...Actually, could post in the thread to indicate that your SU is done? I like being able to post in the thread with a big, bold accepted, it's fun. And the other players probably need to know it's finished, too.
That's fine. I still dread the personality section the most myself, and actually hit a fair bit of a roadblock with that in my SU - especially when I remembered I had to do four of them. Generally the way I do it is come up with a history and then sort of figure out what character traits that would inspire, but when said histories basically amount to 'birthday present', 'housepet' and 'store-bought' it turns out pretty tricky.
Anyway, would you count your SU as done? Though the personality section's a little short, as you said, the history section and RP sample are of high enough quality for it to be accepted now regardless.
Alright then, thanks. And that is one way of looking at it, especially on Mega Heracross - who, if you ignore the massive Talonflame weakness is designed as a bulky attacker.
Your SU's good so far, but I have one small objection. The plot was designed with the idea that the characters have little-to-no knowledge of Mega Evolution beforehand, so I'm finding it slightly unusual from an in-character perspective that Alex would teach his Heracross 3 multi-hit moves with no prior knowledge of Skill Link.
I'm not saying to remove all of them, because then why even bother going Mega later in the plot, but maybe replace Arm Thrust with Close Combat, or Pin Missile with Megahorn? Especially since Arm Thrust has inferior damage output even when it hits all five times.
I've never even thought about it but, I'd say the people at the top would usually pay you dearly. ^^
Scratch that, they WILL pay you dearly. It makes more sense that way~