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Domin-8 February 19th, 2007 8:06 PM

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Starting%20over/WIP2.png

There ya go, I brightened up the colors then made an evo, I personally like the evo more then the original. What you guys think

doesn't matter February 19th, 2007 8:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Astral Maelstrom (Post 2388965)
Wow. Pikachu is really obvious, they're not fakemon, they're just horrible edits/recolors.
Ihe ear colors look odd in my opinion, as well as it being just a recolor some parts aren't even shaded.
Try something harder, like actually adding parts, ears don't count, they don't affect shading and stuff of the like.

No need to comment so harshly while posting. Instead, try and show a bit more encouragement rather than saying it's "horrible". Heck, you can even take a level position and simply offer c+c, which is all that is required.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Death Rogers (Post 2389030)
1: EVERYTHING is shaded. What do you think shading is?

2: Adding a part means putting a part on it that wasn't there before. Ears do count. Even if they didn't, I added a tail and teeth on Pikachu. What? Did you thing I took them from a Snorlax?

Next time you want to come in and bash my work, think out your insults before making a poopy-brains of yourself.


And Kaku, thank you for your suggestion. I will consider that in the future.

Just because someone has dealt you a harsh comment that doesn't mean that you have the right to respond in a negative manner. Just try and take whatever c+c you can from it.

If I see this from either of you again then warnings shall be given out accordingly.

Moreover, the report button has a reason for being there. If you see anyone break the rules, you're just one click away from having it sorted out, that's what Signomi and I are here for. So there is no need to comment on these actions yourself.

Fox♠ February 20th, 2007 6:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unorignally Funny (Post 2389278)
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Starting%20over/WIP2.png

There ya go, I brightened up the colors then made an evo, I personally like the evo more then the original. What you guys think

It's really nice, loving the evo, though I can;t help but feel it looks too much like Nidorino =/ It's probably the colour scheme.

♥RanaRocket!☆ February 20th, 2007 7:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amachi (Post 2387823)
Anywho, here's something I drew a few days ago. There's a few things that I haven't drawn, but I've already shown it to a few people, but I just haven't gotten around to colouring it ... yet.

http://i16.*.com/2m4og40.png
IT'S XP-TAN!

And hair is just a pain in the rear end XD;;;

So yeah, c+c please :>

And in case anyone is wondering, yes she is very clothes. They're just skin-tight XD;;;;

lol das hot x3 bahahah *can see why some peopel think im a guy wvent though it says 'FEMALE' up dere....
lol, awesome anatomy, i really can think if any crits sofar! cant wait to see more! xp
oh, and thanks lol. my pic has dynamo~

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unorignally Funny (Post 2387581)
First off, Maz... when you try to be happy, you are a little wierd. Just a tad.

hahahah. i know. its awefl, is it not?
and as far as that sprite does, it looks so much like nidorino. o.o i think its due to the pallete and pose. but still, its really well exectued!!!<3 (god, i love that phrase) i really like t hem both. your awesome!
even though i know its your style. if your gunna make fakemon.. you might wanna add atad moe black... *thinks i remember that that way anyway*
keep it up every one! *thumbs up* :D

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e262/Mazilwolf/set3.png
i cnt velive i forgot.
that was the REASON i posted... T_T im so thick.
lol, its nuddun
want some c&c before i colour.
Its my Charas Fu' and Trent.
lol.. Trents the evil one really. even though Fu' looks worse here. its an illusion! 8D

[NovaPirate] February 20th, 2007 8:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amachi (Post 2389310)
No need to comment so harshly while posting. Instead, try and show a bit more encouragement rather than saying it's "horrible". Heck, you can even take a level position and simply offer c+c, which is all that is required.

Sorreh, I can get a little harsh and Elitist. I'm tyrin' to be nice though. Gosh I feel like a n00b.
Unoriginally Funny, did you use Nidorino as the base? Not sure if it's coincidence or if I'm right, nevertheless I do like it better than the pre-evo. The little bunny thing looks like it has a moehawk, which kind of ruins the whole psychic thing, in a way. The evo looks a little bland, possibly some kind of marking or growth on the side could be added, as it's just a wierd spot with a wierd line drawn on it, although i still like it better than the pre evo. Just a suggestion but maybe the pre evo could use the evo's pallette, the lighter more pinkier apllette looks much better than the darker more purplier pallette. Just a suggestion. And maybe give us some names, I think calling them evo and pre evo is a little confusing.

((When I get back on Paint I'll do meself a nice crappy heavy edit, a I suck at them. Horribly. Then you can see my [email protected] spriting ski11z.))
Edit:
Here's that thing, for now I'll just classify it as an emerald bunny, not sure about the name.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/emeraldbunny.gif

Esupio February 20th, 2007 10:20 AM

Eh, I just doodled this in paint

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v647/Blaze_Boy/Mr.png

Domin-8 February 20th, 2007 1:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .:Kaku:. (Post 2389682)
It's really nice, loving the evo, though I can;t help but feel it looks too much like Nidorino =/ It's probably the colour scheme.

Haha, If you guys hadn't noticed I used nidoran girl's body as a base and pretty much edited it. I mean the only thing I kept for that body was the feet and a bit of the bottom, everything else was me. Couldn't tell?

And yes that is Nidorino's had and some of his body, I i edited the head some, and I'm going back and redoing the pose to make it look less like him.

I'm tyring to use as little as help from the pokemon's base and re scratch it. like on the evo, I will have new legs, and some new body.

Names...names. I'll get some to ya. But yeah I'll fix it up with your advice and make the new body for the evo.


EDIT: The color scheme on the second one is actually Koffing's colors...I believe thats the one.

EDIT2: kastoras is the name for the pre-evo. It is greek for beaver, since that is what it looks like.
krinisgno is the name for the evo. It is a mix between the word eilikrinis or one way to say open in greek and gnomi or a way to say mind in greek. Since he can't see still his mind is open.


If you guys can think of better names let me know haha.

Samson February 20th, 2007 1:30 PM

wow mazil, your ability to sprite outlining bases is beyond impressive. your newest peice doesn't even need shading, it's pretty awesome how it is. with your outlining ability and (thinks of someone who shades well who won't offend those who shade just as well but decides people will be offended nonetheless) an equally highly-detailed shading ability, you could make some real neat masterpeices.

ray.z: i have no idea what or who xp-tan is, but ima definitely go and find out XD... looks good so far, but she seems a little too viluptious near the bottom of the wip sprite.

Esupio February 20th, 2007 1:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Esupio (Post 2389788)

I'd like some C and C please

Goatman56 February 20th, 2007 1:34 PM

Well here's a sprite I did awhile ago. Been awhile since i've sprited a Pokemon so I figured i'd get back into it. So here's a Spinda.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/1311/spindazo5.png

dreemxweever February 20th, 2007 1:36 PM

aviator, that work right there is really cool.. you should make a backup and try adding color to see how it looks. Anyways.. someone gimme a cool idea for a trainer HEAVY edit. Im bored.. and all i hve to do is play MG Acid on psp.. which is not necesarily a bad thing :P

Samson February 20th, 2007 2:01 PM

esupio: it's pretty nice. i see no problems with the shading... but what is it? o.O

AJUST: forgot to comment on your sponge bob overworlds... flawless. awesome job.

goat: just as good as ever. you should probably try making the shading more intense... it's hard to tell that there is any shading with such a small sprite. also, i wanted to know, what other kind of themes do you sprite? you mention not spriting pokemon for a while...

dreem: you should try looking at the new D/P trainer sprites (PokemonElite2000). there are so many poses and colors to play with.

Esupio February 20th, 2007 2:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samson (Post 2389962)
esupio: it's pretty nice. i see no problems with the shading... but what is it? o.O

AJUST: forgot to comment on your sponge bob overworlds... flawless. awesome job.

goat: just as good as ever. you should probably try making the shading more intense... it's hard to tell that there is any shading with such a small sprite. also, i wanted to know, what other kind of themes do you sprite? you mention not spriting pokemon for a while...

dreem: you should try looking at the new D/P trainer sprites (PokemonElite2000). there are so many poses and colors to play with.

Its really just a person, with a wierd shaped hand, and body XD

Corrosion February 20th, 2007 3:43 PM

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1128/previewsig6.png
Some custom AW sprites i made for a fan made game, Custom wars.
I have more, but these are probably the best.
The order:
Top Left- Infantry
Top Right- Artillery
Bottom: Fighter

[NovaPirate] February 20th, 2007 4:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Astral Maelstrom (Post 2389761)
((When I get back on Paint I'll do meself a nice crappy heavy edit, a I suck at them. Horribly. Then you can see my [email protected] spriting ski11z.))
Edit:
Here's that thing, for now I'll just classify it as an emerald bunny, not sure about the name.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/emeraldbunny.gif

Can I get some C+C please?
Thinking about naming it Emababit
(Emerald, Rabbit))

Domin-8 February 20th, 2007 4:41 PM

Try and take away what makes it look like nidoran. Otherwise very nice, I can't seem to say anything else about it

dreemxweever February 20th, 2007 4:44 PM

maelstrom, the sprite is.. well, its interesting, im going to leave it at that. Its deffinatly creative enough, but it lacks form and the lines look funny to me. Just touch that stuff up.. it will look cool.

Samson- thats what i have been doing.. I have loads of stuff... every DP sprite..bla bla bla..
i need inspiration.. its like.. spriters block. haha... yeah.. so any challenges or anything?

Domin-8 February 20th, 2007 5:57 PM

Do some guys from games or something. Or make sports stars

dreemxweever February 20th, 2007 6:13 PM

alright.. heres my result of boredom and no ideas, thanks UF, but you were a little late :P
CULTURAL DIVERSITY!! (and this is in no way meant to be offensive in any way shape or form to anybody)
http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/dreemxweever/Edwin.png
His name is Edwin

Domin-8 February 20th, 2007 6:42 PM

My bad, but hey you can still take the idea. I don't really like this one as much as your others, don't know why though.

Always and Never February 20th, 2007 7:18 PM

Edwin... would that be referring to Mr. Feliciano?

dreemxweever February 20th, 2007 7:47 PM

lmao.. no nick.. its the only good name i could think of at that moment..although.. aside from the hair..haha, jk..:P
UF thanks for the advice.. yeah, idk.. i dont like him either.. i got bored.. im gonna make a game char tonight.. yup.. bb tomorrow

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 1:36 AM

Mazil, loving the lineart, can;t wait to see it coloured, the anatomy is very on par.

Astral, I can;t help but feel it's just a Nidoran with some very minor adjustments =/ I think you could do better.

Esupio, I'm not digging that palette, dawg. Though the shading's quite good, maybe use a more muted palette?

Dream, I can;t help but dislike the shirt, it looks more like cracks than a design, and seems quite flat, the green on the trousers isn't really my preferred shade of green, but it works. Hair and skin colour is nice though.

Keep it up, y'all ^_^b

Goatman56 February 21st, 2007 4:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samson (Post 2389962)
goat: just as good as ever. you should probably try making the shading more intense... it's hard to tell that there is any shading with such a small sprite. also, i wanted to know, what other kind of themes do you sprite? you mention not spriting pokemon ...

Thanks for the comment for starters. Other things I sprite would mostly be my own characters. I just don't really show them cause I just don't feel like it.

Anywho yesterday I felt like spriting a Numel, so I did.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/336/numel2jn8.png

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8629/numel1ih7.png

Which ones better, only the face is different. C&C would be much appreciated.

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 6:21 AM

Goatsie, your Spinda is awesome, it;s so adorable ^^. I quite like the Numel aswell, good work amigo! ^_^b

Anyways, something I started working on earlier.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/snailtownsofar.png

GOGO SNAILTOWN!
Still a heavy WIP.

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 7:22 AM

Snailtown. Never would have thought of it ^.^
Looks really good, but won't the teeth on the left snail home hurt the poor snails?!?
SOrry about my Nido edit. Not spriting for a while isn't an excuse, I know, but I think once I start spriting again I'll edit it, probably unclutter it. I was going to add wings but that would clutter it further, as well as the fact that I had no idea where the back was, the head, and the buttox all were. I need lessons in anatomy X.X ...
I'll edit it later, I'll start on another edit tomorrow, my mom's super sick and my Paint computer's in her bedroom, so I can't go in there.

Hai-Kun February 21st, 2007 7:27 AM

Wow! Snail town is great ^^ i cannot wait to see the finished product. And Aviator. That picture is really amazing and i wish you luck with it.
And by the way, AJUST and Jake. May i use your overworlds in a Sprite Comic. They are amazing.

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 7:34 AM

Thanks for the comments guys ^.^

Major update on Snailtown!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/snails.png

RAINBOW SNAIL TOWN HALL :OOOO

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 7:48 AM

You should make snailly clouds too.. That would be funny XD
Well, it's coming along, I like the town hall.
Can we get a climpse of the ground detail, if there is one? ((I.E. Cobblestone, brick, snail shells X.x ...))

Hai-Kun February 21st, 2007 7:54 AM

Hehe! That is awesome. I wish i could draw and colour like that. And i like the way you've added circles on the building.

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 8:01 AM

Astral: I'll show you guys when i know myself XD

Hai, thanks very much :3

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 9:29 AM

So you're just thinking as you're going? Sounds good to me. I'm guessing all the different colored lines are for different colored houses?

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 9:38 AM

Nope, they;re just the colours i doodled it out in.

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 10:23 AM

Another edit, along with my steps and some overworlds. I think this one is a little better, but I'm not too fond of it. I've gotten better at making my own pallette, although it's awater type with orange on it :P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/topazbird.png

Death Rogers February 21st, 2007 11:57 AM

Scratch Fakemon.

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1490/castronuq7.png

Evolution of Castform. It's pretty bad, but I wanted to post it anyway.

dreemxweever February 21st, 2007 2:15 PM

death thats pretty good. add some black outlining to the back and maybe some white designs on the body like castform has, otherwise its alright.
heres my new trainer, which will have many revisions.. i know it...

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/dreemxweever/Megaman.png
Haha.. if anyone can guess who it is lemme know..
it was basicly an extremly mega heavy edit of two fused trainers..
i know it needs different pallet.. it was 1:30 when i made it, wasnt thinking the best
CC all!

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 2:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dreemxweever (Post 2390884)
death thats pretty good. add some black outlining to the back and maybe some white designs on the body like castform has, otherwise its alright.
heres my new trainer, which will have many revisions.. i know it...

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/dreemxweever/Megaman.png
Haha.. if anyone can guess who it is lemme know..
it was basicly an extremly mega heavy edit of two fused trainers..
i know it needs different pallet.. it was 1:30 when i made it, wasnt thinking the best
CC all!

X from the Megaman games. Shading could be improved, but it looks a lot like him ^_^b

Star★Seeker February 21st, 2007 2:36 PM

Here are my begginer tiles,please comment and critique
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/shadowcris/tiles.png

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 2:39 PM

Can i get some C=C for my second crappy edit?
Betcha you can't not guess what the base was.
Megaman with a pokeball ^.^ lol
But otherwise I have no idea what it came from, which is soemthing better than I can pull of. He looks good, I probably can't notice some things, but I don't have much to say about it, as I've never seena big Megaman X sprite.
You're getting better Roger. Possibly think about moving the head back a bit and curving the left edge a bit more, it's unnaturally flat, unless that's how you intended. I'm not sure about this but I think the body doesn't need as much shading ((I mean darker shades)) but that's just speculation. Roger that ;)

dreemxweever February 21st, 2007 2:40 PM

yes, i plan on making a lot of things better.. like a better expression, lol.
also im planning on adding a buster cannon >.> <.<

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 2:41 PM

Astral, there's not enough contrast in your colours, they blend too much.

Neo, the palette's don't really seem to be like the pokemon ones, and the POV is wrong ona few, but hey, pretty good for a first timer :D

[NovaPirate] February 21st, 2007 2:44 PM

What do you mean?
Orange and blue are exact opposites..
But do you mean they almost blend together, and don't really define their area, and they just kind of mix? I dunno.
POV=Point of view?
the tree is probably m favorite. Also, just a speculation, but I thinkthe ripples in the water need to be in a pattern rather than a somewhat repeating handrawn set of lines.

Fox♠ February 21st, 2007 2:46 PM

Look at your shades of orange, they're too bland, they blend together in a way it removes the whole point of shading =/

dreemxweever February 21st, 2007 3:33 PM

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/dreemxweever/Megaman-1.png
he now has new revamped coloring, more shading, and a little scratch work on the belt and arm. CC

Fox♠ February 22nd, 2007 2:51 AM

Try to avoid gradients, it ruins the sprite and takes it out of the style.

BlueSonic February 22nd, 2007 4:14 AM

Eh, i was editing sprites, and i felt like posting here.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5803/galleryfi7.png
What do you think?

BTW, no one can use them but zak. Some were made for him.

Jake February 22nd, 2007 3:09 PM

w00t for trieng to revamp Hoenn! I wanted to make Little Root in FR/LG and I did, I extremely like how it came out.
http://i15.*.com/2modpy1.png
BTW, the buildings were made by me.

Fox♠ February 22nd, 2007 3:40 PM

Looks pretty darn good Jake ^_^b

Blade, some of them look quite squashed ya know?

dreemxweever February 22nd, 2007 3:44 PM

that is awesome jake.. i like the roofs of your building, it catches my eye.. idk..
where do you get your tiles.. like.. your resources?

Jake February 22nd, 2007 3:46 PM

tSR (The Spriters Resource: FR/LG Section)
I usually get the rip the houses and such.
BTW, I just noticed something I messed up on.
The doors are supposed to be brown. XD

Goatman56 February 22nd, 2007 6:18 PM

Thanks for the comment Kaku, your Snail Town is cool to :D. Today I felt like spriting Skiploom, because I saw a custom sprite of a Jumpluff and felt like spriting Skiploom. So here it is.

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4238/skiploomsh6.png

Not great, but it's an okay sprite. C&C would be much appreciated :D.

Fox♠ February 23rd, 2007 2:48 AM

Love it, apart from the face...a little too ditto like maybe?

[NovaPirate] February 23rd, 2007 9:01 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/newkyle.png
Definately not my full potential, but I did these in under an half an hour.
The trainer sprite is a cheap edit/recolor, the OW's are recolors, edits, and body replacement for the front view. I'm not happy with them at all.
the front is definately my favorite pose, the side's are pretty bad, and there's not much to say about the back.

Hai-Kun February 23rd, 2007 10:03 AM

Jake,Astral and AJUST can i use your overworlds please

[NovaPirate] February 23rd, 2007 10:21 AM

Sorreh, but no, that's my new character.

Jake February 23rd, 2007 1:31 PM

Nope sorry. There for personal use only.

♥RanaRocket!☆ February 23rd, 2007 2:26 PM

*EL FLOPPY GRANDE*
=___________________________=
why do they take so infinatly long to colour?!
heheheh....
17 colours. i THINK. pretty fun. added the bg again... ^^'
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e262/Mazilwolf/set6.png
lol, loveing snailyville there Kaku, it looks so amazing with that colour choice.
and Goatman, your style is the hot. it is. <3
personally, i dont thnk you need to change anything on that skiploom, it just rockies my sockies da whay it is!!!<3
and as for you Astral, nice new charater deisng and the overworlds (somthing i never got the hang of) look superb to me!
but your actual sroite seems a bit bland. I think thats more just the sprites you edited it from, you need to blend it al together a bit more.. i think...
i.e the head doesnt workwith the body too well, the colour choices and pose set it o far apart from the body.
the sprite needs to flow... x3.
*sounds like atotal hippie*
lol, naw, everyones doing great work!<3 keep it up all! it's so beautiful!<3

[NovaPirate] February 23rd, 2007 3:03 PM

Thanx. I'm thinking about editing the neck and the arms, so it's a little less obvious of Brendan's body. The sprites resembles me extremely closely. He could be my twin 0.o

Captain Arcane February 24th, 2007 2:16 AM

Ho-oh The Rainbow Phoenix
 
Ho-oh The Rainbow Phoenix

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6789/hooh2by5.png

This is what I think Ho-oh should look like. Why, because its called the rainbow pokemon, but its real sprite isn't even rainbow!? So, yeah, this is my Ho-oh, like the rules say, don't steal it, this took me forever to get the colors right!

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8597/hoohdy4.png

So tell me what you guys think. I want scores, whatever number out of 10.
Enjoy
^_^

♥RanaRocket!☆ February 24th, 2007 2:23 AM

hahha, i think the reason the sprite wasnt rainbow was coz they couldnt use that many colours!
still, this is really awesome! wonderful colour choice!
*sorry, but i dont like to score out of ten*

Signomi February 24th, 2007 2:26 AM

Nice work there, Captain Arcane. But I'm afraid if you haven't 4 sprites to show, then you can't make a seperate thread. ^_^;
I'll just move this to the Spriters Showcase thread for you~


~Moved

Esupio February 24th, 2007 4:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aviator Maz (Post 2392492)
*EL FLOPPY GRANDE*
=___________________________=
why do they take so infinatly long to colour?!
heheheh....
17 colours. i THINK. pretty fun. added the bg again... ^^'
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e262/Mazilwolf/set6.png

The shading looks to sharp, I reccomend adding some AA type technique to make it look smoother

like this:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v647/Blaze_Boy/example.png

Hope you don't mind the fact I fiddled a bit with it, but its for the greater good XD


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v647/Blaze_Boy/blokething.png
practicing some AA

Opacus February 25th, 2007 5:19 AM

First revamp of a LG/FR Rapidash.
 
It's in my ava, I came to this site before, but since I screwed up, I had to make a new account. So I have to make 15 posts first...oh well, I just placed it in my avatar.
I hope it's allowed anyway, I still want comment on it. (Some of you might remember the goblin I made with that monthly contest whitch received second place)
Was pretty fun. First revamp, please comment..

Pazuzu February 25th, 2007 6:14 AM

Sorry dude, but you need at least 4 examples of your spritework if you want to make a showcase thread.
I'll have to merge this into the Spriters Showcase.

~merged~

Opacus February 25th, 2007 6:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scizz (Post 2394306)
Sorry dude, but you need at least 4 examples of your spritework if you want to make a showcase thread.
I'll have to merge this into the Spriters Showcase.

~merged~

Oh right! Sorry about that, havent visited this place in a long time, forgot individual sprites werent allowed. It wont happen again.

Captain Arcane February 25th, 2007 10:53 AM

I like that a lot, thats really nice! ^_^ 9/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2394287)
It's in my ava, I came to this site before, but since I screwed up, I had to make a new account. So I have to make 15 posts first...oh well, I just placed it in my avatar.
I hope it's allowed anyway, I still want comment on it. (Some of you might remember the goblin I made with that monthly contest whitch received second place)
Was pretty fun. First revamp, please comment..


Opacus February 25th, 2007 11:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Captain Arcane (Post 2394484)
I like that a lot, thats really nice! ^_^ 9/10

Why thank you :)
(Got to get 15 posts :<)

Esupio February 25th, 2007 12:02 PM

A present for Goatman.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4436/lickitungforgoatmansw9.png
He's not exactly a close friend of mine, but I noticed that he watches me on Da, and he still provides some of the best comics I know of, so he deserves a present

I hope he still likes lickitungs XD

Opacus February 25th, 2007 3:23 PM

It's a tank:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8007/tank3edit9cv4.gif
Not done yet.

Fox♠ February 25th, 2007 3:39 PM

Tank is awesome, love the palette and shading.

Rapidash looks a tad over dithered, I like the palette though.

Opacus February 25th, 2007 3:51 PM

Thanks. Yeah, I'll fix Rapidash tomorrow.

dreemxweever February 25th, 2007 4:58 PM

HOOO Im back.
sorry for the dramatic entrance, and i knpw probably nobody noticed i wasnt posting. :P
ahh well, the past 24 hours or so ive been working on an evolution of snorlax, armolax (it sounds like a laxative heehe) and i cant ge tthe gosh darn feet right.. any tips on it?
plz dont work on it, just CC and pointers, thanks.

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l184/dreemxweever/Armolax.png

i think the pallet needs work too, its a bit bland with just grey..

Death Rogers February 25th, 2007 5:06 PM

I've been working on some tilesets.
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/2429/tilesre6.png
In the first box, you see somewhat tall grass. In the second, you see a water reed and a lily pad.

Opacus February 26th, 2007 1:18 AM

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4346/rapidashrevampedt1ld4.gif
Fixed the overdither, made it brighter.

Here's an animation for the tank, sub pixel movement:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2152/tank3animation2loopav1.gif

Fox♠ February 26th, 2007 3:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395431)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4346/rapidashrevampedt1ld4.gif
Fixed the overdither, made it brighter.

Here's an animation for the tank, sub pixel movement:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2152/tank3animation2loopav1.gif

Rhapidash is much better, love the tank.

I;m gonna go for a wild shot and say you;re the same Opacus as the one on Pixeljoint.

Opacus February 26th, 2007 3:55 AM

Yup, true. Also Shadow Wolf on Pixeltendo, Opacus on Pixelation, Opacus on Pixel, and Opacus on the GMC. Thanks.

pikachulover306 February 26th, 2007 4:17 AM

I just started making srpites and these are the ones I did

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e185/ramonahwkns/trainer.png

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e185/ramonahwkns/Pahicku.png

[NovaPirate] February 26th, 2007 6:18 AM

Well, good, I guess...
On the first one, I'm not entirely sure you used shading, take a look at a tutoriall And don't use paint default colors, use colors from other poke'mon/trainers.

Pachirisu
Not a sprite, but it's pixel art...
Another recolor, which aren't so hard, that lacks shading. Shading is god, you must okease Shading!
Also, decrease the size, on paint, use the Select tool and select Pachirisu and put it by the girl, and then, using the blue boxes around the rim of the white box, shrink it so there s enough space for the to of them. Granted, don't give them too little space, they have to breath ya know xD

Fox♠ February 26th, 2007 6:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395488)
Yup, true. Also Shadow Wolf on Pixeltendo, Opacus on Pixelation, Opacus on Pixel, and Opacus on the GMC. Thanks.

Am I correct in thinking you were Shadow wolf here once as well?

Pikachulover, try to avoid using default paint colours, you really should include shading in your pieces.

Opacus February 26th, 2007 7:23 AM

Yes, you're right. But i screwed something up with my account.

Esupio February 26th, 2007 7:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Esupio (Post 2394579)
A present for Goatman.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/4436/lickitungforgoatmansw9.png
He's not exactly a close friend of mine, but I noticed that he watches me on Da, and he still provides some of the best comics I know of, so he deserves a present

I hope he still likes lickitungs XD

yay for no comments, or C and C

~Shadow909~ February 26th, 2007 9:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Esupio (Post 2395567)
yay for no comments, or C and C

um it looks great!

do they still do the #/#?

if they do lol 8/10

But the tounge looks like someone elses tounge

MegaFuz February 26th, 2007 9:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Esupio (Post 2395567)
yay for no comments, or C and C

The shading would look a lot better if you used a few more colors. As it is now, the shading doesn't look quite gradual enough. Especially the inside of the mouth, as you only used one color. I don't like how you have the dark pixels around some of the border either. The border just looks too cluttered on the left side. The lineart is pretty well done though, and I love the expression on its face. It's a decent piece as it is now, but a few slight adjustments could really help it out a lot.

Opacus February 26th, 2007 10:19 AM

Here's an edit:
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1923/edit41vj3.gif
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

~Shadow909~ February 26th, 2007 10:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395650)
Here's an edit:
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

yah the tounge looks rolled now, but i like the shading of Esupio's lickatung

MegaFuz February 26th, 2007 10:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395650)
Here's an edit:
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1923/edit41vj3.gif
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X

Fox♠ February 26th, 2007 11:16 AM

No one has ever asked Nintendo/Gamefreak if they could edit the official pokemon sprites =/

强有力 February 26th, 2007 11:29 AM

I decided to shade a random ball shape to get better with rounded shading!
C+C Please
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1233/ballvt4.png

Fox♠ February 26th, 2007 11:31 AM

It's a little heavy on the dithering, try smoothing it out a little.

强有力 February 26th, 2007 11:34 AM

Quote:

It's a little heavy on the dithering, try smoothing it out a little.
Well the tutorial i used said dithering is a friend. And i thought it looked quite good. But being quite novice at photoshop means i am not very good.

I know what you mean by smooth it out but the problem is i don't know how or what tool to use! So advice would be greatly appreciated

Fox♠ February 26th, 2007 11:42 AM

The Pencil tool, a little AAing, the usual stuff. Dithering is a friend, but only in necessary amounts.

强有力 February 26th, 2007 11:49 AM

I know this sounds nooby but how do i AA?

Esupio February 26th, 2007 11:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395650)
Here's an edit:
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1923/edit41vj3.gif
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

I don't mind you editing it.

Its the first time i've really AA'd at all.

MegaFuz February 26th, 2007 12:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Esupio (Post 2395727)
Its the first time i've really AA'd at all.

Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please? Scratch Snubbull.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b394/MegaFuz/Custom-Snubbull.png

Jake February 26th, 2007 12:51 PM

That..is...EXCELLENT! I don't really see any problems. But that's me. :D
Just some D/P sprites for now:
http://i16.*.com/4g3rl77.png
Ash
http://i9.*.com/2zdn81e.png
Brock
http://i12.*.com/46zgsoi.png
Jaden from Yu-Gi-Oh GX

Opacus February 26th, 2007 1:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MegaFuz (Post 2395682)
You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X

Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank: http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/6412/tank3animation3loopjg5.gif

~Shadow909~ February 26th, 2007 1:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MegaFuz (Post 2395733)
Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please?

looks great, i see no problems really

MegaFuz February 26th, 2007 1:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .:Kaku:. (Post 2395702)
No one has ever asked Nintendo/Gamefreak if they could edit the official pokemon sprites =/

That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 2395775)
Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank: http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/6412/tank3animation3loopjg5.gif

It really isn't that hard to actually type out the things wrong with a sprite. I know personally, I'd rather be given specifics about what to improve than have someone just completely change my original sprite. If Esupio doesn't mind though, there's no point in discussing this.

I love the tank sprite, Opacus. The palette looks wonderful and the animation pwns. Thank god you fixed the angle of the wheels though. It looked awkward originally, but now it looks excellent. XD

~Shadow909~ February 26th, 2007 1:54 PM

ooooh the tank looks really really nice! i like the colors! the colors are really nicely done, thats what i think!

dreemxweever February 26th, 2007 1:56 PM

uhh.. could i get some CC on my evo. sprite?


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