon Y cause they're so darn adorable :3

    Also, I just opened spots on my Roleplay, in case you're still interested
  14. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 9:25 PM
    Chalifoux
    I don't sadly :<
    Why?
  15. Chalifoux
    November 15th, 2013 9:06 PM
    Chalifoux
    Livin in a lonely world :3

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