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The Vince Knight August 1st, 2004 4:21 AM

Advanced Wars 4: Black hole's New plans! By D_M Inc.
 
Ok this is just A simple fanfiction of AW.
Comments are good to hear!

Chapter 1: The Black hole invitation!
--At Black hole--
Sturm: Hawke come here.
Hawke: What?
Sturm: Are the other COs doing what I asked them to do?
Hawke: Lash is buliding stuff in bluemoon,Flak is Buliding stuff in Orange star,Adder is buliding stuff in Yellow comet And I am terrizing green Earth.

--Orange Star--
Sami: Max,Andy! Black hole has risen again!
Max: I saw Flak buliding a Black cannon.
Andy: WHAT? A Black cannon?
Nell: You guys have to stop them.... Organize a Party invitation to all the Armys..
Max,Sami and Andy: O... Ok.
Nell: Did you guys just see a giant missle silo launch?
Max: Nope.

--Blue Moon--
(In Olaf's home town(Which is domolished))
Grit: Your hometown.... Is still domolished. But we will still build it!
Colin: Commander,a giant missle silo approching in 5 secs!
5.....
Olaf: WHAT?!?!? LETS GET OUTTA HERE!!!!!
4......
Colin: How the missle will....
3.....
Olaf: JUST RUN FOR GOODNESS SAKE!
Grit: RUNNNNN!!!!!
2.....
*They run very fast..... but then...*
1.....
0.....
KABOOM!!!!!!!!!
Grit: Whew....
Olaf: Not again!!!!
Colin: It's Black hole's!!!
Soldjer: We received this from Orange star...
Olaf: Hmm.... It's a invitation?!?!
Grit: Well I'll be.... I get to do some more target practice.... hehe....

--yellow comet--
Kanbei: ADDER BULIT A WHOLE BUNCH OF LASER CANNONS AND THE ARE GOING TO FIRE!
Sonja: I received A invitation from Orange star and now we should get going...
Sensei: THEY'RE FIREING NOW!!!
*They ecsape...*
BOOM!!!
Kanbei: There goes our startegy house.
Sonja: Let's go to Orange star...

--Green Earth--
Eagle: LET ME TAKE COMMAND!
Jess: NO ME!
Drake: Settle down.... God. Even Hawke hears us.
Hawke: So?
Soldjer: A invitation.... from Orange star.
Eagle: Good.... then we should... HEY!
Jess takes Eagle's battle copter and gets.
Eagle: HEY GET BACK HERE!
Drake: We can use my Sub!
Eagle: Fine!
They climb into the sub and get going.

--Black hole--
Hawke: A invitation from Orange star....
Lash: I'M GOING! TEEHEE,TOODLES!
Lash goes and flys off with a ship attached with a deathray.
Flak: Wait for me!
Adder: Me too!
Sturm: Sigh... I'm going too....
Hawke: Wait sir!

Will they Black hole Launch another attack?
Find out in Chapter 2: Black holes Pride and Joy,The deathray!

The Vince Knight August 1st, 2004 10:47 PM

Chapter 2: Black Hole's pride and Joy..... THE DEATHRAY!
--500 Metres away from Orange star....--
Lash: Teehee! The Deathray will fire soon!
Hawke: Just fire it.
Sturm: FIRE IT!
Lash: O.... OK!
It fires and shoots down... A box full of plans for destruction.
Lash: Opps....
Hawke: YOU FORGOT TO AIM IT!
Sturm: Sigh.
Flak: Uhhh... I was going to... Launch this missle silo on the ship....
Sturm: Launch in into the sea...
Flak: O...OK.
He lauches it it goes up and blast the boat.
Sturm: YOU FOOL!!!! DO U REALIZE WHAT YOU DONE????!!!
Flak: Uhhhh.....
Flak put a giant plug in the hole and the ship goes.
Sturm: Don't do it again.
Adder: There's A giant sub behind us....
Sturm: Who cares?

--Orange Star--
Max: This partys going to be a BLAST! I'm going to destory Grit's rockets!
Andy: It sure is.... It sure is.
Sami: The decorations are set.... we just have to wait tomorow.
Nell: Guys.... The Party's starting soon!
Grit brings his rockets with Olaf and Colin.
Grit: Hey Max,Nell!
Olaf: Blue moon is going in!
Colin: Can I build a base?
Max: MD tanks lets go!
Grit: What da?
Max gets his MD's and they shoot Grit's rockets.
Grit: Darn....
Olaf: Let's Play Spin the bottle while we are at it! Truth or Dare version!
Everyone: GOOD IDEA!
--Spin the bottle room--
Olaf: The Choices are....
Grit: Truth,Dare and strip.
Olaf: *Spins and lands on Grit*
Grit: What? DARE!
Olaf: I dare you to Use your rockets to kill one of Max's MD'S!
Grit: YES!
Grit fires his rockets at max's MD. BOOM!!!!
Max: NOOO!!!!!!

Chapter 3: (Coming soon) The Party 'O' doom!

Scyther5 August 1st, 2004 10:49 PM

Whoa, Awsome..I love it..I'm a big AW fan..good to see its getting some reginition!

God Of Water August 1st, 2004 11:01 PM

I give it 8.5 out of 10 its GREAT

The Vince Knight August 2nd, 2004 3:18 AM

Here's the good part!
Chapter 3: The Party 'O' DOOM!
--Orange star party--
Nell: *It lands on Olaf* Hehehe....
Olaf: ... Uhhh Truth?
Nell: Whats your Super CO. power?
Olaf: Uhhh.... I forgot But I remember what it does....

--Black hole ship--
Lash: We are almost there!
Sturm: Just a few seconds....
Flak: And?
Sturm: We are there,fool!
Flak: Oh.... It's been 7 days... I'll fire the damn Deathray.
Sturm,Lash,Hawke and Adder: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Flak Turns on the power and the deathray goes all the way to.....

--Orange Star party--
Nell: Do you hear a laser?
Olaf: Sounds like...
Grit: THE DEATHRAY!!!!
It goes through the Party walls.... And the Party now has 3 exits.

--Black Hole ship--
Flak: Opps;_;
Lash,Adder,Sturm and Hawke: We told you!
Flak: I made 2 new exits for the Party!
Sturm: You're..... FIRED!
Flak: Darn..... I hate this Job.
Flak jumps into the sea and gets bitten by a shark and dies.
Sturm: What an idiot...
Hawke: We need a new CO.
Vincent: Right here.
Sturm: What Co. Power and Super?
Vincent: Range of DOOM!:
Makes rockets,Artillery,missles and battle ship get ranged attack by 1 and all men get healed 2 hp. Also 2 hp is done to the enemy.
Flare ranged:
All men Get Powered up. Rockets,artillery and ranged stuff get ranged attacks by 3.
And all men get healed 2 hp. Also all men get movement +2.
Sturm: Wow... YOU'RE HIRED!
Vincent: YES!

Chapter 4: Black hole starts war again!

The Vince Knight August 4th, 2004 3:26 AM

Chapter 4: The blackhole War!

--Orange star party--
Flak: ...
Andy: FLAK!
Sami: Oh no...
Flak: I got dumped.....
Nell: Dumped? *Spins the bottle*
It lands on Andy.
Andy: ... Truth.
Nell: Tell us Ur-A-nus!
Andy: Ok. Ur-A-nus Is.... HEY!
Everyone: Hahahahah!
Flak: What?

--Black hole invasion Factory in Orange star--
Adder: I'm here...
Vincent: Go and beat em.
Sturm: Ready?

--Orange star party computers--
Everyone sees flags coming up in Orange star!
Flak: Oh no.
Everyone: Oh no,Black hole lAUCHED AN ATTACK AGAIN!

--Map--
A flag comes up.
Level: *
Co: Andy.
Enemy: Adder.
Objective: Defeat all enemys.
OS: 3 infrantry,1 APC
BH: 2 infrantry.

--Adder's revenge--
Andy: Adder.
Adder: Andy,Your back but not good enough to handle these men I have.
*Begin*
Day 1: Orange star.
Moves 3 infrantry to attack.
Day 1: Black hole.
Moves 2 infrantry.
Day 2: Orange Star.
Moves all infrantry,2 attack 1 and 1 attack 1. 1 dies.
Day 2: Black hole.
1 infrantry moved to attack a infrantry. OS infrantry number 1: 3 hp
Day 3: Orange star.
Move 2 infratry to attack their infrantry.
*BOOM!*
Adder: How?
Andy: Get outta here!
Adder: You'll see next time... You'll see...
Soldjer: A lab map sir!
Andy: Good.....

--Lab--
Vincent: These new rocket-tanks I'm devoloping are range attacks from 2-5 and can direct attack as well!
Adder: How much are they going to be?
Vincent: I dunno... But it's going to be about... 30,000...
Adder: Cheap and nasty.... hehe...

Will this so-called Rocket-tank invention plan be Blowed up?
Coming soon: Chapter 5: Vincent's Test invention!


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