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GreenStorm June 1st, 2008 5:42 AM

I just read it. Although I thought that you guys stopped because I haven't seen this thread with new posts.

Cobalt36 June 1st, 2008 8:02 AM

Nice comic! "Sex offenders, comic jokes, and still gay Weebo!" should have been the title :D!!! And, KageX, i wasn't aware it was your first and his sixth; it's good for your first attempt. Maybe you should include more bloody make-out deaths!!!

Keep it up guys, it looks good!

BurstX June 7th, 2008 8:26 AM

well im in the mood for an update, heres a preview for the new chapters

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/preview.png

Ridley June 7th, 2008 7:27 PM

Hey, I've been meaning to check out this comic but I never found the thread till now...Or maybe I didn't try that hard? Anyways I like the comics. Keep up the good work guys!

Weatherman, Kiyoshi June 28th, 2008 12:19 PM

*stops thread from dieing*

I don't think so.
because it's time for...

A NEW EPISODE!
okay guys, this one I don't recommend little children reading.
However, It's not up to the level that "My girlfriend who lives in Canada" was up to.
This one almosts hits the limit.
enjoy anyway.

28: Don't Complain About Censors

BurstX July 2nd, 2008 5:38 PM

...well i have good news bad news and somthing random

good news im gonna start a new comic
bad news battelers is over

random news i have two random comic strips in g/s/c style if you guys like it i may continue but im not sure

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/jhotojourney.png

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/ep2.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 2nd, 2008 6:02 PM

OMFG MORE NEWS:

New comic!

29: *Punt*

Hopefully the last comic didn't leave you guys TOO awkward.

BurstX July 3rd, 2008 5:25 AM

...that last panel wasnt ironic at all...lol ill update the first post

[NovaPirate] July 3rd, 2008 8:58 AM

KageX, what I find problematic with your comics is that you go to fast. You need to delve into the characters, really show us the history of the town. How do Marina and Jimmy know Cody? What was everyone's reaction, why were Marina and Jimmy there?

Also, work up a bit on grammar and speech bubble placement.

It should go like this;

First comment
Response
Second comment
Response

It goes from highest to lowest, in chronological order. Work on your grammar, capitalization, punctuation, etc. Just a few mistakes, but they bug me. (well/We'll p.s./P.S. cody/Cody)

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 5th, 2008 7:50 AM

One day late, But we still have a:

4th of July: Potato Salad

There is going to be a new special section for holiday comics.
Enjoy the first of the specials :D

Mitchman July 11th, 2008 12:26 AM

AHAHA 27 was awkawrd. But latios and latias thing was...intrsting. In a bad way. 28 now waseven better and that g/s comi kage was XD out loud/

jimsta July 11th, 2008 6:54 PM

Acha I would love to know were you get your PMD and PMD2 sprites please tell me. I know it says Spriters Resource but I cant find all(most) there?

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 11th, 2008 7:38 PM

Click

My favorite website for MD sprites not on the spriter's resource.
It's in spanish, BTW.
But don't worry, all the names are in english.

jimsta July 11th, 2008 7:46 PM

Cheers it will help alot with my comic

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 27th, 2008 6:40 PM

*KAboom*

Hey, guess what? So this factory doesn't keep flipping from active to almost dead, here are these little numbers to keep you guys occupied:

TLT (For all you don't know, The Lengendary Trio).

Okay, it's not what it was before. we got a better layout, and.. just read T_T
(BTW, the characters are not going to be R/S/E heros in Kanto. It's good ol' R/B/G/Y/FR/LG
characters! ^^

So, Here's TLT #1:

1: Red <3 Katrina the Grown-up Hitch

Mitchman July 29th, 2008 4:18 AM

Xd pretty funny acha. Pretty funny.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 29th, 2008 6:06 AM

It's funny how they're so easy to make, too.

2: COMMERCIALS!!!1 :D

3: Right in the Eye

4: Squirtle? M’kay

5: The Porti-Dex Button

that should keep you guys occupied!

Mitchman July 29th, 2008 8:24 AM

XD yeah for 5 minutes. But nonetheless its funny. its the porti-dex button! Also hmm that blue sure loves sweating.

jimsta July 29th, 2008 10:47 AM

I Loved Pokemon Odd will it still have new ones?

aggrononer612 July 29th, 2008 4:43 PM

they all look good i dont wat to say

Weatherman, Kiyoshi July 29th, 2008 6:26 PM

^^"

anyway, I found a problem in the pokedex pic, so here is a remake and new comics:

5 (Remake): The Porti-Dex Button

6: Just walk away...

7: OMFG!!!1

@ jimsta: Odd is not dead, I'm just fireing off these comics to keep the thread alive.
They are easier to make, and fun to see progress, so you guys have always something
to talk about :D

Mitchman July 29th, 2008 10:16 PM

XD De dee deeee! I love it plain love it.

[NovaPirate] July 30th, 2008 7:14 AM

I was hoping for a Magikarp. Darn. That would have just been ridiculous.

"When I evolve, I'LL GET YOU ALL!"

C'mon, it's Magikarp, that's like the number one Pokemon for funny abuse. Like kicking.
Anyways, the first couple comics were a little effy, the jokes weren't too funny. But you got back in the groove. Can you ask Kage if he is going to update, considering he hasn't shown up in forever.

BurstX July 30th, 2008 7:39 AM

why would anyone want an update from me my comics suck

[NovaPirate] July 30th, 2008 9:26 AM

Well alright then it looks like KageX is being a wimp for the time being so yeah.
If you post a comic, expect to get crit, can't take crit, then don't post your comic. Honestly, you're a pretty darn good spriter, just work on a plot and minor grammar issues and you'll be about as good as Acha, if not better. No kid.

You have good ideas, you just need to refine them. Trust me, my comics were .jpeg TUP comics with Red and Blue as main characters. I know I still can't keep a comic running, but I've practiced for probably about three years and I've grown a lot. You might want to go on an official hiatus, and practice comic making. Not all comics need to be posted. Unless you're really happy, most comics are just for practice. NovaPirate signing out. :]

Edit;
Acha, don't get sucked into a PokeChow copy. Please don't.


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