Hey all i decided to write a fanfic Since im a advanceshipper Guess what its aimed at (duh) i just want to know if i should give up and never writing a story again or carry on and im not sure but should i make it longer?
(no advanceshipping in this chapter)
"Hey no fair you three got a head start!" Yelled May .
"Come on May catch up," Responded Ash as he slowed down to let May catch up.
The four Ash, May, Max and Brock were having a fun time just playing around with a race to the pokemon centre.
"Come on you two Slowpoke's," Max Shouted.
"Hey Ash," May Said.
"Yeh May?" He responded.
"Let's sneak up on my brother and Brock,"
"Sure run into the tree's when I say now,"
"Ok,"
After about 20 seconds.
"Now," Ash Said.
Both Ash and May ran into the forest by the side of them, May Fell onto her knee's breathing deeply when Ash came up to her.
"You ok may?" Ash Asked.
"Yeh just tired," May Replied.
Ash put out his hand and helped May onto her feet.
"Thanks' Ash,"
"No problems now let's go scare those two,"
May nodded and followed Ash.
"Hey Brock have you seen Ash or my sister?" Asked Max.
"No I knew we were in front but not this far," Replied Brock.
"Should we go back and look for them?"
"Nah I'm sure there just tried and decided to walk,"
"If you say so," Max wondered.
Ash and May got separated.
"May where are you?!" Ash Screamed worriedly.
There was no answer.
"May!"
Ash Sprinted to the pokemon centre to get Max, and Brock.
I just wanted to know if i could or not so should i carry on
p.s. any mistakes people can find is much appricated
(no advanceshipping in this chapter)
Chapter One
"Hey no fair you three got a head start!" Yelled May .
"Come on May catch up," Responded Ash as he slowed down to let May catch up.
The four Ash, May, Max and Brock were having a fun time just playing around with a race to the pokemon centre.
"Come on you two Slowpoke's," Max Shouted.
"Hey Ash," May Said.
"Yeh May?" He responded.
"Let's sneak up on my brother and Brock,"
"Sure run into the tree's when I say now,"
"Ok,"
After about 20 seconds.
"Now," Ash Said.
Both Ash and May ran into the forest by the side of them, May Fell onto her knee's breathing deeply when Ash came up to her.
"You ok may?" Ash Asked.
"Yeh just tired," May Replied.
Ash put out his hand and helped May onto her feet.
"Thanks' Ash,"
"No problems now let's go scare those two,"
May nodded and followed Ash.
At the pokemon centre
"Hey Brock have you seen Ash or my sister?" Asked Max.
"No I knew we were in front but not this far," Replied Brock.
"Should we go back and look for them?"
"Nah I'm sure there just tried and decided to walk,"
"If you say so," Max wondered.
Back at the forest
Ash and May got separated.
"May where are you?!" Ash Screamed worriedly.
There was no answer.
"May!"
Ash Sprinted to the pokemon centre to get Max, and Brock.
To Be Continued
I just wanted to know if i could or not so should i carry on
p.s. any mistakes people can find is much appricated