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I made my second scratch sprite. Let me know what you think.
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll315/Mawkawkaw/scratch_sprite__27698095172-iaza1.gif |
Eh, the sprite itself isn't that great.
the shading on the bottom half isnt good. it kinda just stops? I don't exactly know what your aiming for, but you may one add some shading along the edges or something. Lighter on the left side also. And the sprite is small, make it a lil bigger. |
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Like this: http://pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dpmfa/dpmfa110.png As for your shading, don't use too much dither. (the checkerboard shading) Overall, it's not too bad for a first attempt at scratching. It's better than my first scratch. xD Keep it up. |
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☼♥Moonstep's Art Gallery♥☼
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll261/Moonstep1/moon.jpg?t=1223750868 ☼♥Welcome To Moonstep's Art Gallery♥☼ Hello, this is Moonstep! I may seem to be a little new, but I still am big in graphics and roleplaying, and so I may post some art from scenes in my roleplays, too. If you would like to post criticism on my art, i'm fine with it, I know I'm not perfect. However, please don't be rude. I tried on these, and I don't want to hear anything like, "Horrible, get a life," or, "Why am I wasting your time on looking at this?" Thankiez~♥ The Art~! Not al lot of art right no, just this May Sprite. Hope you like that though! Check back later for more artsies~! Not a lot right now, but I'll keep ally my art right here. |
Try making sprites of actual things. Just spriting random nonsensical creatures isn't going to help you. It just means there's less for us to objectively critique.
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http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6796/medb1.png
well I decided to sprite myself, this is also my first ever trainer sprite (I just started to sprite yesterday) |
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I'm glad to know you only looked at the images and disregarded them immediately before reading a few posts ahead to read why I made them. |
Does anyone know a good tutorial for Diamond/pearl -style town maps ? thanks in advance.
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You mean, like how to map them, as in the layout of the town? There is really no style to that, you just map it how you like it.
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But I'll do just as I did for FRLG maps, and then if I make mistakes people will tell me how to improve. Unfortunately I had very few tiles to use. Do you know where I could find some (that I can use without giving credit, preferably ^^) |
One of my first ever scratches here.
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Name: Bombay Type(s): Fire Pokedex Entry: "Bombay, the small bomb Pokemon. Bombay may be small, but it can destroy boulders 100 times it's size." Evolution Line: Bombay -> @Lv. 20 Torpire -> @Lv. 35 Robomba |
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Don't use dithering too much, it looks sloppy if used wrong, also your highlight color shouldn't be so noticable, it should only be a little bit. And why is ther a flame on the back of the bomb? not the wick but the bomb? I'll try to do my own version if you don't mind. |
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New Scratch! Spoiler:
Name: Torpire Type(s): Fire/Steel Pokedex Entry: "Torpire, the Flame Torpedo Pokemon. A single Torpire can wipe out an entire town." Evolution Line: Bombay -> @Lv. 20 Torpire -> @Lv. 35 Robomba |
somehow i dont like it.. i dont know what it is... but he bothers me..
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that wick is still to thick.
Its eyes look kinda weird also =/ |
Ok here is my version of yoour sprite. The falme as the end of the headband didn't look right to me so I just made it a headband. And I took your colors and thinned then down to only 15, you had alot more. Of course I also changed the eyes, to me it fits better
http://www.clipartof.com/images/free_hosting/large/0180-0810-1313-0400_coreysanidiot.bmp On you new sprite, it looks too much like the fisr one. Just its taller. You gotta change it more. |
ooh nice change :D it looks much better now!
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I've been attempting fusions :D
I call it, lapran! the lapras with heatran features! I may have messed up on some of the shading at the head but i'll fix later. http://i347.photobucket.com/albums/p445/phantftw/lapran.png The extra black outline is actually part of the background left from it when i copied over the original sprite to edit on. Oppinions? :D |
When you copy it, just use the paint bucket on the background and it will erase it, as it is not the same color black as the sprite outline.
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well when ever I do that all of the shading comes undone and sometimes parts of the sprite get erased. I'm using the program paint.net btw.
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