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run_hard57 July 20th, 2004 7:50 PM

Christian Song Lyrics- But Then You Came
 
These are the lyrics from one of the many songs I've written.

BUT THEN YOU CAME

Dark tears
Hidden in secrecy
Longing for more
More than this simply complex existence
They have only ever known
Sinking slowly into quicksand
Hiding, running, screaming, pleading

But then you came
Brought me into your wonderful light
Took away the part of me that didn’t exist
And made me white
Stainless
Without blemish

Once more
Lost and wondering
Confused and frightened
Frightened by what could be
And how it might turn out
Will I make it after all?
It's all so hard to comprehend

But then you came
Brought me into your wonderful light
Took away the part of me that didn’t exist
And made me white
Stainless
Without blemish

Beaten down. Trodden upon. Thrown away. Rebuked. Denied.

But then you came
Brought me into your wonderful light
Took away the part of me that didn’t exist
And made me white
Stainless
Without blemish


Well now that the song is all written, I can see that these could use some work... Whatever.

Da_Green_Teddy August 6th, 2004 8:54 AM

Wow, it's nice so far! It could use a bit of improvement, but it has a good message.

Sarafina August 6th, 2004 1:24 PM

It could use just abit of improvement, don't get down on that though, it's pretty good, :D


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