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*Nayz* June 7th, 2009 3:49 PM

I especially like your devamps

BurstX June 7th, 2009 4:00 PM

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Originally Posted by L_Judah (Post 4726861)
I especially like your devamps

i especially like your critique

Fox♠ June 10th, 2009 7:02 AM

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Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4726910)
i especially like your critique

See that's why I love having you in Pixel Arts.

Yeah, Judah, there is a rule requiring you post with an elaborate comment/constructive criticism, please follow it in future.

Captain Fabio June 10th, 2009 7:36 AM

Nice work on them!
They are all rather spiffing! XD

Ok, feedback =]

Your very first trainer with the brown hair, I don't like it very much, also, it looks different in the over world view at the bottom. Or is it just me? O_o
If it isn't me, a little continuity error! XD
The other two are beautiful.

The Pokemon revamps are good. The only two I don't like are Pachirisu and Turtwig. For some reason, they don't look right. Pachirisu's eyes don't seem to line up for some reason, I think I am having a psychedelic moment here.
Turtwig's colour looks a little off to me...

The clone's are stunning. Really well done, as are the family. Except for weird brown hair dude! XD

In the "other" section, I love the running trainers, the shadowing and physics are beautifully captured and displayed. Again, are the first and second the same trainer? If so, the hair looks different again to me...
If not ignore the point above! Hahaha!

Hope that is alright ><'

Overall, I give your work a 7/10
I like a lot of it :D

BurstX June 10th, 2009 1:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Fox♠ (Post 4735378)
See that's why I love having you in Pixel Arts.

Yeah, Judah, there is a rule requiring you post with an elaborate comment/constructive criticism, please follow it in future.

hahaha thanks, you gotta have a sarcastic rule loving guy everywhere, its just necessary.

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Originally Posted by Alinthea (Post 4735448)
Nice work on them!
They are all rather spiffing! XD

Ok, feedback =]

Your very first trainer with the brown hair, I don't like it very much, also, it looks different in the over world view at the bottom. Or is it just me? O_o
If it isn't me, a little continuity error! XD
The other two are beautiful.

The Pokemon revamps are good. The only two I don't like are Pachirisu and Turtwig. For some reason, they don't look right. Pachirisu's eyes don't seem to line up for some reason, I think I am having a psychedelic moment here.
Turtwig's colour looks a little off to me...

The clone's are stunning. Really well done, as are the family. Except for weird brown hair dude! XD

In the "other" section, I love the running trainers, the shadowing and physics are beautifully captured and displayed. Again, are the first and second the same trainer? If so, the hair looks different again to me...
If not ignore the point above! Hahaha!

Hope that is alright ><'

Overall, I give your work a 7/10
I like a lot of it :D

...um ok for starters everything on the first page is old gross stuff, im lazy and i dont update it so id suggest looking throuhg the thread if you liked what you see.

oh and no the running people are not the same person

also
heres a 100% scratch sprite of me wip http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newscratchme.png
im not sure if i ever showed these, but if i did oh well its may in contest attire http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/contestentry-1.png
heres some awesome d/p/pt ows...i think theyre ok...ish http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpptows.png
and just reposting this cause no one said anything and i like to look at it move haha http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/music.gif

BurstX June 11th, 2009 12:53 PM

hey guys did you know that when you dont post i get to talk to myself more!!! wooooooooo!!!(yes im being sarcastic if it wasnt overly obvious)

i edited my g/s/c silver sprite to look like the new hg/ss design http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsssilver.png

now heres a comparison http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/silverda.png

and heres the new gold and silver together http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgsslogo.png

Saurav June 11th, 2009 3:24 PM

Hmmm ... Kage ..... you are doing great :) wow you really have become a sprite lord huh?? that's cool :)

thelaytonmobile June 12th, 2009 6:25 AM

Wow, these sprites are amazing. I haven't been through the entire thread, but the sprites I've seen look very good. I like the new Gold and Silver, they are excellent. I think Silver now looks like a sort of leather jacket wearing biker guy (or something). The Silver in the new sprite looks a little older than the one in the old sprite (I didn't mean it not to make sense, honest). The new one looks more "teenagery".
However, your new Gold looks almost as if he is wearing an Elizebethan ruff-thingy round his neck for some reason.
Anyway, your sprites are all fantastic. ;)

GFA June 14th, 2009 5:35 PM

Silver, looks fat. Try putting some space between his arm, and his body.

Blazers June 14th, 2009 5:41 PM

His arm to the right looks odd. make it separated.
and his face is somewhat slanted.
(good enough fox?)

BurstX June 15th, 2009 3:20 PM

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Originally Posted by GFA (Post 4748766)
Silver, looks fat. Try putting some space between his arm, and his body.

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Originally Posted by Blazers (Post 4748782)
His arm to the right looks odd. make it separated.
and his face is somewhat slanted.
(good enough fox?)

...which one or both?

new riley http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rileylog.png
revamped pc family http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newpcfamily.png
entry in the june contest http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry.png
a little walking me http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/Burst_ninja_lives2.gif
hg/ss starter rips http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgssstarters.png

= GPR = June 16th, 2009 6:15 PM

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Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4750941)
...which one or both?

new riley http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/rileylog.png
The face seems so crowded on the battle pose... there's too much black going on there... i can't really decipher what every thing is, it kinda looks like he has an eye patch? Anyhow, it's all too squished...

...the arm on left also seems a bit conical... it comes outward funny...
revamped pc family http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newpcfamily.png
i'm not even gonna try guessing this time...
entry in the june contest http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry.png
the stomach seems a bit awkward... the shading that is... maybe it's the diveting's angle... i'm not sure... but i'm not a fan of it...
a little walking me http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/Burst_ninja_lives2.gif
excellent... can't say nothing bad about this... i like the hair, btw...
hg/ss starter rips http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/hgssstarters.png
your like the sixth person to post these rips... they look good though ^_^
i still think it look funny on the left side of cyndiquil's head... it looks like he has brown outlining... from afar... and i don't like how todo's left side tooth looks... it kinda sits out there... but that's nothing you can control, i guess ^^



Anyhow, your stuff looks great, as always... keep up the wonderful updates!

Keep Spriting!

P.S. Don't you love talking to yourself? ^_^

GFA June 18th, 2009 4:37 PM

Oh, I'm so sorry, the HGSS Silver. About your Chikorita rip, I happen to have a CoroCoro (being in Japan and all), and it's more like this.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5426/chikorita.png
You don't mind do you?

BurstX June 18th, 2009 4:45 PM

oh well i ripped that one from the official hgss website screenshots...so idk

GFA June 18th, 2009 4:52 PM

Eh. I didn't do a good fix up as it is. The only bad thing I see is that a girl in the middle is obviously Gardenia

Atomic Reactor June 18th, 2009 5:49 PM

Woo! I'm in your PC family!
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me...
I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;]

Chibi Robo June 18th, 2009 6:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Atomic Reactor (Post 4761306)
Woo! I'm in your PC family!
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me...
I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;]

Lucky atomic gets too be in kage's PC family......
Anyways the revamp pc family looks good~
Except the nerd on the far right his shading need work

BurstX June 19th, 2009 5:19 AM

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Originally Posted by GFA (Post 4761099)
Eh. I didn't do a good fix up as it is. The only bad thing I see is that a girl in the middle is obviously Gardenia

well thats how she wantyed her sprite to look

Quote:

Originally Posted by Atomic Reactor (Post 4761306)
Woo! I'm in your PC family!
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me...
I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;]

ok well send me that sprite and ill fix it asap!

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Originally Posted by Chibi Robo (Post 4761365)
Lucky atomic gets too be in kage's PC family......
Anyways the revamp pc family looks good~
Except the nerd on the far right his shading need work

now what makes you think hes a nerd? because he is indeed not a nerd but one of the coolest people that i know here.

EDIT: lol i forgot the sprite
ok this is a fr/lg map of noken. this is my first time trying this so please be brutal
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newnoken.png

Chibi Robo June 19th, 2009 6:35 AM

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Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4762373)
well thats how she wantyed her sprite to look



ok well send me that sprite and ill fix it asap!



now what makes you think hes a nerd? because he is indeed not a nerd but one of the coolest people that i know here.

EDIT: lol i forgot the sprite
ok this is a fr/lg map of noken. this is my first time trying this so please be brutal
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/newnoken.png

Sorry Kage anyways the sprite needs work on his shading

I really don't know how to rate these kinds of maps because I haven't tried this out myself I don't really like it that much but it might look better in DP style

= GPR = June 19th, 2009 7:08 AM

I have the same notion as as Chibi... i have never done one of those... so i really couldn't be "brutal"...

from a visual, stand back i'd say that the islands are too thin, so the path markers kinda overtake the green... it's just a bit visually unpleasing, to me anyhow...

Atomic Reactor June 19th, 2009 9:51 AM

Wow, great first try jimmy. I on the other-hand, have done maps like these. And it looks really good.
But they are right, the land itself needs to be thicker. Maybe add some tiny pieces of land in the bottom right and left corners just to balance it out. They don't have to have routes or towns, just make them unimportant islands.

Blazers June 19th, 2009 9:54 AM

Damn it's hot outside!
Yeah the land around the map is to skinny, and there isn't enough of it.
Looks like i'll be surfin for a while.
Good first try.

BurstX June 19th, 2009 11:50 AM

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Originally Posted by = GPR = (Post 4762653)
I have the same notion as as Chibi... i have never done one of those... so i really couldn't be "brutal"...

from a visual, stand back i'd say that the islands are too thin, so the path markers kinda overtake the green... it's just a bit visually unpleasing, to me anyhow...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Atomic Reactor (Post 4763046)
Wow, great first try jimmy. I on the other-hand, have done maps like these. And it looks really good.
But they are right, the land itself needs to be thicker. Maybe add some tiny pieces of land in the bottom right and left corners just to balance it out. They don't have to have routes or towns, just make them unimportant islands.

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Originally Posted by Blazers (Post 4763059)
Damn it's hot outside!
Yeah the land around the map is to skinny, and there isn't enough of it.
Looks like i'll be surfin for a while.
Good first try.

ok im aware some of the places look thin, but im basing it off my original image. its suppossed to look thin. i guess i can add in a acouple of unimportant islnads and such.

= GPR = June 20th, 2009 9:37 AM

we mean the actual islands themselves... they are too thin... on the map, the yellow path portions are too invading... they take up the green, you need some green around the yellow... i think...

BurstX June 20th, 2009 4:55 PM

ok im not trying to be rude or anything and not listen to crit, but its suppossed to look that way and i want to keep it the way i originally desinged it.

now i have a queation which of these is the best
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry.pnghttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry2.pnghttp://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/junecontestentry3.png


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