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Perpetr8r March 16th, 2008 5:02 PM

Scone, Mr Furret?
 
Eh heh... I thought I'd get people's opinions on a recent drawing of mine.

What do you think?

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m89/PokemonRPReborn/furret-1.jpg

In case you were wondering, it was a request XD

Anastasia.R March 16th, 2008 6:04 PM

That hat is a bit plain to me.

You might need some highlights. The mouth is kind of displaced. Still not bad. ;)

~A.R

Perpetr8r March 16th, 2008 7:21 PM

True... I actually forgot the hat. I should probably go back and touch that up...

Galbinus March 24th, 2008 2:42 PM

It's really cute! :3 Nice and simple cellshading.

As for critique, I think that you have to imagine the Furret as more of a 3D object. At the moment, the shading makes it look rather flat at some places (namely, the tail). Don't be afraid to try out more dynamic shadows.

Also, the lines look a little wobbly for some reason. But is this because you have a mouse? I personally have a tablet and have rarely encountered this sort of problem.

All in all, though, good job. :]

Binary March 25th, 2008 8:41 AM

Wow, the furret looks nice. The shading is abit poor as mentioned above and flat at some places. Othe than that, its very good.

Obidy March 25th, 2008 1:04 PM

haha i think im gunn give something like that a try..=P

Perpetr8r March 26th, 2008 3:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Galbinus (Post 3429379)
It's really cute! :3 Nice and simple cellshading.

As for critique, I think that you have to imagine the Furret as more of a 3D object. At the moment, the shading makes it look rather flat at some places (namely, the tail). Don't be afraid to try out more dynamic shadows.

Also, the lines look a little wobbly for some reason. But is this because you have a mouse? I personally have a tablet and have rarely encountered this sort of problem.

All in all, though, good job. :]

As a matter of fact, yes I did do that with a mouse. Well... I drew it, scanned it, and then "inked" it with the mouse and I was aware that it made the lines all... wobbly. As for shading, it's probably the second third time I've ever done shading on anything... so to be honest I don't really know what the heck I am doing. I did my best to sort of ad-lib but yeah, it's very new to me. Thanks for the critique, it does help me figure out what needs doing in the future. I guess shading practice is a good start...


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