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Pokemon Citrine Version
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:t243:Pokemon Citrine:t243: http://pokemon-safari.com/sitio/juegos/nds/ranger/guias/trio_johto.jpg :t244:STORY:t244: Team Rocket Members Attila and Hun have continued their chase of Raikou into the region of Citrine. They have decided to split up and have their own teams in order to take over the whole region and finaly capture Raikou. Meanwhile you are a kid in the small town of Frostvile whose dream is too follow in the footsteps of your family and become part of the Elite Four (your 2 brothers and your sister are current members). Your older brother helps you out (just like Steven did). Throughout the game you feat both Attila and Huns plans till after you visit the Volcano, Crystal Lake which awakens Entei and Suicune, then they have a battle in the final gyms town. You have to journey to the Sky Mountain and awaken Raikou to end this fued. But when all 3 cats meet a climactic battle ensues. One of your brothers and your sister come to help you by capturing Entei and Suicune, but it is up to you to silence Raikou before the citrine region suffers irreparable damages. http://archives.bulbagarden.net/w/upload/thumb/7/7a/Bashou5Fbuson.jpg/200px-Bashou5Fbuson.jpg ^Thats Hun(Left) and Attila(Right)^ :t245:FEATURES:t245: :pirate:Arg, Caution, thar be spoilers:pirate: Spoiler:
:t243:TASKS:t243: Just some stuff that comes to mind Released the Alpha Edit Cycling Road - Events up to the Volcano experiance(beta will have 2 gyms) Release Beta 1 Edit Events after Volcano- 6th Gym and maybe some sidequests(Beta will end at Fortree) Release Beta 2 Edit Events past Fortree - Finish the Elite Four Release Beta 3 Tie up looses ends then i will make a final release OTHER STUFF (This is thr stuff i would like assistance with) Find a person or program to feature the 3 cats or just Raikou in the Title Screen Change the name to Pokemon Citrine on the Title Screen Find a decent sprite editor and inserter Find a program to change the pokemon sprites in the intro movie sequence An advanced scripter(i can edit dialogue, sign posts, and make items and make NPCs give items, but i need help with the more advanced stuff) Some one to make me some support banners please Thats about it for now. :t244:CURRENT STATUS:t244: Well i finish the mapping for beta1. Yay!!! I am currently learning level scripting so that i can hopefully redo the gyms and such...after i redo the Gyms and gym leader and stuff i will move on to trainer editing, and then finaly the scripting. But right now i am taking a break waiting on some sprites...but in the meantime i may find a nice picture to edit make as the title screen. There is still much to do before i can finish and release. :t245:VERSION HISTORY:t245: Pre-Beta/Alpha (Released 6/29/08) Beta 1 Beta 2 Beta 3 (possibly, not sure) Final Release :t243:SCREENS/SCANS/WHATEVER:t243: Screenshots http://a603.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/37/l_dbebe3fb13b66414345c29467134a22a.pnghttp://a351.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/67/l_53b61a85f3932853db6a7c13658b129e.png http://a581.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/124/l_40b2fc8e3185ff14e0ee4b759bfe90c4.pnghttp://a350.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/114/l_d27bb105c6e0c8ca10d98274a02bb8c5.png http://a514.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_b0c8df7c3dd91a34af06e615a9609cb1.pnghttp://a487.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/90/l_a7fcc551161256cd2ac92c580877712e.png http://a348.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/51/l_3e69f2e84b4a5bfe67c4d9062793949b.pnghttp://a613.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/97/l_68b76e76398075242b2c6363eb99e75c.png http://a665.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_772ebc5268389d19df886b4083fafa10.pnghttp://a550.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_c81809864e3ff86483b887955f8ad05d.png These arent the final screens for the towns. They may change in the next beta! :t244:KNOWN ODDITIES, BUGS, and GLITCHES:t244: 1. the red arrow at the end of each text bar, its glitchy but it doesnt effect gameplay 2. The scripts in snowbrink city, when you leave with wally and when the dude leads you over to the gym is in the wrong place 3. The place where the female gets off of the truck is in the wrong place 4. :t245:TEAM:t245: Me: planner, mapper, scripter Cirothe: Spriter Eveeon Wind~: Map Fixer Guy Dude Beta Testers Mabbiba Eeveon Wind~ :t243:THANX:t243: Dshayabusa (help with scripts & tiles) PHO [rombase(Green Charizard might have made it)] Mabibba (banners) :t244:XTRAS:t244: (basic info, news, stuff you can help me with, random) Everything is going according to how i planned it. i have began learning scripting and am getting better at it, thought it isnt that hard(most people make it sound like its the hardest thing to do). OW mapping is going great i have some excellent ideas i plan to implement in the next beta, though i need someone to go in a fix some tiles that i cant(like the snow in Seabreeze town from the Gym and Mart tiles). I realy need some help with spriting, im not very good with art and color editing so i need some help in that area, plus i would like some help making attila and hun sprites out of the Maxie(since he is thin he will be Hun) and Archie(since he is bulkier than Maxie he will be Attila) sprites. Well tha covers the major areas of what i need help with. If you want to help, post it here and i will see if i can use you. (i dont want to seem like those guys that are begging for help, but a little extra wouldnt hurt) Wish me luck, Khaos :t245:BANNERS:t245: (Want to show support for Citrine, put em' in your sig) http://i26.tinypic.com/2rqf3av.png [http://i26.tinypic.com/2rqf3av.png] by DemiKid http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/lmg666/PC.png [http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk29/lmg666/PC.png] :t243:DOWNLOADS:t243: THE ALPHA IS HERE, it goes to the first gym. (Hint: untill i get better at scripting i cant control what gym leaders and others say yet so even though your dad says go to Rustboro, instead go to Snowport...just follow the route numbers) The RE-ALPHA is the most recent version!!!! |
Well good luck, try not to make the thread too wide. Put the screens on the next line.
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Wow looks pretty good
all the pokemons will be awesome |
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Yeah i didnt know this was approved yet...but i fixed the screens(i also noticed that Baro did the same thing in the Marble thread) I noticed that i didnt fully check the movement permissions on some of the Mt. sides and in snowport city...i will try to upload a new fixed patch if it becomes a problem All i can say now is...WHOO i made it in the Showcase...time for sleep |
Hmmm, this hack could use a bit more work, sorry to say. You probably should have spent a bit more time practicing the basics (mapping and scripting). The story is good, but perhaps go a little slower with this hack and spend some time getting more experience with hacking.
Well the event with Kyogre, Groudon and Rayquaza won't be too hard to change. You only need to edit the OWs. If you want to change what happens then... most of it will be easy from what I remember its done all by scripting. The cinematic bit, well thats a different story. The intro cinematic can be edited with UNLZ. You just need to change all the animations. Well I hope I haven't offended you or your hack, just wanted to say what I thought. |
Looks good, except for the mapping errors (Seabreeze Town)
And the maps all look almost the same... But I like the story, sounds cool. Good Luck, Bombah! Ps.: They are the 3 DOGS, not cats...^^ |
I agree with dshayabusa. This hack could use a little work. I would put my hand up, but I don't know the first thing about hacking.
Can I suggest something? On the map of Snowbrink City, there is a rock on the left side. It makes the water's edge and the jumping over ledge (or whatever you want to call it) look... weird. I personally think that rock is not needed and could be removed. However, you can move it a little if it is I suppose. xP But then again, I'm just a newb to this. I do love the story though. Raikou is one of my favorite pokemon, and I adored that movie. I however, did make a banner for you... It isn't too good, but it is my first try. I would give show it, but I'm not allowed to do so until I get 15 posts. -shrug- So I'll just PM it to you. ^^ Good luck! I'll keep a watch on this hack. |
Thank you all for our critisism, i know now where i need to improve, i hope you continue to support me
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Thank you i will try to improve the maps, and i read on bulba pedia that they are cats...Suicune is a cheetah and Entei is a lion and Raikou is a sabertooth tiger. To me they look like em...except for Suicune...he puzzles me Quote:
Ok since the maps in the Alpha were a little... unoriginal i updated them and releaesd a new alpha with some tile, MP, and other fixes. It has some maps redone, like Seabreeze town, i didnt like how it was so i redid it(sorta). I also updated the Screens to match the RE-ALPHA I know it may have been a mistake to Re-release but i was in such a rush to release the alpha i didnt thoroughly check it enough so it was kinda messy... Well i hope you enjoy the new Alpha and show me some support by putting the banners in your sigs...BTW i have to give an awesome thank you to mabibba for making the banners anf hopefully making more Thanks for all of your support, Khaos |
looks like a nice rom keep up the good work
i would play it but ive got alot of games to play atm :P |
I decided to give some updates and take some screens.
http://a836.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/43/l_259f2441782061b2d08e7dcc77935fd3.pnghttp://a72.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/97/l_b8c42dac22daca22efd2377c0af2432f.pnghttp://a464.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/26/l_0306f4867f9d51f3103502e12103f0c7.png http://a120.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_d9396df29ddaf6a0a9ec0f44a29e2327.pnghttp://a379.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/114/l_9fd5f9efa939c6983b463d2c8f898b7a.pnghttp://a701.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/78/l_d465340072576bbcf2b2cb2d0707a5c4.png http://a404.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/35/l_a315e9acfe57540ee96afc3dc4f70863.png The beta will be released soon, i am having a few scripting problems but i will get them fixed. I am also looking for 2 or 3 beta testers so the next beta can go of without a problem. The beta will feature two gyms and the Volcano experiance. |
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Hi khaos here just dropping a quick update.
Uh, mapping for beta 1 is complete there are a few things i need to do but for the most part its finished. i have become a little better at scripting, i can understand most of the commands now and can implement them. Plus i made my first working script Check .gif attachment I still need to do spriting, finish up some scripting, and release to some beta testers... I ONLY HAVE ONE BETA TESTER, I WOULD LIKE 3, PLEASE PM ME IF YOU ARE INTERESTED. oh yeah, and i changed the main post so check that out every so often, and i decided to use 3 betas and then a final release so i hope you continue to support me in this project(i have seen little, and would really like to see more) I am also looking to win a HotW(i want to be the 1st Emerald Hack on the list) its just a little goal of mine :D bye for now,Khaos |
I'm happy to be ur beta tester. :)
I can also fix up maps if u want. =) |
i could be a beta tester and find bugs and mispelled words stuff like that.
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Um, which one is the more recent one?
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please dont make an instant judgement when playing the alphas, Beta 1 will be so much better |
I tried the Re-Alpha, but, when ur about to start out in the truck, the game resets itself. :\
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i think i encountered a glitch. before battling may. i battled pokefan miguel and after i won the player sprite was stuck to the pokefan and i became the fishing guy above him, but he turned into a golden version of the player sprite (lol). and it seemed like i was stuck in this boundry because i could move left and right but i couldnt move down to blizzkreig town. i'll PM you pics.
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I'll try and make you those Hun and Atilla sprites. I'm not great but i've had my fare share of good'ns ;)
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Hello! That such?
Well it seems to be good, the original history, and the script die good, worse you use many ruby's tiles. Regards! |
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And a word to those playing the hack, you have to play through the events of you going to help wally catch his pokemon, then you can go west on route 3(dont forget to get the GOODS :D) |
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Hi all i stopped by to post an update.
Its been real laid back, since i took a break, and now that i am bored i decided to make a title screen(attached) Its not finished,i plan to maybe make a mountain like thing that raikou stands on and maybe change up the lightning. This is just a progress report of sorts i made it using the thunder and thunderbolt attacks from wormintheworks attack sprite sheet i got from The Spriters Resource. and a raikou sprite from google |
Now that is an awesome title screen.
It's a little similar too thex4's though, except it doesn't have a custom Rayquaza! XD Maybe u shoould have a custom Raikou sprite on the title screen instead of a regular, game freak Raikou sprite. |
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How would you go about making a custon sprite, i really suck at drawing |
I don't know! :P
I suck at drawing too. And title screens! |
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Oh yeah i found out that THEx4's rayquaza isnt custom...its from the sootopolis cutsceen from pokemon emerald, i just found the sprite sheet :D |
Oh yeah huh, it is. :shocked:
I completely forgot about that seen. But, the Entei on cooley's title screen is a custom made by nicholas and I think -Hackmew- |
on the 1st pg which patch is the most up2date? :s
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please dont make an instant judgement when playing the alphas, Beta 1 will be so much better |
The hack does not see anything of interest
change the tiles |
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From this i gathered, "i dont like this hack, change the tiles" - or- "I dont see anything of interest in this hack, by the way change the tiles" And my is answer is, No! I like the snowy tiles, plus since this is an Emerald hack i plan to keep the R/S/E tiles, i went through a lot to get them the way they are. And no that doesnt mean that in the furture that the hacks i make are gonna contain the same tiles, its just that for this one i like the snow :D |
Uh-Oh! :shocked:
This seems to be dying. So I'll bump it for u! :D ~BUMP~ So, how r things going? |
WEll my current status putting the finishing touches on some maps, then i need to find some sprites, finish some scripting, then edit the trainer levels.
Then i should be ready to release the first Beta :D |
Well cool good luck on it !!!
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Seriously people i need a spriter BAD....i cant release the next beta untill someone can volunteer to make me some sprites, i have a Team thread called Team Khaos please apply there if you would like to be my spriter. I mostly need those Attila and Hun sprites, and 3 legendary Dogs as OWs.
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FINALLY 15 posts (my internet problems didn't help) so here they are http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii187/Hannan100/AttilaHun.png I'm a bit dissapointed with Hun's hair but if you want I can redo him
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UPDATE PEOPLE:
I have added to more important peeps to my team Cirothe: My new awesome spriter Wind~: My new Map Fixer Guy Dude(yes that is his "official title") I will add More screenshots in the future, or since we are so close to the beta release i may wait and post em as i release the beta 1. If you want to apply to my Team then go to Team Khaos thread in the Team Discussions thread. This hack is nearing the release so check back here often and see if there is an update :D Also i want to see some support out there, there are some userbars in the first post. And i this hack is going to be the first Emerald hack on the HotW list, but that is only possible if i have your votes. I am counting on all you to make this Hack possible!!!! |
So...this is the famous citrine...
It looks good...atleast, to an extent, I like the dull maps...just for the record. HOPE I DIDNT SAY ANYTHING AKWARD! |
wow nice hack, good luck
how much till beta??? |
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UPDATE: we finally have out Attila and Hun Sprites thanx to Team Khaos' new spriter Cirothe. Here they are, tell us what you think about them: http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1244&pictureid=7303 http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1244&pictureid=7301 |
Is he a OW spriter too? The sprites look good, no, I mean, excellent!!
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nice hack, could use some work though
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Well seems like it is time for an update.
I posted a title screen a while back that was a FR standard, well when i tryed to do the insertion and what not the image was too small, after i figured out Emeralds Title screen size(256x256) i made this.(lookie in attachments) The time till the Beta release is getting closer by the day, i am scripting up some people and signs and a few other scripts. But i still need a decent OW maker. I have decided to not post screens this time as since we are so close to the release, i think you can wait i little longer :D. |
the screenies look amazing cant wait to dl the alpha test it out keep up the great work kahos
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Hmm...
No updates for a while. :\ Have you been working on this? Or are you too lazy like me? :P Good Luck~ |
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Plus, i am still looking for an OW spriter for Attila and Hun.....i may also want the hero and heroine recolored from the green in there clothes to orange.... |
Sorry, but I don't like this hack, change tiles
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Wow. That looks fun. But have you considered changing the weather
once or twice? For instance, in my hack White Beach and the south part of Mt. Apennine are snowy, but the snow and cold wind is blocked by the southern exterior of Icy Path, making the North part of the route comfortably temperate, and Venicia City actually warm. I'm not saying you need a whole lot of variety, but is it going to be snowy everywhere? Just throwing it out there. |
HEY KHAOS IT'S ME (HOWL) FROM PHF SO THIS IS CITRINE ON PC WELL IT SEEMS GOOD ONLY THING IS i'M BEGGING YOU ADD MORE TILES...PLEASE..LOL
NO BUT REALLY GOOD JOB. |
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He saids that he doesn't care about the tiles. |
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Hello KhaosKnight can I help you with your hack? I like to map and OVW sprite. My sprites usually come from scratch. Give me a message if you accept.
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The story seems nice ... but you should change the tileset.
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Hey guys, i have been busy with trying to make this hack a good enough beta. So i have decided to drop by with an update of sorts.
Here is a concept design of the Attila OW Sprite http://i497.photobucket.com/albums/rr334/RaitoKun/Attila.jpg Tell me what you guys think, its not finished yet, like i said its just a concept design. But i appreciate all comments. Oh and i know that this hasnt had a post in some time, so i will make another thread if needed, i didnt see anything in the rules about Thread length for the thread owner, so just let me know, Thanks. |
Really good.
But who made the OW sprite? I just wanna know. |
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Hey. Haven't been on in forever. I've been really busy with work and stuff, and now, with my computer not charging, it's even harder to get on.
Just wondering how the game is coming along. :) |
I got pretty concerned with the fact that this is a hack of Emerald, due to it being very glitchy O.o
I loled at Team Attila and Team Hun... though it's sortta corny... Well, best of luck is all I can say left. |
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Hey guys sorry for the no update in awhile. I have been studying about how Emerald works and have decided to completely re-map out everything on a new ROM and re-point the data properly so prevent as much glitches and such, this has been taking awhile so the release will take alot longer than i have planned. I want the 1st beta to be a good release so im trying not to rush things. I didnt have many complex scripts in the current version so re-scripting wont take very long. I am also working on a title screen and some sprites. Sorry for the long wait, and the even longer one after this, thanks to all those who still support this project. |
yay your working on it again, what's the starters going to be ?
well good luck. |
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But the OW sprite seems to be down? Is it just me, or does anyone get an 'Account Inactive' block here up there? ^ |
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