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It's a WIP and my 2nd scratch ever, but CnC please. |
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/129/0/4/pineapple_sprite_by_impojr-d3fxrof.png
Well, I think I'm steadily getting better :) . The eyes are what annoy me the most, so difficult. I attempted some anti-aliasing on the top of the mouth. This isn't meant to be a traditional sprite for a Pokemon game, just so people know. |
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Lickitung pre-evo based on this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abura-akago The idea is that it licks an oil from lamps, that reacts with a chemical in its tongue, causing it to grow. |
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Overall I like it. It looks a little small to be an evolution for Lickitung though. |
I mentioned previously that it looks like an egg with limbs because it's hard to see any distinction between the shape of the body and where its head juts out.
Just look at Lickitung in BW when you remove the tounge layer (and arms for good measure). http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad217/GreatMazinger_sup_m/lickit.png Eyes are off, too. |
heh heh....well my sprite thread died....nd i dont wanna make a new one just to get feedback yet, but neway....
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/264/sparkobracopy.png http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6677/serpyre.png http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9025/coelafact.png the snakes were meant to be like the eevee evolutions...so i'm gonna make more...but i dunno if they look much like pokemon :P i need to know if i should rework the full design or edit em a lil bit... any help is welcome :) and the last one is a relicanth evolution....thinking of calling it coelafact |
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Geodude of my region, based on Stonehenge. I really don't like this so crit please. |
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Anyway ... Been getting into spriting again and I'll be making a thread sooner or later, but for now, I'm too lazy. So, I was making a sprite for Dr. Fuji (from the 1st Movie) and there's something wrong with him tt I just can't place. http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/4880/drfuji.png |
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http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/145/7/9/is_it_a_leaf__is_it_a_bug__by_altariaking-d3h6qot.png Evolution of the cocoon in this post. Based on a leaf insect, and a ladybird. Without spots. :\ Definitely not my proudest work, so please please please please please some crit. Click the sprite for his stats and stuff. |
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first in a long time, want opinion on which is better, the fire/dark (left) or just plain dark (right). and yes, my computer is having problems, so it doesn't load tinypic right now, so it is attached. i based the head off a pic i found on google images, but it is slightly different.
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theres nothing fundamentally wrong with this....except that the back legs are in shadow while the front legs are in light... and bugs usually don't have legs growing from their heads... http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=60571&d=1306439787 coupla things i see at first glance...the tail looks so much worse than the rest of the body... u've used the main color of the tail to border the tail AGAIN... kinda like a 2nd outline... and the highlight on the tail just looks like a blob of light grey... also the eyes could use a lil bigger pupils...cuz i can't tell where its looking... seems like top left? unconventional... the one on the right has an outline on the entire head...which makes the head seem disconnected. back legs a lil off...for one thing, the paws are made from the highlight color, when u should use a darker color...and the back right leg(to us) the curve of the knee (?) seems a lil jaggedy and the other leg is too straight and ends too high up. U've angled it to the front, when it should be more vertical edit: and oh...the shading is a lil off too, orientation wise...u've highlighted the top of the head and the top of the back part of the body...but according to the usual the front of the sprite shouldn't be darker... and incase if all u wanted was an opinion...the fire/dark..cuz the other one seems rather plain... |
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Geuss my views on bugs have been altered due to Pokemon lol. xD Anyways bak to topic. Increasing contrast between the greens would be good and reworking the legs as they look pretty awkward and not positioned correctly. Specifically front right limb and hind left limb (our right and left btw) |
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/148/4/8/doodles_by_impojr-d3hekpm.png
currently faceless because I can't sprite facial features just yet. |
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/151/2/d/she_sells_sea_shells_by_altariaking-d3hp2ab.png
Water starter, based on a sea snail. Click image for its data. |
These are my first OW's EVER!! They are for the progressing hack raging fury.
The female hero is Scarlet and the male hero is Sky. http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/3981/maleheroexample.png http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9781/femaleheroexample.png Here is the gif for the female. http://gickr.com/results4/anim_1ce64a90-5cf8-2504-8dc5-7aac263e7ec3.gif Here is the gif for the male. http://gickr.com/results4/anim_7f93e940-f958-7aa4-7da5-18f720e60d70.gif P.S. Don't steal them; just critique them, please. |
Okay then, They're great and I love 'em
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http://prntscr.com/209gf Looks like all you did was put three tails on it instead of one. I suspect theft here. D: |
ya im sorry i forgot to give credit (my bad)XD
i changed the coloring some to make it look lighter colored, but the minis i made and the back sprite i made are completely mine |
Although I consider that like any other recolour, there is someone that sprited it and the sprite belongs to them. You should at least notify them that you're doing some recolours because some people might not want you to use their sprites or modify them in any way.
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I tried doing a Carvanha pre evo, it turned out like this;
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6792/starvendo.pngThe was supposed to look a little like a star, but I guess I messed that up. xD Constructive crit would be nice. |
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