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BurstX January 31st, 2008 5:09 PM

pokemon battelers
 
ok this is my first comic ever...so here we go you better love these and if you dont too bad ^_^

POKEMON BATTELERS



Character Bios: http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/codybio-1.png http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/ashleybio.png http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/mikaylabio.png
COMICS:


CUSTOM MAPS


Code:

credits:
the spriters resource
sweetsmoochum from pokecharms
pokesho



LATEST COMIC:
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/comic8.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi January 31st, 2008 5:14 PM

hm...
as I said through PM before,

work on these:

1. Chariters
2. Plot
3. Effects
4. Layout

k?

I'm sure this will be atleast interesting. ^^

BurstX February 1st, 2008 1:10 PM

ok well here it is omic two... and three

The Journey Begins pt 2
The Journey Begins pt 3
and starting with comic four i will make six panles...okay have fun reading

[NovaPirate] February 1st, 2008 3:33 PM

Work on grammar. Periods, capitalizations, spelling.
Stop using periods. It really gets annoying after the third speech bubble in one panel with '...'

Don't mix styles. Styles are like Vinegar, Oil, and Water. Fr/Lg stays with Fr/Lg, RSE stays with RSE, and MD stays with MD. They don't like to be mixed up. That includes maps, sprites, etc.

And 'Battelers' is actually 'Battlers'.

BurstX February 1st, 2008 3:42 PM

...i like the use of md sprites...and idont really plan on scratching all the sprites of pokemon i need...also i spelt it wriong for a reason that you will find out later in the comic...um as for the use of fr/lg sprites...other than places i wont be mixing ows again...so i think that solves all the problems

[NovaPirate] February 1st, 2008 3:58 PM

You purposely put periods right there, didn't you.
Anyways, you still haven't said anything about the periods or grammar. Are you going to address those?

BurstX February 1st, 2008 4:03 PM

...yes my grammer will get better...but the periods symbolize a pause...not just a ...um i guess i could use a comma, so ill probably start that...i hope that helped

BIG UPDATE CHARACTER BIOS ARE UP

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 2nd, 2008 2:59 PM

hm...

Your chariters bios are just sprites,

but since you sent to the new full ones through PM,
I have to say the bio text needs to be bigger. I could barely read it.

Keep up with the comic, Burst.

BurstX February 4th, 2008 6:06 PM

...you have to click them...then it goes to the bio...but i will make the text bigger...also comic 4 will be out by the end of the weekend

EDIT:...um sorry for not getting the comic up...its not like people care...T.T well if you peopl;e want you can make a character for the comic...also you have to click the sprites to go to the bios...

...ok im making a new post because i feel like it yell at me later
heres
comic 4 now we're getting somewhere...sort of

EDIT: HERES COMIC FIVE Pokemon Battelers
also edited bios are up

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 10th, 2008 12:01 PM

hm... intresting.

I'm curious what these battlers are.
keep up the nice work, Burst.

[NovaPirate] February 10th, 2008 1:11 PM

Did you seriously say 'That's the cool way to spell it.'
Could you at least have come up with a reasonable excuse? Maybe make it a joke/pun that reoccur (like the bad guy/rival/random person/Pokemon comes and asks the same question).

And you need to explain why he took him to the Batteler HQ. 'Like, I just decided to take you to our Secret HQ for kicks. Because we have nothing better to do.'
Also, if you're going to spell Battlers wrong, I suggest yo spell it wrong all the time.

Work on your capitalizations some more as well.
Good luck!

BurstX February 18th, 2008 8:14 AM

ok guys heres an update on the battelers

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/bluebatteler.png blue batteler specializing in water types, he has a wailmer mantine, and mudkip

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/redbatteler.png red batteler, specializing in fire types, he has magmar and torchick

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/blackbatteler.png black batteler, specializing in ghost and dark types, he has banette shuppet and duskull

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/yellowbatteler.png yellow batteler, specializing in electirc types, she has pikachu and magnazone

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/pinkbatteler.png the pink batteler, specializing in normal types, she has delcatty porygon and aipom

the pokemon battelers headquarters
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/pokemonbattelerbase.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 19th, 2008 9:45 AM

to tell you the truth, the battlers are almost similar to the power rangers. XD

but they're neat, can't wait for the next comic.

BurstX February 19th, 2008 9:48 AM

...lol they are actually based off the power rangers...yeah i was bored

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 19th, 2008 9:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Burst ninja (Post 3350604)
...lol they are actually based off the power rangers...yeah i was bored

Check out Abby's FC.

I asked if you wanted me to fix your OWs for the battlers.

BurstX February 19th, 2008 9:58 AM

thanks achy that would be cool if you had some ideas for them

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 19th, 2008 10:03 AM

when I'm done, can I use them too for my comic?

Mike2494 February 19th, 2008 10:27 AM

I dont know why, but I really like it...I love it how you put the Pokemon into the base, they are from Mystery Dungeon, right?

BurstX February 19th, 2008 3:53 PM

yup all tyhe pokemon ows are pmd and the trainers are all r/s/e the places are fr/lg and r/s/e in some cases

Charchic February 19th, 2008 4:20 PM

I think the comic is really good and quite funny. But there is one problem. You told us there is a reason for the mistake in the word Battelers. And the reason just looks like you thought, "Upps. I made a mistake, better make up a cheesy way to cover this up now!!!!" And it doesn't really please the reader, it's a bit dull. And I don't really like the Battelers. But there is one great thing. The backgrounds. Did you make that base yourself! Cos it looks really good.

BurstX February 19th, 2008 6:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Charchic (Post 3351799)
I think the comic is really good and quite funny. But there is one problem. You told us there is a reason for the mistake in the word Battelers. And the reason just looks like you thought, "Upps. I made a mistake, better make up a cheesy way to cover this up now!!!!" And it doesn't really please the reader, it's a bit dull. And I don't really like the Battelers. But there is one great thing. The backgrounds. Did you make that base yourself! Cos it looks really good.

...okay i cant tell you the importance of the spelling of battelers, but i did make the base, and also i will be posting anycustom maps i make fyi...oh and you may not like the battelers now but just wait...*evil laugh*

Charchic February 19th, 2008 6:33 PM

Oooh! Now I cannot wait to see the next eppy lmao!

BurstX February 21st, 2008 9:41 AM

the new comic is up

http://i29.*.com/2dhtv6h.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi February 22nd, 2008 6:14 AM

it's more of a filler eppy,
and I don't think you gave cody any real interaction with the battlers that should of happend instead of
"Hi Cody!"
*One healing-poke'mon sesson later*
"Bye Cody!"

I was kinda dissappointed.
But I can't wait for the next episode. :D

BurstX February 22nd, 2008 6:34 AM

well hes really not supposed to get a big interaction with them, hes only supposed to vaguley know them...i know it all sounds weird but it will eventually make sence...or atleast i hope...

ok now since cody is goin to eight island heres the map
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/mikaylaisland.png

the tent is a contest hall


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