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  1. txteclipse
    September 6th, 2009 11:52 AM
    txteclipse
    Yeah, I pretty much figured that. It's kind of what makes the story unique in its own way.
  2. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 10:29 PM
    Bay Alexison
    You're welcome! Yeah, I think you should allude the medical condition in the first part of the story, but don't worry about it too much. If you do manage to make a revised version, let me know.
  3. Astinus
    September 3rd, 2009 10:06 PM
    Astinus
    Yours was one of the ones I didn't have time to review. For the raw scores, it was:

    Grammar - 10
    Literary elements - 9
    Use of Prompt - 10

    Total score - 29/30

    *thinks back* If I remember this correctly, the one point was taken off since I wanted more tear-jerking emotions, to make the character's plight (I'm horrible with names), the one that was going to die, more powerful or something. Like, make him more "I'm not going to be sad that that's wrong with me!" I think that's what it was.

    Anyhow, that's my score for you, so there you go.
  4. Venia Silente
    September 3rd, 2009 8:36 PM
    Venia Silente
    Well, it isn't. Spanish (latin-american) is, and here the closest we have is the translation of either "frightful" or "intense", so it kinda make it feel weird. I have yet to adjust to so many English idioms...
  5. Gummy
    September 3rd, 2009 8:28 PM
    Gummy
    No problem; I've always been a huge fan of Fanfiction and even used to write a little back in the day.

    To get scores out faster, I had to skimp on actual reviewing and just focused on scoring. If you want an actual review, I'll probably have to re read your story. :<
  6. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 8:25 PM
    Bay Alexison
    Also, sorry for keep ninjiaing you. :x I'm here so might as well respond to VMs as soon as possible. ;
  7. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 8:21 PM
    Bay Alexison
    The links should be working now. And yeah, not sure why that story's link went weird all of a sudden. Thanks anyway for letting me know.
  8. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 8:15 PM
    Bay Alexison
    Thank you! Just trying to fix up a few things, so I might have made a mistake on Silver's e1337. XD
  9. Venia Silente
    September 3rd, 2009 8:14 PM
    Venia Silente
    Don't worry, take your time, everyone's pretty tired and happy now. Not necessarily in that order... :D

    I may be missing something in translation, but is that "terrific" terrific as in "wow" or terrific as in "whaaaa!"? I never intended for it to go either way, so I'm a bit surprised if I missed something obvious in the perspective I tried to draw. I would be glad to hear your input.

    Also, next year, yes all the way, we'll gonna rock. Or at least we're gonna tie second place with only Shrike above, how does that sound?
  10. Shrike Flamestar
    September 3rd, 2009 7:38 PM
    Shrike Flamestar
    Heh, I have probably the lowest self-esteem, yet also possibly the largest ego, of anyone here. :D I guess it's due to my troubled, n00bish past with writing. I mean, it's been over eight years since I first started writing but I still remember those early years all too well. The trouble I had when I first started posing my stories online doesn't help, my first fic on Serebii even being closed for breaking the rules. Although, it was just the one chapter per post rule and so not too serious. It still broke my heart, though.

    Congratulations on your part for placing in the rather crowded area at the top end of the scores! As this coming weekend is Labor Day weekend I hopefully won't be too busy with homework or anything and so perhaps I can read the high-scoring entries while relaxing at home...
  11. Venia Silente
    September 3rd, 2009 6:43 PM
    Venia Silente
    Well, I tried for it to be more of the "amusingly good" variety. As for your story, I can only say, Wow. It walked a very thin line between tearjerking and inspirational.
  12. txteclipse
    September 3rd, 2009 6:33 PM
    txteclipse
    Ok, ok! Just gimme a minute here...
  13. Venia Silente
    September 3rd, 2009 5:23 PM
    Venia Silente
    icomeanon6:

    Good work with securing the 4th place at the SWC. I'm hoping to read your entry!
  14. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 10:25 AM
    Bay Alexison
    Okay, I replied. Hope I don't get strangled by the fans. :O

    And yeah, agree to that. Reminds me of when K-ON! was huge with the PC members. I watched one episode of it and not sure why many people are so hyped about the characters. I guess I should watch further into the series, but at the moment it's not interesting to me.
  15. Bay Alexison
    September 3rd, 2009 8:27 AM
    Bay Alexison
    Haha, have to say I agree with that that Lelouch and Light are jerks. Heck, I only watched the first two episodes of Code Geass and already I think Lelouch is being a jerk. XD

    Will reply to that thread after I watched more of Code Geass. XD;

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