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Pokemorphs
I started this series called pokemorphs. Here is ch.1
Chapter1 Hi, my name is Toshi. I'm a pokemon trainer. Let me tell you something. There are dangerous things out called Yuohs. They go into a pokemon's brain and counquer it. They have to go to the yuoh pool every week. I will tell you all about it. But first don't tell anyone. They are looking for us. It begins in Littleroot Town. I was 10 so I was geting my first pokemon. I went to Proffeser Birch's lab. It was big and had all these machines and a traderdex. He said"Hi there Toshi. Have you come for your first pokemon?" I responded by saying "Yes." He said "Choose one. Torchic,Treeko or Mudkip." I thought. It was a hard descion. I liked grass types, but Torchic was my favorite. I couldn't decide. "Is it OK if I thought about it?" I asked knowing it was too hard. The proffeser said "Yes Toshi, you can." I went out. I started to walk North. Then a woman by the name of Mary said "What are you doing? You can't go out. There are dangerous pokemon out there." Then she took me back into town. I was so mad I could feel steam coming out of my head. I wanted to go. Where? I know! The woods. I went to the woods. To avoid needls and vines, I crawled through. Then I hit this hard, rough surface. I looked up. Yikes! It was a... |
Animorph ripoff, not bad actually. Good cliffhanger. ;) Plus, I'm surprised the Yuohs don't go into human brains as well, like the Yeerks do.
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Next 2 chapters
It was a Gravler! I looked at me with rage. Then I go up and ran as fast as I could. It was chasing me but being held back by the thorns and vines. It broke a tree with ROLLOUT attack and hit me. I wish I chose a pokemon I thought. The impact sent me flying back. I fell into a feild. The feild was normal. Execpt one thing. There was a UFO and an aliean there. The aliean was hurt. Normaly I'd run away but I was attached to this. I walked over causisly and said "Hi, who are you?" It responded in a weird way. It was english but it was telepathy <Hi. I am the pokemon called Hampsire.> I wondered what a Hampsire was other than looks. It inturuppded my thoughts. <I need help. I am fighting a evil species called yuohs. They go into pokemon brains. Then they control them. Go to my ship. Get a pink box.> I went in. There were different machines. I noticed a giant ray like gun. I looked around. I saw it. The pink box. I came out in the place but I saw a giant clock above me. <That is the Clock Ship.> It explained. <Ra 3 is in there. He has a evil yu-gi-oh body called the Golden Dragon Of Ra. Hurry, place your hand on it! No time to explain more. Go with my two friends now!> I ran two white Lugia-like things. Only a baby. I ran behind a rock. The 2 pokemon explained <We are Blizzards. We are baby lugia.> The other said <I'm Ninupo-hulo-Juin. The other is Yui-goiy-tuip.> "How 'bout Yui and Nin?" I asked. <OK> They both answeared. <Lets get the morph energy and get out!> Nin yelled. So we did. I put my hand on the pink box and I asorbed energy. It tickled. Little did I know that today my life would change forever. Chapter 3 Then a Tailow came to the ground. "Lets get its energy so we can morph" I suggested. <How about aquiring it?> Yui asked. "That works too." I replied. I went over and touched it. I asorbed it's DNA. When I did Tailow became still. It lasted for 15 seconds. Then I took off my hand and it flew off. I concentrated as Yui said. Now I know morphing is weird. The first change was my nose. It grew orange the extended. The next was my feet were turning into bright yellow talons. Then organs rearanged as got wings. SHHHHHHHH! My heart grew smaller. 10 inches smaller. CRRRRRRRREEEEEEE! My bones snapped away on my wings getting thin. I was waiting to get hurt. Nothing, no pain. That was a relief. I looked around. I could see so good. I tried to thought-speak. <Nin,Yui can you hear this?> Yui answeared <yes we can.> Then instincts came in. I started to fly off. Then I saw a nice worm to devour in this good eyesight. I came down. <Toshi, is that you?> Then I remmbered. I was a human called Toshi. I stopped going down. <Yui,Nin what happened?> Yui answeared <Tailow's instincts. They were controlling you.> I had to remember about me and not let it's instincts get me. We flew to a open feild. I saw that Yui had the pink box. We needed more people. We went to an open feild. We demorphed. Unfortently, 2 kids were watching us "Whoa, what is that?" We had to explain about the morphing power and Hampsire. They agreed to help. So we gave them morphing power. Their names were Haitoshi and Sakio. We needed to find the yuoh pool. We needed some powerful morph. Wait, Prof.Birch's lab. I needed a pokemon. |
It needs a bit more details, and less 'I's, but otherwise it's good! Keep it up!
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Slow down the plot a little, add some description, like SS said.
((ScArLet: It's SkarmoryRider!)) |
Chapter 4
I morphed back to Tailow as I flew to Prof.Birch's lab. I spotted woods. I went ot them,demorphed and crawled back to town. I looked around for Gravler. When I got out, I went to the lab. Someone said "Prof.Birch is out there." I went North. I spotted a sign that said "Route 101" I saw the proffeser. He was getting attacked by poochyanas. I ran over and aquired the poochyana. Then they were distracted long enough for the prof. to come down from the tree. He said "Thanks Toshi. What pokemon do you want?" I knew that Torchic would be stronger than Mudkip or Treeko. "Um...Torchic please." So then Proffeser Birch gave me a read and white ball. "Inside this pokeball,is Torchic." He said. I took the ball. "Bye!" I said. Then the assistant said "Take these pokeballs for capturing pokemon. Bye!" I ran out. Then I went North to Route 101. The sign said that too. I went to a cornn berry tree. I hid under and began to morph to Tailow. My nose started to become a beak and grew fur. SHHHHHHHH! My wing bones gotten thinner. My arms became wings. RAAAAAAAAAAA My heart and lungs moved around. Again, no pain. I guess morphing can't hurt. Thats a good good thing. Cause if it could I would be dead by now. Once I was 100% Tailow I flew off towards that feild. I saw the feild, then went down and demorphed. |
Morph, demorph, morph demorph. You don't have to morph constantly. ^^;
Not bad, but like SS and I said, more detail and slow down a little. |
Were are the Andilites?!?! LOL
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Hmmm....Good so far, keep it up! ^_^
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This is not Earth! It's fake! (Even thought andilites aren't real.) This is a pokemon planet called Earth! Okay, NO ANDILITES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Calm down, he's kidding, right ocean?
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I don't know, but... NO ANDILITES OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok OK calm down sheesh (thanks for saving my hide Morphais)
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First 5 chapters
The Beggining Plot:The Hampsire gives 4 kids morphing power. Into any pokemon. Chapters: Chapter1 Hi, my name is Toshi. I'm a pokemon trainer. Let me tell you something. There are dangerous things out called Yuohs. They go into a pokemon's brain and counquer it. They have to go to the yuoh pool every week. I will tell you all about it. But first don't tell anyone. They are looking for us. It begins in Littleroot Town. I was 10 so I was geting my first pokemon. I went to Proffeser Birch's lab. It was big and had all these machines and a traderdex. He said"Hi there Toshi. Have you come for your first pokemon?" I responded by saying "Yes." He said "Choose one. Torchic,Treeko or Mudkip." I thought. It was a hard descion. I liked grass types, but Torchic was my favorite. I couldn't decide. "Is it OK if I thought about it?" I asked knowing it was too hard. The proffeser said "Yes Toshi, you can." I went out. I started to walk North. Then a woman by the name of Mary said "What are you doing? You can't go out. There are dangerous pokemon out there." Then she took me back into town. I was so mad I could feel steam coming out of my head. I wanted to go. Where? I know! The woods. I went to the woods. To avoid needls and vines, I crawled through. Then I hit this hard, rough surface. I looked up. Yikes! It was a... Chapter 2 It was a Gravler! I looked at me with rage. Then I go up and ran as fast as I could. It was chasing me but being held back by the thorns and vines. It broke a tree with ROLLOUT attack and hit me. I wish I chose a pokemon I thought. The impact sent me flying back. I fell into a feild. The feild was normal. Execpt one thing. There was a UFO and an aliean there. The aliean was hurt. Normaly I'd run away but I was attached to this. I walked over causisly and said "Hi, who are you?" It responded in a weird way. It was english but it was telepathy <Hi. I am the pokemon called Hampsire.> I wondered what a Hampsire was other than looks. It inturuppded my thoughts. <I need help. I am fighting a evil species called yuohs. They go into pokemon brains. Then they control them. Go to my ship. Get a pink box.> I went in. There were different machines. I noticed a giant ray like gun. I looked around. I saw it. The pink box. I came out in the place but I saw a giant clock above me. <That is the Clock Ship.> It explained. <Ra 3 is in there. He has a evil yu-gi-oh body called the Golden Dragon Of Ra. Hurry, place your hand on it! No time to explain more. Go with my two friends now!> I ran two white Lugia-like things. Only a baby. I ran behind a rock. The 2 pokemon explained <We are Blizzards. We are baby lugia.> The other said <I'm Ninupo-hulo-Juin. The other is Yui-goiy-tuip.> "How 'bout Yui and Nin?" I asked. <OK> They both answeared. <Lets get the morph energy and get out!> Nin yelled. So we did. I put my hand on the pink box and I asorbed energy. It tickled. Little did I know that today my life would change forever. Chapter 3 Then a Tailow came to the ground. "Lets get its energy so we can morph" I suggested. <How about aquiring it?> Yui asked. "That works too." I replied. I went over and touched it. I asorbed it's DNA. When I did Tailow became still. It lasted for 15 seconds. Then I took off my hand and it flew off. I concentrated as Yui said. Now I know morphing is weird. The first change was my nose. It grew orange the extended. The next was my feet were turning into bright yellow talons. Then organs rearanged as got wings. SHHHHHHHH! My heart grew smaller. 10 inches smaller. CRRRRRRRREEEEEEE! My bones snapped away on my wings getting thin. I was waiting to get hurt. Nothing, no pain. That was a relief. I looked around. I could see so good. I tried to thought-speak. <Nin,Yui can you hear this?> Yui answeared <yes we can.> Then instincts came in. I started to fly off. Then I saw a nice worm to devour in this good eyesight. I came down. <Toshi, is that you?> Then I remmbered. I was a human called Toshi. I stopped going down. <Yui,Nin what happened?> Yui answeared <Tailow's instincts. They were controlling you.> I had to remember about me and not let it's instincts get me. We flew to a open feild. I saw that Yui had the pink box. We needed more people. We went to an open feild. We demorphed. Unfortently, 2 kids were watching us "Whoa, what is that?" We had to explain about the morphing power and Hampsire. They agreed to help. So we gave them morphing power. Their names were Haitoshi and Sakio. We needed to find the yuoh pool. We needed some powerful morph. Wait, Prof.Birch's lab. I needed a pokemon. Chapter 4 I morphed back to Tailow as I flew to Prof.Birch's lab. I spotted woods. I went ot them,demorphed and crawled back to town. I looked around for Gravler. When I got out, I went to the lab. Someone said "Prof.Birch is out there." I went North. I spotted a sign that said "Route 101" I saw the proffeser. He was getting attacked by poochyanas. I ran over and aquired the poochyana. Then they were distracted long enough for the prof. to come down from the tree. He said "Thanks Toshi. What pokemon do you want?" I knew that Torchic would be stronger than Mudkip or Treeko. "Um...Torchic please." So then Proffeser Birch gave me a read and white ball. "Inside this pokeball,is Torchic." He said. I took the ball. "Bye!" I said. Then the assistant said "Take these pokeballs for capturing pokemon. Bye!" I ran out. Then I went North to Route 101. The sign said that too. I went to a cornn berry tree. I hid under and began to morph to Tailow. My nose started to become a beak and grew fur. SHHHHHHHH! My wing bones gotten thinner. My arms became wings. RAAAAAAAAAAA My heart and lungs moved around. Again, no pain. I guess morphing can't hurt. Thats a good good thing. Cause if it could I would be dead by now. Once I was 100% Tailow I flew off towards that feild. I saw the feild, then went down and demorphed. Chapter 5 I saw a pokemon trainer trying to catch Yui. Then a Surskit used bubblebeam on the man. He turned back to the Surskit. I needed to help. The Surskit was getting attacked by a Wingull. It used STEEL WING. Lucklily, it missed. I started morphing to Poochyana. Once I got to Thought-Speak area I said <Nin, is that you?> <No it's me, Sakio. Hatoshi morphed to a Surskit too. He's trying to fight off the instincts.> I fully morphed too Poochyana then ran over to the man. I bit him on the leg. He yelled loud. Then he returned wingull and ran off. I saw Hatoshi as a Surskit. It was a big blue spider. It was part water, part bug. We started to demorph. Black paws grew into pink hands. My nose was getting smaller and wider. I was growing and black hair was growing into my skin. It wasn't that good. I wanted to scream. I looked over at Hatoshi. His 6 legs were growing 2 started going in. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! My heart was changing places! I closed my eyes. I didn't want to see this. PHPHPHPHPHPHPH! My lungs were getting bigger! I threw up. I was mostly human anyway. I became human. I looked over. "Go Torchic!" I said. Hatoshi and Sakio were human too. Then Torchic came out of the ball. It was like a chicken. There was 1 difference. Torchic was all orange exept a yellow hairdo. I started to aquire it. It went stiff. I took my hand off. Hatoshi aquired it, then Sakio, then Yui, then Nin. We all aquired Torchic. Then I saw something that could get us to the yuoh pool. |
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