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pokemon: giovanni's revenge
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name: pokemon giovanni's revenge
made with: rmpg, english but may be another language introduction: it's not that good but it'll have to do with a short team. it's kind of a kick off from pokemon yellow, red and gold. and this my first game so i hope it's good. story: it starts off with you going to prof. red's lab but when you enter you see giovanni and his persian battling prof. red and his pikachu. persian uses scratch on pikachu and pikachu faints. then giovanni steals prof. red's pokemon and disappears. player goes up to prof. red and prof. red tells you about team rocket and how giovanni swore he will be back and player others to stop team rocket for prof. red. prof. red gives you a new invented pokemon. features: new reigon going to the old regions new pokemon team rocket is back huge risks and lots lots more screen shots: see attachment. team: agent destroyer (scripter, owner, founder etc.) souless (graphic designer) omagagroundon (graphic designer) obliviousmew (spriter) pkmn_knight (mapper who we want: spriters mappers programmers scripters pm me if you want to help surrport banners: none yet demos: none yet |
This game needs allot of work
1) you need to learn how to use layers you can't just stick everything on one layer or it will look a mess(referring to pic 3) 2) your outdoor map is way too empty try adding extra stuff to it such as grass, flowers and more trees and maybe even some water. 3)your last map is the worst it's way too big and empty you need to make the map smaller (by making the map size smaller or if it is as small as it can get use blank tiles to make it smaller) and it's too empty add extra stuff to it to make it look nicer. 4) your storyline could be allot better than it is work on it a bit more and try to make it sound like a story that people would pay for because if you don't have a gripping storyline people won't want to play the game and you will end up giving up on it, like most do with there first game well that's my opinion so far keep at it and you will improve. |
it's ok it's a very early stage i still haven't got the hang of it
and thanks i was wondering what the layers did. and i've been shrinking it. |
I think this game needs a lot of work. Get better with RMXP and maybe it'll turn out better.
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are these better? i did some layers and got rid of the black.
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No, your maps are way too open and your grammar is terrible.
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i'll deal with the maps now i'll leave the grammer for later
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Okay, your mapping are sucks.
And you should get a mapper... |
i'm trying to get one. read the first post
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o: WHAT!? No permission from me? THE Giovanni?
Nah im kidding, the only thing that interests me in this game though, truly, is that Giovanni is in it. Personally i dont like RPG-Maker games, my only interest is Giovanni, which explains my visit to these forums. Good day and good luck. Giovanni better pwn the hero D: |
I could be a mapper and sort out the grammer Problems, I will pm you.
As they say the mapping sucks and your grammer... Well.... What can i say... |
YOU NOOB WTF IS TH-
Ahem.. No Dash, stay away from the flaming. Bad Dash. Bad. Seriously now, You need to work on a lot of things mate, your Grammar in particular, a game with bad Grammar is just a bane on the eye to read and will decrease the quality of your game in the long run. You need to cramp your maps in a bit more. Look at the real Pokémon games, do they have giant maps with nothing in them? If you can't fill the space then make the area smaller, simple as that. |
that why i need to hire someone.
i also need a spriter giovanni: whether giovanni wins or not depends on the choose you make :o |
First of all, you have bad grammar for the text.
Second, I see some over lapping tiles and several map errors. Third, this game's story is VERY familiar |
please do not get this confused with pokemon protectors or rangers or other such games
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Why did you wake me up? What time is it?
Here, I'll rewrite the speech for your screenshots.
If you need inspiration, CLICK HERE, then click 'GAME SCRIPT' on the list. I'm not allowed to link to it directly. |
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Back when I was working on Pokémon Dash people kept yelling at me for using the NDS Game's name. I've seen Giovanni's Revenge 3 or 4 times now. |
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by the way: i've already thought about the next game. (just a story idea) |
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agent destroyer, my intention was that you would copy and paste the rewritten to replace your current ones. |
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I don't care how it is spelt as long as it is readable.
Anyway lets not start a flame war. |
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