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I especially like your devamps
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Yeah, Judah, there is a rule requiring you post with an elaborate comment/constructive criticism, please follow it in future. |
Nice work on them!
They are all rather spiffing! XD Ok, feedback =] Your very first trainer with the brown hair, I don't like it very much, also, it looks different in the over world view at the bottom. Or is it just me? O_o If it isn't me, a little continuity error! XD The other two are beautiful. The Pokemon revamps are good. The only two I don't like are Pachirisu and Turtwig. For some reason, they don't look right. Pachirisu's eyes don't seem to line up for some reason, I think I am having a psychedelic moment here. Turtwig's colour looks a little off to me... The clone's are stunning. Really well done, as are the family. Except for weird brown hair dude! XD In the "other" section, I love the running trainers, the shadowing and physics are beautifully captured and displayed. Again, are the first and second the same trainer? If so, the hair looks different again to me... If not ignore the point above! Hahaha! Hope that is alright ><' Overall, I give your work a 7/10 I like a lot of it :D |
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oh and no the running people are not the same person also heres a 100% scratch sprite of me wip http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newscratchme.png im not sure if i ever showed these, but if i did oh well its may in contest attire http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/contestentry-1.png heres some awesome d/p/pt ows...i think theyre ok...ish http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpptows.png and just reposting this cause no one said anything and i like to look at it move haha http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/music.gif |
hey guys did you know that when you dont post i get to talk to myself more!!! wooooooooo!!!(yes im being sarcastic if it wasnt overly obvious)
i edited my g/s/c silver sprite to look like the new hg/ss design http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsssilver.png now heres a comparison http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/silverda.png and heres the new gold and silver together http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsslogo.png |
Hmmm ... Kage ..... you are doing great :) wow you really have become a sprite lord huh?? that's cool :)
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Wow, these sprites are amazing. I haven't been through the entire thread, but the sprites I've seen look very good. I like the new Gold and Silver, they are excellent. I think Silver now looks like a sort of leather jacket wearing biker guy (or something). The Silver in the new sprite looks a little older than the one in the old sprite (I didn't mean it not to make sense, honest). The new one looks more "teenagery".
However, your new Gold looks almost as if he is wearing an Elizebethan ruff-thingy round his neck for some reason. Anyway, your sprites are all fantastic. ;) |
Silver, looks fat. Try putting some space between his arm, and his body.
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His arm to the right looks odd. make it separated.
and his face is somewhat slanted. (good enough fox?) |
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new riley http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rileylog.png revamped pc family http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newpcfamily.png entry in the june contest http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry.png a little walking me http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/Burst_ninja_lives2.gif hg/ss starter rips http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgssstarters.png |
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Anyhow, your stuff looks great, as always... keep up the wonderful updates! Keep Spriting! P.S. Don't you love talking to yourself? ^_^ |
Oh, I'm so sorry, the HGSS Silver. About your Chikorita rip, I happen to have a CoroCoro (being in Japan and all), and it's more like this.
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5426/chikorita.png You don't mind do you? |
oh well i ripped that one from the official hgss website screenshots...so idk
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Eh. I didn't do a good fix up as it is. The only bad thing I see is that a girl in the middle is obviously Gardenia
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Woo! I'm in your PC family!
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me... I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;] |
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Anyways the revamp pc family looks good~ Except the nerd on the far right his shading need work |
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EDIT: lol i forgot the sprite ok this is a fr/lg map of noken. this is my first time trying this so please be brutal http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newnoken.png |
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I really don't know how to rate these kinds of maps because I haven't tried this out myself I don't really like it that much but it might look better in DP style |
I have the same notion as as Chibi... i have never done one of those... so i really couldn't be "brutal"...
from a visual, stand back i'd say that the islands are too thin, so the path markers kinda overtake the green... it's just a bit visually unpleasing, to me anyhow... |
Wow, great first try jimmy. I on the other-hand, have done maps like these. And it looks really good.
But they are right, the land itself needs to be thicker. Maybe add some tiny pieces of land in the bottom right and left corners just to balance it out. They don't have to have routes or towns, just make them unimportant islands. |
Damn it's hot outside!
Yeah the land around the map is to skinny, and there isn't enough of it. Looks like i'll be surfin for a while. Good first try. |
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we mean the actual islands themselves... they are too thin... on the map, the yellow path portions are too invading... they take up the green, you need some green around the yellow... i think...
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ok im not trying to be rude or anything and not listen to crit, but its suppossed to look that way and i want to keep it the way i originally desinged it.
now i have a queation which of these is the best http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry.pnghttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry2.pnghttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry3.png |
The last one looks the best to me.
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The 2nd one is the best.
It is well put together and established. The first one looks like you had to many ideas just crammed into one thing. The last one is sweet too. That's that sprite you made right?. The evo of Sharpedo? Megalo somethin. |
yea the third one is a guy riding on shargodon
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Hey! It's your work, and i always say the artist has final word of what it looks like... ya know!
It's good looking, but i think it's just that... anyhow, i like the second one... the first one seemed a bit misproportioned... with kage and the rock... it was also an awkward pose... the third one is nice, but it think it's just a bit too much going on with that one... i like the second one b/c it has great elements of shading, as well as it's nicely balanced... it would definitely place high in the contest... that's what i assume it is... |
ok so i guess ill be chaning my entry to the second sprite, thanks guys.
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Why which one did you want to enter?
The third one is also good because of the originality but you might get deducted for it not being a real pokemon. |
well it needed to be a character any character so any of them would do, but i did reenter using the second one.
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Wow. First pixel thread I look at and I see this.
The amount of effort and attention to detail that's gone into this work is stunning. Keep on with the good work and I hope to see some more amazing things in the near future. |
I love your fusion of Mismagius and Gardevoir.
I could see it really looking like that! |
I love your work. OWs are beautiful. My rate for all your work 10000/10.
And you can do Gabite and Garchomp OWs |
You have done a great job with the sprites.
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wooow can we use some
you will get credits |
Pretty nice to be honest nice
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6 posts 6 oppertunities to give crit 6 oppertunities to help me put 6 oppertunities to get better 6 reasons why im closing this thread bye |
Oh jeesh... not this whole "close my thread" thing again... don't mind them, just wait for Fox to come by and roast them... anyhow:
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newpcfamily.png - The first guy on the far left is nicely done, my only thing here is that the blue of his pants have to much of a different tone between the second and the lightest... - It's really hard to see the shading in the second guy's black shirt... maybe lighten up the secondary tone... -The third guy looks great, just his face shading doesn't make sense... all the lights bunched in the center of his face, none touches the outside of his head... i don't think a visor would create that effect... - Fourth guy looks awesome... just his shirt shading is a bit square... - no complaints ^_^ on fifth (kagex)... or the girl after him, i like the hair on her... you seem to have hair down really good! - the seventh guy's shading is kinda distraughting... it's WAY TOO different in the tones... between the second and the lightest... second needs to be tone up brighter... - gardenia girl needs some more shading done to her skirt... it's a bit bland, but nevertheless, it looks good... - ninth guy is actually REALLY NICELY DONE... maybe darken the lightest tone of his pants a wee bit, it stands out a bit too much... - again, the black needs to be differentiated on these tenth, eleventh and twelveth people... - last guy needs some more shading difference in his pants... and it looks funny how his shoes are the same color as his clothes... maybe change that up... Either way, these are great poses, edits and scratches... sorry I really didn't say anything on them earlier... anyhow, nice job! Keep up the great work! POST SOME NEW STUFF... GIVE US STUFF TO SEE!!! ^_^ Keep Spriting! |
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You might just want to darken it up Burst, that's all. Also, I think the shirt may want to be done up a little more, shading can be fixed. Anyway, all in all, great sprites. |
Closing upon request of the thread owner.
Wow, well done guys, the lack of criticism and useful comments has caused yet another talented individual to want to have their showcase closed. Let this be a lesson to you all, never mind getting infracted or whatever, your constant breaking of the crit rule is casuing other peoples threads to be closed. |
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