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  1. Nuclear Chicken
    July 9th, 2015 6:38 PM
    Nuclear Chicken
    Wow, that's awesome! I kind of want to branch out because violinists are a dime a dozen, but a violinist that can also play viola and cello? That's less common.
  2. Nuclear Chicken
    July 9th, 2015 6:31 PM
    Nuclear Chicken
    Cool! I've been playing for 3 years now. I want to learn Cello and Viola as well, but I haven't gotten around to it yet :/.
  3. Nuclear Chicken
    July 9th, 2015 6:02 PM
    Nuclear Chicken
    Oooh! A visitor message! I shall frame it <3. I'm fine. Enjoying Midnight Crew Maf & Gods Among Us. GAU more, however. MCM is kind of confusing. How are you?
  4. Somewhere_
    July 9th, 2015 5:35 PM
    Somewhere_
    I tried to use repetition, vivid images, and maybe some foreshadowing. Try this link if the other paste bin does not work:

    http://pastebin.com/tkQzkkjH
  5. Somewhere_
    July 9th, 2015 5:31 PM
    Somewhere_
    I changed my mind and decided to write a poem about this scene in Attack on Titan (only spoils the first half of the first episode):

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ka-DN2CMdg

    I write as Eren, the main character here:

    http://pastebin.com/QMeCmchM
  6. Somewhere_
    July 9th, 2015 5:00 PM
    Somewhere_
    Does Ampharos get sick, like in the Johto games? He better not die! Link please, I have to read this!

    I am starting my poem now!

    So, how has your summer been so far?
  7. Somewhere_
    July 9th, 2015 4:30 PM
    Somewhere_
    Lol, Mareep and Ampharos are my favorite electric types (duh).

    I am going to try my best to write a poem tonight! I think it will be a fan-fic for Moonrise, but Ill explain it briefly.
  8. Somewhere_
    July 9th, 2015 3:13 PM
    Somewhere_
    I thought I friended you. Eh, doesnt matter. You know the drill.

    Mareep
    Anime
    Reading
    Awesomesauce
  9. Mana
    July 8th, 2015 7:44 AM
    Mana
    Thanks Bard! :)
  10. Somewhere_
    July 8th, 2015 6:39 AM
    Somewhere_
    Thanks!
  11. Somewhere_
    July 8th, 2015 5:25 AM
    Somewhere_
    Well, thanks for the help. If its ok, can you read my next poem I write for a peer-review?
  12. Somewhere_
    July 8th, 2015 5:19 AM
    Somewhere_
    You're right, I find myself forcing words because of the rhyming that I wouldnt normally use or dont fit too well in the poem.

    Then what are prose stories then? Unconventional story lines?
  13. Somewhere_
    July 8th, 2015 5:10 AM
    Somewhere_
    What is prose exactly? I have heard that word before, but it was in regards to stories, not poems.

    I like to rhyme in my poems. I tend to go ababcdcdefefgg because I write in sonnets, but I also like aabccd eefggh rhyming schemes.
  14. Somewhere_
    July 8th, 2015 4:21 AM
    Somewhere_
    Never played Mafia on the forums haha. It sounds like fun, and I hope you dont die! :)

    You seem really passionate about those fan-fics! I wish I had the motivation and time to work on them because I am a decent writer with decent ideas...

    If you are familiar with poems, how do you add literary devices without randomness (if that makes sense)? I like writing in shakespearean sonnets, but I am not the best at using the literary devices.
  15. Somewhere_
    July 7th, 2015 8:14 PM
    Somewhere_
    I think its about time for a formal greeting.

    Hello, I am BadSheep. And you are?

    I think its cool you play the cello. I am not musically talented at all. So whats up?

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Posted January 5th, 2018 at 9:51 AM by Bardothren Comments 0
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Hello everyone, first blog post out of me for 2018. I have recently finished Juuni Taisen, an anime about twelve warriors of the zodiac in a free-for-all to the death for one rules-free wish. I enjoyed it enough to see it through to the end, but after a few episodes, I noticed numerous glaring flaws with its storytelling. This won't be covering animation or voice acting, just the show's story.

A typical Juuni Taisen episode goes something like this:

Step 1: show...

Posted November 15th, 2017 at 5:44 PM by Bardothren Comments 0
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Holy cow, it's been over a year since I touched this thing. Time flies. Anyways, I had a conversation with myself, which is extremely sad, about how in the Pokemon anime, every reaction to food is either complete bliss or complete disgust, with no middle ground or variation on those two types of reactions. So, instead of leaving that as a sad conversation with myself because I'm a complete loner, I decided to turn that into consolidating my thoughts for a forum post.

So, here I...

Posted October 23rd, 2016 at 4:36 PM by Bardothren Comments 2
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Huh, this thing still exists? Well, might as well make a random post in it since I feel in the mood. As far as a quick update on my life goes, not much has changed. I still have my job as a QA tech and I'm starting to build up some savings for the day I move out of my parents' house.

And I suppose it's only fitting, in Halloween spirit, to talk about the spookiest phenomenon on the planet.

Death


When it comes to making your audience care about the characters...

Posted August 2nd, 2016 at 3:56 PM by Bardothren Comments 0
Wow... it's been four months since I posted here, and to be completely honest, I'm not surprised. I had a feeling I'd go missing one of these days, and I was running out of things to talk about. So... here I am.

Time for some updates. If you're one of the ten (maybe?) people who actually remember my stories, then you're probably wondering what happened to my latest project, Bird Made of Ice. Well, it's cancelled for now.

Allow me to explain: I had a very hard time...

Posted April 1st, 2016 at 6:32 PM by Bardothren Comments 0
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Hello there! First off, no, I'm not dead, thanks for caring >:( Second off, wow, viewership took a nosedive in March... not entirely sure to make of that considering my second post hit over two thousand views. Third, no, this is not an April Fools prank, although I was considering it.

As for a brief run-through of the last three weeks of my life, all I did over spring break was eat, sleep, and play Starcraft on the N64 emulation on my computer... which is extremely bizarre when...
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