Somewhere_

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  1. Bardothren
    July 10th, 2015 7:12 AM
    Bardothren
    The second and third stanzas definitely need work, along with the first half of stanza four. My advice is to show, not tell. For example, instead of saying that the Titan takes pleasure in killing humans, show how it dances around on the corpses, and the different ways they eat humans. Attack on Titan was so powerfully moving because they didn't tell you that Titans took pleasure in slaughter, it's because they showed it.
  2. DyingWillFlareon
    July 9th, 2015 9:49 PM
    DyingWillFlareon
    UGGH I DID IT :P My ideas were either Chain Me Maybe or Catch Me Maybe. I think there was something else but it's like midnight I have no idea lol.

    [s[I TOTALLY THOUGHT OF THAT SCENE TOO[/s]

    Btw since I'm failing at other shiny methods, I decided to Masuda Method breed for a shiny Pichu. Since I have a Light Ball, all of them have Volt Tackle, thought I'd offer you oen since the first box is done and was shinyless. :3
  3. Sun
    July 9th, 2015 6:59 PM
    Sun
    lol. But seriously there's a guy who's in his 60+ and climbed the Everest.

    I believe creating a shape on ceramics is not as easy as it looks like, knowing myself I might mess up the whole thing. Lmao

    Hahaha, you're a competitive battler! Marlon should have a Alomomola with that set, that should be able to upset a lot of Trainers!~
  4. Sheep
    July 9th, 2015 6:56 PM
    Sheep
    my mom's nice and usually understanding while my dad still acts like he lives in a cave lol. he's kind of "wild" so to speak and jokes around a lot, which can be annoying. :( omg nooo i'd be terrified of that how do you survive
  5. Kotone
    July 9th, 2015 6:36 PM
    Kotone
    prettiest profile and the skype i think idk
  6. Bardothren
    July 9th, 2015 6:26 PM
    Bardothren
    Took a look at your poem. The repetition is nice at times, but it's also a bit heavy-handed. It sounds pompous and majestic after a while, which I think is the wrong tone for this kind of material. It's also too abstract - if you can't draw it, that's abstract. Words like pleasure, legacy, moments, future, etc. are intangible and don't contribute to the visceral experience of the poem.

    Not all poems are about the visceral senses that words can invoke, but a fair number of contemporary poetry uses concrete details to create sensations within the minds of the readers, thus eliciting an emotional response. I would advise focusing on everything that Eren would feel at that moment, what he would see and hear, etc.

    And here's the link you wanted, for Through the Scope. It's also in my signature, the first half of the quote. It's a three-hour read from another reviewer I heard from (his reviews are hilarious, by the way) so bear that in mind when you start... you might not be able to stop. ;)
  7. Blueredemption
    July 9th, 2015 6:11 PM
    Blueredemption
    i have had that problem before. I'll be honest, i am usually in CP classes. Never had a AP before, so no calc for me, i just need it to qualify for a bunch of scholarships. I should handle it well, had the teacher before too. Oh, but i have had multiple honors and a duel enrollment :P. What was your language?
  8. Blueredemption
    July 9th, 2015 5:19 PM
    Blueredemption
    I have AP Stats next year, so that on top of your normal summer stuff. yesh, it's been a while hasn't it? i think i was joining because i didn't know anybody to talk Pokemon with. At least it wasn't for ROM Hacking hacking.
  9. Sheep
    July 9th, 2015 5:01 PM
    Sheep
    Yeah I understood that, just my mom (who is the main cooker here) would never wanna cook that long. dad though.. yeah he makes lazy food like potatoes and pasta, not too creative hehe. xD your mom sounds so fun!
  10. Sheep
    July 9th, 2015 4:36 PM
    Sheep
    wow, that long? My mom wouldn't want to cook that long, especially after working most of the week. and that is so cute your mom should become my friend. 8D
  11. Bardothren
    July 9th, 2015 4:34 PM
    Bardothren
    Sounds good. Wait, you like Ampharos too? Um... just be sure not to read Chapter Nine of Through the Scope. An Ampharos... um... has an accident - yeah, an accident! Definitely... an accident. obvious attempt to advertise fan-fic is obvious
  12. Sheep
    July 9th, 2015 4:16 PM
    Sheep
    that sounds delicious. lasagna is an amazing thing but it takes long to cook so we don't make it often here. ;w; and my god really? I wish my parents would watch the same things as me hahaha.
  13. Bardothren
    July 9th, 2015 3:17 PM
    Bardothren
    Mareep's okay, anime and reading are awesome, and awesomesauce... is awesome, I guess? Well, Ampharos is my favorite electric type, so I guess that makes Mareep my second-favorite.
  14. Kotone
    July 9th, 2015 12:44 PM
    Kotone
    it's alright.

    nothing much just been busy with the get together on here hbu
  15. Sefuree
    July 9th, 2015 7:03 AM
    Sefuree
    Yo.

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    I'm a Christian college student working on a major in Public Policy. I spend a lot of time studying and hanging out with my friends.
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    -I enjoy playing Pokemon, Minecraft, and Super Smash Bros Ultimate!
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    -I journal often.
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