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this is my veary first poetry
this is my veary first poetry so plz tell me how it is
would you care would you care if i die would i care if you die if you died tomorrow would any one care would any one come to your funeral would they come to get out of the day or because they care would you care if i die would any one care plz tell me if you like it |
Hmm, not bad ^_^ I juzt have a zmall zuggeztion.
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It'z very dark, zeemz like alot of peomz are. But there'z nothing wrong with that. Many people write and read poemz when they feel deprezzed and they're good for reliving ztrezz or relating to another perzonz' problemz. It'z quite good, ezpecialy for a firzt try! Keep it up! Poetry iz a great thing to get into and you can only get better ^__^ |
It looks great! Your meter seems to be pretty good.
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thx for your help i had it written down some were i just cant find it now
and the real one is much better |
Lol, that happend to me the other day. I had a great idea for a poem and wrote it down but I lozt it *_* Now I don't remember any of it except the bazic idea -_- But oh well.
Hopefully you'll have more pozted zoon, I'd love to zee what elze you can think of^__^ |
it will tack me some time to think of some more but i will but them on this thread
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sorry for posting 2 time but i thonght of a nother one
darkness darkness is power darkness is strangth sp) darkness will help you and darkness gides you it is not much of a poem but i think it is nice |
That last one is interesting. Sounds perfect for a poetic motto of a villain.
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it dose i never saw it that way thou
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