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Yamato-san September 30th, 2005 11:21 PM

Pokemarts are just your typical RPG shop in the games. In a more realistic setting, you would get food, Monster Balls, first-aid supplies, etc. either seperately from a variety of places that specialize in selling just that, or even get most of them altogether in an everday general store.

Dragonfree October 1st, 2005 5:18 AM

I included a PokéMart in The Quest for the Legends chapter four. (In the IALCOTN, that will most likely be in chapter five.)

x_X;; *keeps away from Serpent Syra's stuff in the future* Eep, overdescription. @[email protected]

Negrek October 1st, 2005 8:43 AM

I do use pokémarts. Generally, I view them as sort of a colossal megastore, a chain supported by the league where you can buy pretty much anything pokérelated. My characters really only go in there to buy your standard items, but they also stock stuff like pokémon toys, grooming supplies, etc... things for people who don't necessarily train but keep pokémon as pets or what have you.

Frostweaver October 1st, 2005 10:29 AM

I think Pokemarts only supply Pokemon related products. Anything else such as your general grocery can be found in the ordinary store.

It's just a special type of store, I think.


Hmm where can Lily be... ;o;


*smile?*

Harubi October 1st, 2005 2:55 PM

In my fiction Harubi buys stuff for his Pokémon at the Pokémarkt

oni flygon October 1st, 2005 9:06 PM

lol... sumbliminal advertising


Anyways, pokemarts aren't such a bad idea. Though sometimes, instead of filling up plot holes, they just overcrowd the chapter... if used in numerous ways. Just a mention of it works for me.

Lily October 2nd, 2005 12:49 PM

I disappeared for a few days. Needed to get SPP/PC off my mind. It helped, though.

Serpent Syra...I used to be his pair up. I'm so naive. @[email protected]

Act October 2nd, 2005 1:13 PM

The fic by SS I read was a one-shot, and it /was/ that bad. It made abolutely no sense, he confused words constantly, and it was so unproofread that... oy, it was just nonsensical.

:shrug: People think I'm a guy all the time. They'll be *****ing at me and be like, 'he, he, he did this!'

I find it funny. It really flattens someones argument.

As for 'marts, I sort of agree with Negrek... I thought they were almost like a McDonalds of pokemon supplies. You don't go to different places to get fries, a burger, and a drink, do you? So get all your pokemon needs at a Pokemart, and let the monopoly thrive ;)

pokejungle October 2nd, 2005 1:50 PM

Congrats on winning FFotM Dragonfree! =D Guilty was really well written ^^

Now I need to work hard on winning it =O My "What is an American?" report is incredibly good so far, if only I could transfer my skills into fanfics ;D

Negrek October 2nd, 2005 1:55 PM

Oh, I think I read that one-shot. The one about gyarados? I think it was nominated for something, so I went and read it. Yeah, I got to the end and was like... "Sooo... WTF was that about, again?"

And then there were all those reviewers who were going "Teh OMG so deep! It was so touching! A life lesson!" And I snickered and left because they were trying to make up for the fact that they had no clue what the heck was going on.

Heh, people think I'm a guy, too. Mai thought I was a guy, even. XD

pokejungle October 2nd, 2005 2:09 PM

NEGREK'S NOT A GUY!! TEH ZOMG!11!1!1! ;D

I always look at peoples genders. Not that that does much good on the internet @[email protected]; People think Katsuro is a female name apparently, so I've gotten some people thinking I'm female XD

Casual Billy October 2nd, 2005 2:34 PM

I thought I was the only one who thought SS had poor word choice! I started thinking I was missing something.

Anyway, pokemarts in fics? Cool. I used one in Worlds Away, kinda. It was a pokemon mall, and I got that idea from the Lilycove department store.

*tagline?*

pokejungle October 2nd, 2005 2:36 PM

Pokemart...I'll have to use one sometime @[email protected];

Maybe Lloyd can make a pitstop or something there.

Breezy October 2nd, 2005 2:52 PM

I'm sorry Katsuro, but I was one of the people that thought you were a girl too. :P

Which fic was it by Ry? Was it called Emerald Showers or somethin' like that? I know it had some descriptive color in it.

Or am I off and just typing random crap as usual? XP

LaTeR dAyZ!

Congrats to Dragonfree for getting FFotM!

pokejungle October 2nd, 2005 2:55 PM

It's ok Breezy. Apparently discerning if my Japanese name was male or female is a hard 0o;

And telling sex from a post is even harder XD

Negrek October 2nd, 2005 5:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Breezy
Which fic was it by Ry? Was it called Emerald Showers or somethin' like that? I know it had some descriptive color in it.

Nope. 'Twas Shadow Beauty, actually.

oni flygon October 2nd, 2005 5:48 PM

Sorry, no linking to other forums... General forum rules... not to mention it's a link to the... green forum...

Lily October 2nd, 2005 6:09 PM

www.sewebeeeegreenfowumssss.nneetttt omgz im advertising 8D!!11

¬¬ sorry. I had to do it.


I've read Shadow Beauty. Until now, I've always been envious of the descriptions, although that was my own blind mistake. Possibly.

Breezy October 2nd, 2005 6:20 PM

He has written a fic called Emerald Showers correct? Is Shadow Beauty about the Gyarados and Shadow Beauty about the Milotic? Maybe it's the other way around...

Ry does write well and his style fit well for fantasies (which he writes I believe), but he complicates fics that would of been suited better simplisticly.

Er. Yeah. Me and my twinny are so different. It makes me smile. :) I didn't know you two unpaired though Lileh. What happened if you mind me asking?

Linking to the green forum? Stop thinking such terrible thoughts demon children! :P

Negrek October 2nd, 2005 6:42 PM

Dang, first time I've been called out on that. Gotten away with it every other time...

Yeah, Shadow Beauty is the one that got nominated for the awards. It's about the Gyarados. I read the Milotic one, too. I thought it was marginally better, if not very rational.

Lily October 2nd, 2005 6:54 PM

I didn't want a pair up, truthfully. I only paired up with him in the first place because I can't refuse polite requests..

Simple stories can have the most complex meaning.

oni flygon October 2nd, 2005 7:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LilyPichu
www.sewebeeeegreenfowumssss.nneetttt omgz im advertising 8D!!11

¬¬ sorry. I had to do it.



Now, now...

You don't want me to tease you now, do you?

Lily October 2nd, 2005 7:28 PM

Look who's talking.

Baka. I teased you in the first place, so you retaliating would be futile in my aspect.

Green forums. Pink forums. Why does it matter? x_x

Casual Billy October 2nd, 2005 7:30 PM

Quote:

I didn't want a pair up, truthfully. I only paired up with him in the first place because I can't refuse polite requests..
Here's something I've been wondering: What exactly does a "pair up" entail? Does that mean you and Syra were like just buddies or something? I don't get it.

Also, have you guys noticed the super cool animation in my sig? Better than any dancing trapinch, I must say.

*tagline?*

Lily October 2nd, 2005 7:39 PM

A pair up..I can't really explain well. Now, if I was truly "close" to Syra, maybe I could have been sincerely paired up with him. But I wasn't. We were just mutual friends - good friends - nothing more, I suppose.

Your animation..I can't make sense of it..looks like some golden statue..++


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