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pokemon secret version
Story: (intro)one day you wake up then you have to set what time
it is suddenly you walk to prof.oaks lab once you enter oak ask you some questions like what gender you are whats your name and then you have to pick your rivle's name then you start your journey(intro end). more of the story coming soon.... |
A few tips.
heard of something called grammer? ... Well i will wait for the story.. |
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Oak: "I cant stop but wondering... are you a boy or a girl?" Player: "Story of my life..." |
dont take this the wrong way but that sounds like every other game think of your own idea i dont know how to hack games but why couldnt you do something like this: you are staying at your (insert family member here) house. One day it seems busy at the pokemon lab so you go to it and find out it is the day that new trainers get there starter pokemon before you get it you have to fill in a survey thats your name boy or girl rivals name blah blah blah
(please dont jump down my throat becuase im half asleep right now there is something im over looking please point it out) |
...This will not be a hack, it isn't in the hacking forum.
But I tottaly agree, its the same as a typical Pokemon game, it needs something unique. |
i know that i did say im half alseep
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what in the world kind of story is that?!?!?!
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axibar which story are saying that about? mine or the other persons?
if its mine it is orginal way to start pokemon game not the same old crap as usual and if it is the other persons it is just a run of the mill start of game story |
you should post some pictures
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i might be wrong but i dont think he is that far yet
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im back with a new story
story: one night you were dreaming about the new starters
aquar,flamear,and vinest.Suddenly a strange pokemon interuptes you in your dreams and turns your dream into a nightmare.Then you wake up in the middle of the night and you hear a strange noise then you go back to sleep. The next day you wake up and you go to prof.oaks lab he says whats your name your gender BLAH BLAH BLAH. And then once you enter the first route a pokemon flys past you. |
nice story i like it so it should have unique pokemon
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Hmm...notice any similarities? Learn how to make stories you freaking rip-off. |
my story is different so there you happy
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stop fighting pikachoo456 and flameguru.
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Really, the starters shouldn't have "aqua," "flame," and "vine" references. It totally kills it.
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i'll think of better starter names later.
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I got some images:
title screen http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/pokesecret.jpg hometown http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/hometownpokesecret.jpg route1 http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/route1pokesecret.jpg zetlian city http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/zetliancitypokemonsecret.jpg zetlian forest http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3079/zetlianforestpokesecretlt0.png route 2 http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/pokesecretroute2.jpg route 2 (after you get a bike) -unfinished http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc109/plusle_fan/pokesecretroute2-2.jpg |
Those maps are way to smashed together and too small. Also, some of them need to be remapped. There are various and obvious errors on each map.
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Wait...is this for hacks or stories or what? Me confused...
But those maps are totally random and don't really look good IMO. |
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