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= GPR = May 9th, 2009 10:44 PM

Hello KageX,

Got some crit for ya!

Riprock:

It really does not seem to be pokemon styled... it is first of all, black and white, which makes it look like it belongs in red/blue/yellow... so i was figuring, maybe you might want to add some earthy tones into the headstone, maybe make it a bronzy gray?

As for the little ghost guy, he's in need of some color as well. I know he's a ghost, but maybe make him transparent? Maybe shade him so you can see the headstone through his body? I was also thinking that some bluish tone wouldn't do him harm...

It's your sprite, so by all means, do what you feel works best! These are just some suggestions. As for shading, it looks great, except where the hands fall on the headstone. Shouldn't there be dark spots to ther right of the hands, signifying shading? The only other thing i could really crit on would be the outlining on the white parts. Maybe tone it down it down a bit to a lighter gray...just because the dark gray seems too...well, dark.

Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see more!

Keep Spriting!

BurstX May 11th, 2009 12:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4628429)
Hello KageX,

Got some crit for ya!

Riprock:

It really does not seem to be pokemon styled... it is first of all, black and white, which makes it look like it belongs in red/blue/yellow... so i was figuring, maybe you might want to add some earthy tones into the headstone, maybe make it a bronzy gray?

As for the little ghost guy, he's in need of some color as well. I know he's a ghost, but maybe make him transparent? Maybe shade him so you can see the headstone through his body? I was also thinking that some bluish tone wouldn't do him harm...

It's your sprite, so by all means, do what you feel works best! These are just some suggestions. As for shading, it looks great, except where the hands fall on the headstone. Shouldn't there be dark spots to ther right of the hands, signifying shading? The only other thing i could really crit on would be the outlining on the white parts. Maybe tone it down it down a bit to a lighter gray...just because the dark gray seems too...well, dark.

Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see more!

Keep Spriting!

...that is a lot of crit, thank you my good man...ok

i will not change the design thats out of the question
the shading has been fixed but i accidentally uploaded the first version of the sprite
i dont care if its not pokemon styled, as long as it looks like what im trying to sprite
as for the colors i used onix so...yea i dont think i can get any more earthy...lol

and i need some advice, but this comes with a threat. i have an edit of an old sprite and idk which one to use.
so until friday you can tell me which is better and on friday ill decide which to use.
the problem with this is if i dont get a solid choice of sprite and crit somewhere in your post im closing this topic.
im sick of very little crit.
ok so heres the sprite
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/1idk.png
which is better?

GFA May 11th, 2009 12:57 PM

The one on the left. Could we see a zoomed out version?

BurstX May 11th, 2009 1:42 PM

a solid choice of sprite and crit somewhere in your post im closing this topic.
alright, i guess this topic be gone, can a mod please close this.

well guys it was fun...adios

Atomic Reactor May 11th, 2009 6:02 PM

They're both good. But i like the pose of the right one better.
I would suggest using a dark purple on the outline of the head, since it would be closer to the light source. It's kinda hard to crit it anymore than that...

GFA May 11th, 2009 6:19 PM

Sorry about that Kage, I like the lefts wings layout is much better and I like the shading more. (I guess that's just opinionated though) Also the one on the right. Its arms are all short and stubby, not really threatening at all.

= GPR = May 12th, 2009 7:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4632866)
a solid choice of sprite and crit somewhere in your post im closing this topic.
alright, i guess this topic be gone, can a mod please close this.

well guys it was fun...adios


HAha...haha...no!

Imagine me sprawling my arms over this thread! KageX...don't let a bunch of newbie spammers ruin your hard work! This thread is great, it just needs to be..."refined".

Anyhow...
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/1idk.png
The wings of the second one blend in too much into the chest. That is why the first one's wings look better. Yet the second one's feet make more sense. the spacing looks nice on them. And the arms... the second one's pose is better, but the arms need a bit more lenght. So...

Maybe pose it with the first one's wings, and the seconds one's feet and arms. Just make the arms a bit longer! That's my ideas on it... take it as you may.

Need i say it? Please don't close your thread!

KEEP SPRITING!!!

GFA May 15th, 2009 5:20 PM

Also, something really subtle, but, I think it looks better if you used the dark red outline on the base of the arm instead of covering it with the dark purple head outline

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9619/gliscorkagex.png

--

Hey KageX, glad your keeping the thread open, I really like that newest Team Pose, the hair looks kind of funny though ... because it perfectly smooth, then all of a sudden, it get crinkled. I don't know if that's hair, or what, but I really don't like it. Sorry :P

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 6:03 AM

the only reason there is purple over the red is because gliscor has like mini spikes over his arms, so i made it come to a point.

now for sprites

heres my character hunter from pokemon odd in the evolution of his outfits http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dphunterv2-2.png
revamped gold http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/golddppt-1.png
me in fr/lg style http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rdlogme.png (this sprite will be appearing in ruby destiny L.O.G.!!!!!!!)
and finally some trainer devamps for Pokemon: Overthrone http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/overthronedevamps.png

overthrone is my sprite comic that will be coming in the summer. its gonna be in g/s/c style and that is finalized.

heres my attempted rip of chickorita from hgss http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsschicko.png

and my new ow sheethttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-22.pngnow including cherrim edited infernape and gliscor and staraptor and lunatone and solrock

Chibi Robo May 22nd, 2009 6:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4663079)
the only reason there is purple over the red is because gliscor has like mini spikes over his arms, so i made it come to a point.

now for sprites

heres my character hunter from pokemon odd in the evolution of his outfits http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dphunterv2-2.png
revamped gold http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/golddppt-1.png
me in fr/lg style http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rdlogme.png (this sprite will be appearing in ruby destiny L.O.G.!!!!!!!)
and finally some trainer devamps for Pokemon: Overthrone http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/overthronedevamps.png

overthrone is my sprite comic that will be coming in the summer. its gonna be in g/s/c style and that is finalized.

heres my attempted rip of chickorita from hgss http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsschicko.png

and my new ow sheethttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/myows-22.pngnow including cherrim edited infernape and gliscor and staraptor and lunatone and solrock

As usual the gsc sprites are fantastic
I already gave you c+c on the gold sprite on DA
on the gba sprite for pokemon odd his OW bandanna looks ummmm odd
FIX IT!
Your welcome kage!

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 12:23 PM

whick one???? theres 2 different ones the r/s/e one and the fr/lg one?????

GFA May 22nd, 2009 12:34 PM

Mhmm.... I see, I like your newest Hunter, the googles are a nice touch

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 12:37 PM

why thankyou, im beginning to become a fan of goggles...haha

GFA May 22nd, 2009 12:42 PM

To much Digimon! lol. The previous one had to much yellow, the chain was a nice touch though... Maybe you could try to incorporate it into your current design

edit: Yipes, 50 posts from 1,000!

Atomic Reactor May 22nd, 2009 12:57 PM

Golds shorts... are to.. short? and i just think his face looks weird.
Everything else looks "stellar"

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 1:02 PM

dude you did not just say stellar, hahaha

GFA May 22nd, 2009 1:27 PM

I partially agree with AR. The new Golds shorts are kind of giving off a "I like short shorts" vibe. As for the original, I think he's fine. Maybe it has to do with the way the legs are twisted. Honesty, I haven't a clue

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 1:34 PM

BUT I LOVE SHORT SHORTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok just a few more devamps
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/overthronedevamps-1.png
guess who the last two are and you get a devamp

Chibi Robo May 22nd, 2009 2:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4664075)
BUT I LOVE SHORT SHORTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok just a few more devamps
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/overthronedevamps-1.png
guess who the last two are and you get a devamp

The 4th sprite is me :D
Looks awesome kage!

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 2:48 PM

well im very glad you like it, but dont guess the other one you already have a devamp

Logan May 22nd, 2009 2:50 PM

And isn't the last one gp_arts39's sprite? xD

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 2:50 PM

indeed it is!!!
so i guess you get a devamp

Chibi Robo May 22nd, 2009 2:53 PM

I guess all of us are gonna be gcs sprites
YAYZERS
Didn't notice gp was in there yay two of my spriting buddies are in there!

BurstX May 22nd, 2009 2:55 PM

hahaha, ok so goodies you can either give me a picture a sprite or a very vivid description of what you would like me to devamp

GFA May 22nd, 2009 7:14 PM

Pedophile! Kidding... It's really cool that your spriting other people. I think design is the hardest part. that being the main reason I don't create many fan characters. Obviously, you don't have that problem


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