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PsychoticMoonlight

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  1. Nathan
    November 18th, 2013 4:51 AM
    Nathan
    o.o

    I've been fine, you?
  2. Nathan
    November 17th, 2013 7:30 PM
    Nathan
    Nm either, going to sleep.
  3. RecursiveAcronym
    November 17th, 2013 6:25 PM
    RecursiveAcronym
    Ehhhh. It makes more sense to me to do the reverse.
  4. RecursiveAcronym
    November 17th, 2013 6:11 PM
    RecursiveAcronym
    That's really not a big thing.
  5. RecursiveAcronym
    November 17th, 2013 5:23 PM
    RecursiveAcronym
    For what?
  6. RecursiveAcronym
    November 17th, 2013 4:52 PM
    RecursiveAcronym
    I mainly just need ideas, a direction to go. The only idea I have is someone obsessed with/scared of birds.
  7. RecursiveAcronym
    November 17th, 2013 4:43 PM
    RecursiveAcronym
    Mmm. I was considering it as a Ashikabi, but I'd need a decent character idea, though.
  8. Ahri
    November 17th, 2013 1:36 PM
    Ahri
    Glad I could help ^^
  9. Ahri
    November 17th, 2013 1:33 PM
    Ahri
    Well, take a look at my SU in the thread ^^
    See how there's a space between every new paragraph?
    Speech lines also get their own lines and you should leave a space between them.
    For example:

    It was a sunny day. The breeze carried the scent of roses across the village. The birds were chirping cheerfully in the trees all around and children were playing their silly games under the supervision of their parents.

    In a corner of the park, a little girl sat on a tiny, red, bench, writing in a leather-binded book. She had no friends, neither did she intend on making any. She was happy being on her own.

    Suddenly, the shadow of a person blocked her view and, as she looked up, she saw a person standing there that couldn't help but ask:

    "What are you doing here alone?"

    "It's none of your business!" the girl snapped at him rudely.

    The stranger shook his head and sighed as he moved away. She was a hopeless cause, this girl...
    Apparently, that's proper spacing xD
  10. Nathan
    November 17th, 2013 10:35 AM
    Nathan
    Sup?
  11. Ahri
    November 16th, 2013 12:56 PM
    Ahri
    No problem xD Added you to the list as well ^^ My only issue is with the way you space your paragraphs and the way you integrate speech lines into them. But I've seen you do the same thing in other RPs as well, so I'm guessing that's just your style ^^ So I won't ask you to change it unless it gets really messy at some point ^^
  12. Ahri
    November 16th, 2013 12:00 PM
    Ahri
    Other than the tiny thingy at the end of your RP sample, everything else is great ^-^
  13. Ahri
    November 16th, 2013 11:59 AM
    Ahri
    Hey Dark? xD You're gonna have to roll back your roleplay sample a wee bit xD
    Cause obtaining the pokedex and pokegear and the whole Lab stuff's gonna happen in Act 1 Scene 1 xD You could change it to something like you've been contacted by Lyra and she wants to give you a pokedex and send you on a journey and whatever xD I should mention that in the first post >u<
  14. Nathan
    November 16th, 2013 11:44 AM
    Nathan
    Yo!
  15. Ahri
    November 16th, 2013 6:19 AM
    Ahri
    xDD Guess that stuff happens at times xD lol

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  • About PsychoticMoonlight
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    Pronouns
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    Resident Psychotic
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    Naughty
    Also Known As
    Lu
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    Gible + Evos
    Crobat
    Gastly + Evos
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    Lu
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    Lu
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