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Hmm...it looks better, except I think the head is still too round. Wurmple heads are more the same shape as the body, as a caterpie head is more of a round shape.
Also, the skiploom looks very nice! The eyes seem a little bright, but that what they look like anyways. |
okay heres a new one, its buizel, do you like it the with or with out the tail
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-5.png |
I think it looks better with one. With it, you can tell that there's blue on it's arms. The other one just looks completely orange.
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ok now here it is with the addition of buizel platinum lucas and a redone cody
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-6.png also i edited the wurmple, any better? |
Wurmple looks better now.
I may not like Lucas' new outfit that much, but you did do a good job the OW of him. And the one of Cody too. It's also neat that you put your pokemon OWs bases at the bottom to see what they were made from. |
well the bases are not always used, or theyre extremely edited,and thanks for the comment
and now my newest creation, its most of the game characters showing hero heroine rival the games are platinum diamond/pearl colloseam emerald ruby/saphire gold/silve/crystal red/blue/yellow/fire red/leaf green http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gameheros.png theyre all in r/lg stlye, and just wondering should i make the rival in colloseam mirror b.? |
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Try using official palletes from the battle sprites, since your custom ones are too close to each other. Also, never color the eyes. |
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Also, just realized, Lucas' scarf is way huge. Try minimizing by a pixel or 2. |
...oh and just putting it out there, my custom colors are the official art colors, but i only used them on the platinum sprites
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er, The wurmple looks a hell lot like weedle, lucario looks like its got a red dot on its fore head, dawn looks like she has a bad concussion, and something bothers me about lucas
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ok heres an update, i changed the colors on some of my trainers ows, i decided to use these nioce colors from the pokesho pixel art thingy
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gameheros-1.png i edited silver a bit added mirror b. and changed the colors on red blue green kris silver dawn may and brendan also heres some new pokemon ows i added the zubat family, cynda quil and seviper and a new winter cody http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-9.png EDIT: added monferno and ambipom http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-10.png |
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For the Pokémon, what style are you aiming for? If it's Fr/Lg, you're so far off. Also, Coronis already made all 1st and 2nd gen in Fr/Lg style. None of them are in-proportion and/or shaped correctly. Zubat is all messed up. Gligar's head is to big. Larivtar looks anerexic, needs to be widened. Skiploom's feet are bigger than anything, make them much smaller. Cyndaquil is also WAY to skinny. Shuppet is too tall. (Body) Bannete's eyes are to small. Wurmple's head is too fat, try making a scratch instead of an edit of Caterpie. Seviper is all messed up. Turtwig is too tall. (Body) Piplup is too tall. (Body) Chimchar is all messed up. Starly is decent but it looks nothing like Starly. Riolu is missing allot of it's other colors and it's eyes are too big. Lucario is all messed up. Munchlax is all messed up. Manaphy is all messed up. Leafeon is too tall and skinny. (Head) Glaceon is too tall and skinny. (Head) Buizel is too tall. (Body) Ambipom, Golbat, Crobat, and Infernape is are all messed up. Arceus' shading needs to be fixed. If I said "is all messed up" it means they have too many faults and should be remade completely. Also, don't use those template/frames for the Pokémon. They don't work. Not every Pokémon that is that size is that skinny. Scratch them all from now on. EDIT: Forgot to mention, Miror B's hair shouldn't have any black in it. Use a blue for the white side, and a brown for the red side. |
...ok um...ill fix wally and silver, but my ow style is proportionate, i try to make the pokemon in their real height, i dont really like the way nintendo does their sprites, so i stick with proportions.
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wally's hair looks like its glowing. freaky. they're all pretty good, but i dont like the weedle-ish wurmple.
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I agree.. wurmple really looks like a weedle or so, more of a splice of wurmple/weedle to me...
try to fix that ok? and your sprites are really awsome! |
ok well i guess ill update...i fixed some of the pokemon over worlds, but only some, others i edited and others i left, i also edited the trainer ows, so maybe now theyre perfect, and finally i did my character in g/s/c style, so yea
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-11.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gameheros-2.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gsccody.png with this i thopught it would be nice to include his two pokemon, zubat and tentacool, he now also has custom flying, surfing and using a pokemon, i am aware the backsprite is bad, im still workin on it |
hey Kage, can ya do me a favor and make a remake of gary oak's sprites but in his lab coat? if not its fine. love the work so far though
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this is not a request shop, therefor i can not take requests, but here are some old ones, http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/profgary.png
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o im sorry man but thankz for the old ones. needed him for my game. anyways thankz for replyin and nice trainer sprites
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still dont like the weedle/wurmple. and the fr/lg male is way to red.
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edited reds color
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gameheros-3.png most lkely i will soon have up an anime version |
yay. they look pretty good now. but dawn still has a big bump on her head
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ok well here it is
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/animecharacters.png heres the order ash brock misty gary james jesse richie tracey may max drew harley dawn zoey paul |
Those r kool KageX! ^^
Keep up the great work! ^^ |
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Not enough contrast on Brock. I can barely see shading in his hair, and his face is horribly re-colored. Try using his original Fr/Lg hair color. Misty, not enough contrast on her AG clothes, and you didn't change her hair color, so it's still the un-realistic yellow. Gary is the same as Ash (when I say that I mean that you just editted Green) which still leaves no room for detail. James is all messed up. Jessie is all messed up. Richie is an edit of Ash. Report to Ash again. Tracy's hair is messed up in every way. All messed up. May's DP outfit colors are way too dark. Use her in-battle sprite pallete. Max's hair lacks contrast. Drew's highlight is- too light. Harley is all messed up. Dawn's hat is 2 pixels too high. It needs to rest upon here eyes. Zoey's hair is flowing the wrong way, and the highlight is way to bright and looks plastic. Paul's hair lacks contrast. |
light its time for a sprite dump
heres my deviant art iconhttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/manaohy-1.png heres a poison eeveeution http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/toxieon.png here is a rock/ground eeveeution http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rockeon.png and finally a new map, its a pokmon school http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/schoolroute.png sorry for any type-os my keyboard isnt workig |
Hey those are cool! I really like your Rock Eeveelution!
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Your Poison Eevo is an obvious C+P fusion, but your rock Eevo is a bit better. Work on the dithering on the head.
I'm a big fan of the map. |
the only thing i dont like about the poison one is the tail. other than that it looks good.
the rock one is marvelous ^_^ i like the addition to route 1. all the tiles match up perfectly... i would add like, flowers or something out in front of the school kieep up the good work ^_^ |
wow! these are really good but one thing you should consider is putting them all onto one page so people can find them more easily.
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ok heres a small update
i made a gliscor ow and edited the zubat family's ows http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-12.png i gave the school some flowers http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/school2.png and a gsc revamp project http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/johtopeople-1.png so what do ya think |
hmm. the gliscor looks really cool :3
the flowers should be scattered around more, like a checkerboard? the gsc revamps look good so far kerep up the good work ;P |
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Cool! You´r Pokémon Recolours are very good! And you´r Scratch-Stuff are very good,too! |
Once again Bursty, I give you the tip of my hat.
The GSC Revamps are awesome, but the Golbat and Crobat look kinda disturbing. Good job! |
okay heres the ows seet i edited golbat and crobat
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-13.png is this any better |
hmm.
i liked the older crobat and golbat better :( |
...well atleat someone agrees with me
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Hey there, I was just wondering. If I could use one of the trainer sprites, Because I might be thinking of making comic ;P, So could I use one of them (I will give credit)
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http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/electrodesheet.png
i was bored and messing around in paint and i created this...call it what you will im gonna make more so yea, first one to guess the next pokemon gets to pick. but please dont say your pick in this thread pm it to me thanks have a great day |
hmm.
Its pretty obvious :P the animations are cool. but electrode could use more shading |
...its not gonna have shades at all its suppossed to look like old sprites so no shading, and i forgot if you know it please say you know it in the thread
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that lookks really good! (i always like stuff that looks like gsc!) er, i have a question, can you put the hat on the whynaut? im having trouble with it. (this was a request from one of my friends, hes just a begginer spriter!)
http://i38.*.com/2vd0fic.gif |
ok and everyone atomic reactor guessed it its hoothoot
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i like the rock eveelution it looks cool.
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XD cant wait to see it. and the one i requested :3 |
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i showed the sprite of whynaut to my friend, and he says he wants the bulb-thingy on its head to be hidden by the hat. can you do that or should i find someone else? ^_^'
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YES! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!! ^_^
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okay guys new sprite its gliscor http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gscgliscor.png but in g/s/c stlye can you guess what i used for a base...and no its not gligar
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that's pretty intense :3
was it scizor? |
Crobat of course. I mean its obvious no?
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i did use use those two but not as the base
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no idea <_<
just tell us. lol |
Murkrow then? Or is it um....golbat? Also i changed the gliscor in jiimstas thread so its your turn if yeh want to.
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yup it is golbat i used crobats pallet and scizors claws...and a highly edited gligar tail
and darkcookie i dont understand what youy mean |
I mean in jiimstas use of the third whatever in pixel projects. I did gliscors first edit.
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ok heres the hoothoot sheet the guesses are now open for the next sprite, and atomic reactor you may not guess
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hoothootsheet-1.png please post your guess here |
lol.
i simply love these sprites :3 there so cute XD |
im not really sure i like foresight...i might redo it unless you guys like it
also heres an edited gliscor g/s/c http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gscgliscor-1.png |
Lemme guess. It's mew. Might want to remove the eyes :]
I like them personally, I'm a semi-fan of the no shading style, but foresight is only okay, you might just want to give a red overlay to the sprite. Like, recolor the feathers so that the beam appears to be semi invisible. |
I think the next pokemon is abra
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...silver destiny you are so smart, please pm me your pokemon idea for the next sheet and nova pirate thanks for the advice ill try that, abra will be up within an hour
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quote"...silver destiny you are so smart," are you being sarcastic? Oh and if your thinking it in the angry sarcastic way im sorry that i put my guess in the post. Next time i will pm it to you..sorry
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nope you are right, i was just worried people would think it was mew or mewtwo but please pm me your choice of pokemon
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cool sprites i love them 8/10 ( can i be in ur PC family please :D i can be spazzy brother)
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heres the abra sheet, silver destiny youll pick will be the mystery pokemon for the next one, sorry but i like to meet my deadlines
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/abrasheet.png YOU MAY GUESS BUT YOU WILL NOT GET TO CHOOSE THE NEXT POKEMON SORRY also my finalized gliscor http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/gscgliscor-2.png |
Νext one is gliscor! I mean your obsessing with it so much i think its obvious.
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the abra looks wonderful.
The teleport animation looks good XD Idk about hidden power. shouldnt it be like, shooting out energy balls or something? |
Yeah it looks like gliscor ( can i be in ur PC family please :D i can be spazzy brother)
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Burst, I love 'em.
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kool sprites kagex, keep up the good work
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...well your all wrong and sure you can be me spazzy pc brother
well i have a louse animation videa of some of the sprites http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BineHWO23Ao |
Hey, that's pretty kool! ^^
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Your strong point would have to be your trainer sprites; I like your edits for the Misty sprites. I was irritated by the shadow Grovyle though; you should utilize black outline on it, as it looks too fluffy (pillowy). I also found your recolored Scyther quite cool... I usually dont comment on recolors, because its hard to mess something like that up.
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I know what pokemon it is... KageX when you get my pm can you tell me if it is right...
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...silver destiny you mske your guess in the thread, but you are right it is gligar i most likely will not have it until tomorrow so be patient
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...and mostlikely i was wrong, well heres a big update people, i have been messing around with sprites and i decided to make a giritina origin form it is only a wip but take a look
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wow man. that looks really good.
I can't wait to see it when its completed. |
i totally forgot to mention its not scratched...well it kinda is, all i had was that dumb base from a screenshot
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nice sprites they look good and overall nice just wanted to say nice
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well whatever, it still looks good.
I thought i saw that somewhere... |
ok well i do not plan on finishing the giritina because i realized i messed it up and i dont want to start over so yea...i have a simple fusion(somthing you rarelly hear me say)
heracross+ledyba+=http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/heracrosspreevo.png |
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Whoa, you're only 14 years old? =-o Wow, you did a great job. Keep up the good work.
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ooh ooh ooh! I LOVE BLU SCYTHER!!! All you need now is a blue scizor!
can you make one in petty blue? keep up the great work! |
ok well it seems i havent posted two of my other eeveelutions, i most likely posted these already but i dont remember doin it
flying http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/soareon-1.png ghost http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/souleon2.png also heres a wip of the heros in g/s/c style http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/heros.png and finally some rips for pokemon diamond(bootleg) http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/telefangrips.png |
XD I'm loving the gsc heroes. they look great.
Brendans hair does look a lil odd though... =/ |
nice i like those pokemon recolers they look real nice
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Yes, u did post the eeveelutions before! :P
Also, I like the G/S/C OWs of Brenden and May! :D |
oh well i posted them twice, it doesnt matter
heres my first real iaww edit http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/measiaww.png and an update of my ow sheet http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-15.png added onix espeon and vaporeon |
what's iaww?
Whatever it is, it looks amazing 0_0 all the shading and outlining looks great. something about espeon and vaporeon bother me =/ the outline perhaps? |
vapereon and espeon need there tails in there sprite :)
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