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Crosell December 18th, 2008 4:41 AM

Made a new overworld of Totodile, time killing took about an hour to finish the first front ow.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/7173/totodilenewoverworldvv6.png

I would like some Critism on this sprite sheet please :)

Fox♠ December 18th, 2008 8:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crosell (Post 4203894)
Made a new overworld of Totodile, time killing took about an hour to finish the first front ow.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/7173/totodilenewoverworldvv6.png

I would like some Critism on this sprite sheet please :)

R/S/E style? Looks nice, but a little flat. The Snout also needs to be more present in the front OWs.

Could you give me your thoughts on the WiP i posted a few back? I'd like to hear what you and Opaucs think more than anyone else here.

GFA December 18th, 2008 1:10 PM

Maybe make the snout longer?

Blazers December 19th, 2008 9:11 AM

Yea i agree.
It's face looks a little flat, besides that it is really good.
Here's another scratch sprite, 100%. concept by me this time.
It's not finished yet as you can see, but i thought i'd show you so i can see what to work on before i shade the rest of it.
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/3/12/19/f_spritetracem_a23123d.png

Makeshiftjay December 19th, 2008 9:16 AM

Are there Any Sprites That Are Willing To work With My Team

Likewise December 19th, 2008 9:24 AM

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7851/spritehp4.png

I havent sprited in a while, and I needed to make a sprite for my game so...
This is how it was supposed to look like.
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/741/00sh8.png
I didnt make the overworld.

I personally dont like the trainer sprite but I need a second opinion x_x

Opacus December 19th, 2008 9:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blazers08 (Post 4206620)
Yea i agree.
It's face looks a little flat, besides that it is really good.
Here's another scratch sprite, 100%. concept by me this time.
It's not finished yet as you can see, but i thought i'd show you so i can see what to work on before i shade the rest of it.
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/3/12/19/f_spritetracem_a23123d.png

That's a pretty nice concept.
But it lacks on the drawing department.

There's alot of things on it that aren't correct, or could look better.
First off, there's his position. It's rather boring, and the positions of his legs don't make much sense. Neither do the legs show any understanding of anatomy. Though pokemon of course are fantasy creatures, they are still based on real life anatomy.
For example your pokemon resembles a dog like creature, so let's just make it's muscle and bone system resemble that of a dog.
Another problem is the complete lack of depth.
You can't tell which legs are front, or back or left or right.
A clear definition of this through shadows and highlights is important.

I redid your pokemon to show you what I mean:
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/6408/edit106hh2.gif
It's a quick 10 minute redo of yours. It has the same design with some small tweaks here and there. I changed the colours, the anatomy, the pose and I added depth.

Remember I'm just trying to help out. I'm not trying to insult you or say that your sprites are bad. I'm just saying there's room for improvement, and I'm trying to get you there.

Crosell December 19th, 2008 10:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FoxHound! (Post 4202435)
a lot better, only one problem now, the neck/chest area needs more defining, it just looks like one long neck.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/entry1.png

My contest entry, huge WIP

Calling it "The hunter"

C&C plz.


The mountains need a larger pallete.
Also add more shading to the snow, it looks to white.
The guy is good though, maybe make his pose abit more natural.

ow and thanks for commenting on those ow's.
I need to pratice alot more in making ow's, but I'm getting better.
I'll fix those stuff soon :)

Blazers December 19th, 2008 10:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opacus (Post 4206656)
That's a pretty nice concept.
But it lacks on the drawing department.

There's alot of things on it that aren't correct, or could look better.
First off, there's his position. It's rather boring, and the positions of his legs don't make much sense. Neither do the legs show any understanding of anatomy. Though pokemon of course are fantasy creatures, they are still based on real life anatomy.
For example your pokemon resembles a dog like creature, so let's just make it's muscle and bone system resemble that of a dog.
Another problem is the complete lack of depth.
You can't tell which legs are front, or back or left or right.
A clear definition of this through shadows and highlights is important.

I redid your pokemon to show you what I mean:
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/6408/edit106hh2.gif
It's a quick 10 minute redo of yours. It has the same design with some small tweaks here and there. I changed the colours, the anatomy, the pose and I added depth.

Remember I'm just trying to help out. I'm not trying to insult you or say that your sprites are bad. I'm just saying there's room for improvement, and I'm trying to get you there.


errr mhm...=)
yes i understand what your saying. im not the greatest artist lol.
Yours made mine look like junk haha.
but i really like it. would you mind if i tweaked it and sprited it?

Opacus December 19th, 2008 10:40 AM

No I won't mind it.
But you'd learn more if you tried it yourself instead of using mine. It's up to you.

moments. December 19th, 2008 1:01 PM

Ok I am a beginner Spriter having completed only 2 sprites ever so I need criticism on my recolour and fusion.

http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee207/mattimogalli/HumanMachop.png
First sprite I ever made in an attempt to make Machop more Human like. I took the colours from Jigglypuff and swapped them. Your basic recolour and my first sprite.

http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee207/mattimogalli/DratinixCaterpie1ST.png
Second sprite ever mixing recolour and a fusion. Dratini's body with Caterpie's colour, nose, antennae and tail.

C&C would be nice as I am thinking of opening a showcase when I build up my collection of sprites.

GFA December 19th, 2008 3:54 PM

[img=http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8114/kogaoverworldaz8.png]

A horrible rendering of Koga as portrayed in Mt. Moon (In Pokemon Special.) I know its horrible, and critique, or pointers would be greatly appreciated. (As you can tell, in battle sprites, aren't my specialty)

Crosell December 19th, 2008 3:56 PM

Link doesn't work man.
Try it again.

GFA December 19th, 2008 3:58 PM

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8114/kogaoverworldaz8.png

Crosell December 19th, 2008 4:04 PM

A rocket grunt ?
I dont know what you mixed it with, but it ain't bad.
Maybe try to fix some atonomy on the hand.
And add some more shading to the cape.

Likewise December 19th, 2008 4:06 PM

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1979/spritehp4qi2.png
i fixed up my sprite xD

GFA December 19th, 2008 4:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crosell (Post 4207670)
A rocket grunt ?
I dont know what you mixed it with, but it ain't bad.
Maybe try to fix some atonomy on the hand.
And add some more shading to the cape.

I gave it Koga's head. In Pokemon Special, you encounter him at Mt. Moon in this sort of outfit ...

Oh and which hand (both?)?

Crosell December 19th, 2008 4:27 PM

The right arm, thats hanging down, look unreal.
Check other sprites as a reference to make the hand better.
the other hand looks also weird, maybe make the pokeball and fingers abit more realistic.

Ps: I dont watch the anime so I dont know what episode your talking about haha :p

GFA December 19th, 2008 4:44 PM

It's Ok, (that you don't watch the anime ...) considering this is from the manga! Now its time for me to do a reference check ...

Metallic December 19th, 2008 7:34 PM

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9341/wooplupwu1.png & http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9214/relisparceqx2.png

I could really use some crit on these two.
The first is a Wooper/Piplup mix, and the
second is a Dunsparce/Relicanth mix.
-Jake-

DARKSHADE December 20th, 2008 6:42 AM

DARKSHADE'S D/P/P-GBA tiles
 
right, ive recently started making pokemon D/P/P tiles in GBA format
here is what i have got so far:http://i39.*.com/2d2zkn.png
(the PC and mart)
expect updates and more tiles soon

signed the one and only:
DARKSHADE

Craver December 20th, 2008 8:03 AM

Cool! For be your first tiles. CONGRATS!

First post! (Noob actitude)

Fox♠ December 20th, 2008 1:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crosell (Post 4206726)
The mountains need a larger pallete.
Also add more shading to the snow, it looks to white.
The guy is good though, maybe make his pose abit more natural.

ow and thanks for commenting on those ow's.
I need to pratice alot more in making ow's, but I'm getting better.
I'll fix those stuff soon :)


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/entry2.png
Bit of an update, redone the Hunter himself.
Thanks for the crit mate. I see what you mean about the mountains, I';m gonna redo them with quite a rocky look ASAP, but i like the simplicity of the snow.

Also, a REALLY old bit of PA I done of Kingler.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/kingler2.png

Do you guys think I should redo it with better shading?

He Trembles on Your Breath December 20th, 2008 4:24 PM

http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/Taimato/thing2.png

My first scratch sprite. What do you think? I'm not too sure on it.

Blazers December 21st, 2008 5:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by He Trembles on Your Breath (Post 4210511)
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/Taimato/thing2.png

My first scratch sprite. What do you think? I'm not too sure on it.


What is it suppose to be exactly?


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