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Cobalt'Scizor May 8th, 2011 6:04 AM

http://i1012.photobucket.com/albums/af244/___Scizor___/Sprites/anatomy.png

It's a WIP and my 2nd scratch ever, but CnC please.

maxxa May 8th, 2011 4:02 PM

posting some recent stuff for crit
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9861/dangerousq.png
http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/3429/funbandz.png
http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/9229/synergy.pnghttp://img848.imageshack.us/img848/153/atoms1.png
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3548/repredare1.png
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/9118/lelephant.png
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/4184/buzzpod.png

Impo May 9th, 2011 5:01 AM

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/129/0/4/pineapple_sprite_by_impojr-d3fxrof.png
Well, I think I'm steadily getting better :) .
The eyes are what annoy me the most, so difficult.
I attempted some anti-aliasing on the top of the mouth.
This isn't meant to be a traditional sprite for a Pokemon game, just so people know.

marcc5m May 13th, 2011 5:09 PM

http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Licky-1.png
Lickitung pre-evo based on this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abura-akago
The idea is that it licks an oil from lamps, that reacts with a chemical in its tongue, causing it to grow.

Esper May 13th, 2011 8:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6639396)
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Licky-1.png
Lickitung evo based on this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abura-akago
The idea is that it licks an oil from lamps, that reacts with a chemical in its tongue, causing it to grow.

The shape and position of the arms is a little strange. The one on the left barely shows and the one on the right gets a little lost with all those other lines around. The look a little flat, too, probably because the top and bottom outlines are parallel. Compare to the legs where the outlines bow away from each other.

Overall I like it. It looks a little small to be an evolution for Lickitung though.

The 100 Mega Shock May 14th, 2011 8:38 AM

I mentioned previously that it looks like an egg with limbs because it's hard to see any distinction between the shape of the body and where its head juts out.

Just look at Lickitung in BW when you remove the tounge layer (and arms for good measure). http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad217/GreatMazinger_sup_m/lickit.png

Eyes are off, too.

Ark_Silvanos May 21st, 2011 10:09 PM

heh heh....well my sprite thread died....nd i dont wanna make a new one just to get feedback yet, but neway....

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/264/sparkobracopy.png
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6677/serpyre.png
http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9025/coelafact.png

the snakes were meant to be like the eevee evolutions...so i'm gonna make more...but i dunno if they look much like pokemon :P i need to know if i should rework the full design or edit em a lil bit... any help is welcome :)

and the last one is a relicanth evolution....thinking of calling it coelafact

Rossay May 21st, 2011 10:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maxxa (Post 6631295)

That bee is the most adorable Fakemon I have ever seen. It's SOOOOOOOOOOO extremely cute! I love it.

marcc5m May 22nd, 2011 9:09 AM

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/142/7/3/stonehenge_by_altariaking-d3gy2jv.png
Geodude of my region, based on Stonehenge.
I really don't like this so crit please.

GFA May 22nd, 2011 11:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6653703)
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/142/7/3/stonehenge_by_altariaking-d3gy2jv.png
Geodude of my region, based on Stonehenge.
I really don't like this so crit please.

While he doesn't look organic (which is is fine), neither do his eyes. This is a problem, for if you look at Geodude his eyes remain organic looking. Not the best crit, I know, but I'm unsure of how to put what I want to say into words.

Anyway ... Been getting into spriting again and I'll be making a thread sooner or later, but for now, I'm too lazy. So, I was making a sprite for Dr. Fuji (from the 1st Movie) and there's something wrong with him tt I just can't place.

http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/4880/drfuji.png

Esper May 22nd, 2011 11:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6653703)
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/142/7/3/stonehenge_by_altariaking-d3gy2jv.png
Geodude of my region, based on Stonehenge.
I really don't like this so crit please.

It's a bit flat and there's not much variation across the whole sprite. The jagged outlines make it look more crumbly and brittle than stoney. Maybe you want it that way? I would try giving it different legs, ones that are more like legs because at the moment they're a lot like extensions of the face than separate parts of the body. Same color, same design, same flatness. Kind of reminds me of a rocky Unown, particularly since it looks like a capital R to me. The proportions - length of the legs, width of the face, size of the eyes - seem fine. The expression isn't bad either.

marcc5m May 26th, 2011 8:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scarf (Post 6655146)
It's a bit flat and there's not much variation across the whole sprite. The jagged outlines make it look more crumbly and brittle than stoney. Maybe you want it that way? I would try giving it different legs, ones that are more like legs because at the moment they're a lot like extensions of the face than separate parts of the body. Same color, same design, same flatness. Kind of reminds me of a rocky Unown, particularly since it looks like a capital R to me. The proportions - length of the legs, width of the face, size of the eyes - seem fine. The expression isn't bad either.

Yeah, I see what you mean, it's my first rock type and I had no idea what I was doing. They are extensions of the face, I just messed up with them. xD That's been fixed now though. This guy will be a little bit tougher than Unown though. :P

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/145/7/9/is_it_a_leaf__is_it_a_bug__by_altariaking-d3h6qot.png
Evolution of the cocoon in this post.
Based on a leaf insect, and a ladybird. Without spots. :\
Definitely not my proudest work, so please please please please please some crit. Click the sprite for his stats and stuff.

siper x May 26th, 2011 11:56 AM

1 Attachment(s)
first in a long time, want opinion on which is better, the fire/dark (left) or just plain dark (right). and yes, my computer is having problems, so it doesn't load tinypic right now, so it is attached. i based the head off a pic i found on google images, but it is slightly different.

Ark_Silvanos May 26th, 2011 1:00 PM

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/145/7/9/is_it_a_leaf__is_it_a_bug__by_altariaking-d3h6qot.png

theres nothing fundamentally wrong with this....except that the back legs are in shadow while the front legs are in light... and bugs usually don't have legs growing from their heads...


http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=60571&d=1306439787

coupla things i see at first glance...the tail looks so much worse than the rest of the body... u've used the main color of the tail to border the tail AGAIN... kinda like a 2nd outline... and the highlight on the tail just looks like a blob of light grey...
also the eyes could use a lil bigger pupils...cuz i can't tell where its looking... seems like top left? unconventional...
the one on the right has an outline on the entire head...which makes the head seem disconnected.
back legs a lil off...for one thing, the paws are made from the highlight color, when u should use a darker color...and the back right leg(to us) the curve of the knee (?) seems a lil jaggedy and the other leg is too straight and ends too high up. U've angled it to the front, when it should be more vertical
edit: and oh...the shading is a lil off too, orientation wise...u've highlighted the top of the head and the top of the back part of the body...but according to the usual the front of the sprite shouldn't be darker...

and incase if all u wanted was an opinion...the fire/dark..cuz the other one seems rather plain...

tnguye3 May 26th, 2011 1:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ark_Silvanos (Post 6661373)
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/145/7/9/is_it_a_leaf__is_it_a_bug__by_altariaking-d3h6qot.png

theres nothing fundamentally wrong with this....except that the back legs are in shadow while the front legs are in light... and bugs usually don't have legs growing from their heads...

Actually, I think it's a pair of antenna's, not legs. xD

Ark_Silvanos May 26th, 2011 2:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tnguye3 (Post 6661408)
Actually, I think it's a pair of antenna's, not legs. xD

no i meant the legs :P...they're supposed to start after the head...at the thorax...but since there is a lack of a thorax it should actually start underneath the abdomen...

tnguye3 May 26th, 2011 3:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ark_Silvanos (Post 6661552)
no i meant the legs :P...they're supposed to start after the head...at the thorax...but since there is a lack of a thorax it should actually start underneath the abdomen...

Ah true! xD
Geuss my views on bugs have been altered due to Pokemon lol. xD
Anyways bak to topic.

Increasing contrast between the greens would be good and reworking the legs as they look pretty awkward and not positioned correctly. Specifically front right limb and hind left limb (our right and left btw)

Impo May 28th, 2011 12:16 AM

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/148/4/8/doodles_by_impojr-d3hekpm.png
currently faceless because I can't sprite facial features just yet.

marcc5m May 31st, 2011 9:20 AM

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/151/2/d/she_sells_sea_shells_by_altariaking-d3hp2ab.png
Water starter, based on a sea snail. Click image for its data.

-ty- June 5th, 2011 11:43 PM

These are my first OW's EVER!! They are for the progressing hack raging fury.
The female hero is Scarlet and the male hero is Sky.

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/3981/maleheroexample.png
http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9781/femaleheroexample.png

Here is the gif for the female.
http://gickr.com/results4/anim_1ce64a90-5cf8-2504-8dc5-7aac263e7ec3.gif
Here is the gif for the male.
http://gickr.com/results4/anim_7f93e940-f958-7aa4-7da5-18f720e60d70.gif

P.S. Don't steal them; just critique them, please.

Bonechill June 5th, 2011 11:53 PM

Okay then, They're great and I love 'em

FlyingHatTrick June 6th, 2011 1:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ares10 (Post 6680886)
For Doctor Who fans, the tenth doctor in action:http://mail.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=7264&pictureid=56118

The pokemon in that animated picture is this; FENRIR:
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7350/fenrir.png

Isn't that sprite from MRO?

http://prntscr.com/209gf

Looks like all you did was put three tails on it instead of one. I suspect theft here. D:

ares10 June 6th, 2011 1:59 PM

ya im sorry i forgot to give credit (my bad)XD
i changed the coloring some to make it look lighter colored, but the minis i made and the back sprite i made are completely mine

Logiedan June 9th, 2011 2:19 AM

Although I consider that like any other recolour, there is someone that sprited it and the sprite belongs to them. You should at least notify them that you're doing some recolours because some people might not want you to use their sprites or modify them in any way.

Mew~ June 12th, 2011 8:24 AM

I tried doing a Carvanha pre evo, it turned out like this;
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6792/starvendo.pngThe was supposed to look a little like a star, but I guess I messed that up. xD
Constructive crit would be nice.


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