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agent destroyer November 15th, 2007 6:56 PM

pokemon: giovanni's revenge
 
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name: pokemon giovanni's revenge

made with: rmpg, english but may be another language

introduction: it's not that good but it'll have to do with a short team. it's kind of a kick off from pokemon yellow, red and gold. and this my first game so i hope it's good.

story: it starts off with you going to prof. red's lab but when you enter you see giovanni and his persian battling prof. red and his pikachu. persian uses scratch on pikachu and pikachu faints. then giovanni steals prof. red's pokemon and disappears. player goes up to prof. red and prof. red tells you about team rocket and how giovanni swore he will be back and player others to stop team rocket for prof. red. prof. red gives you a new invented pokemon.

features:
new reigon
going to the old regions
new pokemon
team rocket is back
huge risks
and lots lots more

screen shots:
see attachment.

team:
agent destroyer (scripter, owner, founder etc.)
souless (graphic designer)
omagagroundon (graphic designer)
obliviousmew (spriter)
pkmn_knight (mapper

who we want:
spriters
mappers
programmers
scripters
pm me if you want to help

surrport banners: none yet

demos: none yet

spike6958 November 18th, 2007 8:54 AM

This game needs allot of work
1) you need to learn how to use layers you can't just stick everything on one layer or it will look a mess(referring to pic 3)

2) your outdoor map is way too empty try adding extra stuff to it such as grass, flowers and more trees and maybe even some water.

3)your last map is the worst it's way too big and empty you need to make the map smaller (by making the map size smaller or if it is as small as it can get use blank tiles to make it smaller) and it's too empty add extra stuff to it to make it look nicer.

4) your storyline could be allot better than it is work on it a bit more and try to make it sound like a story that people would pay for because if you don't have a gripping storyline people won't want to play the game and you will end up giving up on it, like most do with there first game

well that's my opinion so far keep at it and you will improve.

agent destroyer November 18th, 2007 2:54 PM

it's ok it's a very early stage i still haven't got the hang of it
and thanks i was wondering what the layers did.
and i've been shrinking it.

Flameguru November 18th, 2007 3:21 PM

I think this game needs a lot of work. Get better with RMXP and maybe it'll turn out better.

agent destroyer November 18th, 2007 4:42 PM

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are these better? i did some layers and got rid of the black.

Flameguru November 18th, 2007 5:13 PM

No, your maps are way too open and your grammar is terrible.

agent destroyer November 18th, 2007 6:26 PM

i'll deal with the maps now i'll leave the grammer for later

O.G. Duke November 19th, 2007 10:39 PM

Okay, your mapping are sucks.
And you should get a mapper...

agent destroyer November 19th, 2007 11:34 PM

i'm trying to get one. read the first post

Saken November 20th, 2007 12:18 AM

o: WHAT!? No permission from me? THE Giovanni?
Nah im kidding, the only thing that interests me in this game though, truly, is that Giovanni is in it. Personally i dont like RPG-Maker games, my only interest is Giovanni, which explains my visit to these forums. Good day and good luck. Giovanni better pwn the hero D:

Pkmn_knight November 20th, 2007 3:31 AM

I could be a mapper and sort out the grammer Problems, I will pm you.
As they say the mapping sucks and your grammer... Well.... What can i say...

The Dash November 20th, 2007 3:41 PM

YOU NOOB WTF IS TH-

Ahem.. No Dash, stay away from the flaming. Bad Dash. Bad.

Seriously now,
You need to work on a lot of things mate, your Grammar in particular, a game with bad Grammar is just a bane on the eye to read and will decrease the quality of your game in the long run.

You need to cramp your maps in a bit more. Look at the real Pokémon games, do they have giant maps with nothing in them? If you can't fill the space then make the area smaller, simple as that.

agent destroyer November 20th, 2007 3:45 PM

that why i need to hire someone.
i also need a spriter

giovanni: whether giovanni wins or not depends on the choose you make :o

Myoko-chan November 20th, 2007 6:43 PM

First of all, you have bad grammar for the text.
Second, I see some over lapping tiles and several map errors.
Third, this game's story is VERY familiar

agent destroyer November 20th, 2007 10:57 PM

please do not get this confused with pokemon protectors or rangers or other such games

Pkmn_knight November 21st, 2007 4:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Angel Shaymin (Post 3101149)
First of all, you have bad grammar for the text.
Second, I see some over lapping tiles and several map errors.
Third, this game's story is VERY familiar

I don't see much familiar with those 2 games except the name.

Improfane November 21st, 2007 7:08 AM

Why did you wake me up? What time is it?
 
Here, I'll rewrite the speech for your screenshots.
  • Oi! Boss said nobody may pass!
  • Player, are you ready? Your adventure will be both fun and challenging. A world of mystery and fantasy awaits to be explored. Let's go!
  • Wait! Don't forget your PokeGear.
  • Huh? What was that? I heard something from downstairs.
  • I don't believe it!

If you need inspiration, CLICK HERE, then click 'GAME SCRIPT' on the list. I'm not allowed to link to it directly.

The Dash November 21st, 2007 7:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Angel Shaymin (Post 3101149)
First of all, you have bad grammar for the text.
Second, I see some over lapping tiles and several map errors.
Third, this game's story is VERY familiar

It's very hard for people to keep coming up with names Angel, there are only so many subtitles that can be used while still feeling Pokémonish.

Back when I was working on Pokémon Dash people kept yelling at me for using the NDS Game's name.

I've seen Giovanni's Revenge 3 or 4 times now.

agent destroyer November 21st, 2007 5:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Improfane (Post 3102425)
[*]Player, are you ready? Your adventure will be both fun and challenging. A world of mystery and fantasy awaits to be explored. Let's go!

that was already done if you press enter ingame it will show that.

by the way: i've already thought about the next game. (just a story idea)

Avatar November 21st, 2007 11:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pkmn_knight (Post 3099368)
and sort out the grammer Problems

Oh, the irony is unbearable.

Pkmn_knight November 22nd, 2007 9:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Avatar (Post 3104811)
Oh, the irony is unbearable.

Oi! Just because you are a mod gives you no right to insult others, i can do grammer just can't be bothered to do it here.

Improfane November 22nd, 2007 10:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Avatar
Oh, the irony is unbearable.

I think we have a dual irony because you're laughing because he spelt grammar incorrectly. In which case that is more ironic because he made a spelling mistake, not a grammar one!

Quote:

Oi! Just because you are a mod gives you no right to insult others, i can do grammer just can't be bothered to do it here.
He did not insult anybody. When you criticize someone you should always use facts.

agent destroyer, my intention was that you would copy and paste the rewritten to replace your current ones.

The Dash November 22nd, 2007 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pkmn_knight (Post 3105890)
Oi! Just because you are a mod gives you no right to insult others, i can do grammer just can't be bothered to do it here.

Can't be bothered? What? It's not that hard to make a few extra keystrokes mate, seriously. Hell.. I find it harder to type in chat speak than I do with correct GRAMMAR and spelling.

Pkmn_knight November 22nd, 2007 12:11 PM

I don't care how it is spelt as long as it is readable.
Anyway lets not start a flame war.

The Dash November 22nd, 2007 1:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pkmn_knight (Post 3106334)
I don't care how it is spelt as long as it is readable.
Anyway lets not start a flame war.

You seem to be forgetting that Flame Wars are my specialty ;3


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