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The trees look really weird, they look really rushed and no outline :O
Use a bigger pallet green, and make a outline. The sky looks better, a bigger pallet blue is what it needs. I think the stars look great, but add some shading to them. The pinquins look good, they don't fit well in those suroundings though. |
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I can definetly go back and change the sky color pallette to blue it up a bit. (remember, it's supposed to be at night, so it still has to be a bit dark...and that's just my spriting shading style anyhow) i also agree with the stars, they look great, but they should have more of "glow" around them... As for the chickadees, i think that you're both right, and they just plain and simple don't fit... it's the rigid outlining of my style, and just the "hard" color pallette... Thanks everyone! I'm going to go back, fix accordingly, and i'll go from there! I want to thank everyone who has come to my thread, because Crossel, you have given it the honor of it's 100th reply, and i am honored that everyone thinks my stuff is decent enough to have that many people check it out! Thanks everyone! You know the drill! (Keep Spriting!>http://e.imagehost.org/0943/Keep_Spriting_Gyarados.png |
wow! your a great spriter!!!!! keep it up!
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I redid luvfin's shading...look on the bottom of the fin, and the back of the tail fin... made it a bit more coherant...and my attempt at a back pic!
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Ok...another edited shading up for oppinion!
Spinum http://c.imagehost.org/0049/Spinum.png>http://e.imagehost.org/0182/Spinum.png(edit by me) |
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Thanks HFI... i think that there's still small little problems with the shading like the helmet's bright spot (it's divited...) or the darkness of the face...but it is definetly better...
i'm redoing orelect, but am not getting the result i like... i will post it when i find a change i like, the main thing is i'm sure how to make the "needles" that come out of it's back... anyways, i'll figure it out... Take care everyone, merrry christmas, happy holidays...so on so forth... GP |
I like the new shading on the Spinum. Much better than the old shading. Well, you're an awesome spriter, so keep it up, and Happy Holidays!
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Happy Holidays to all! Thanks to everyone who has been replying to my thread! I appreciate it! Bubblewrap: I think the new shading is "more correct" now, but it doesn't look as good as the old one in the sense that it is very "hard" by which i mean choppy and rigid...that is my main problem with my shading, it's to rigid...once i can fix that, i think my sprites will be much better! |
hey GP.
haven't been here for long time. nice imprtovements to the originals, but the new spinum looks flat It needs a highlight and a d/p outkline |
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Anyhow, thanks to everyone for keeping my thread alive! I will be working on spinum, and look for a new and entirely redone humsaw to come around! I will also be reshading orelec one of these days... so that's what will be coming up! Till then, Keep Visisting! Keep Spriting! |
For some reason my favorite art seems to be the many faces of your cockateil...I love it.
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You're art is awesome. That house of yours looks professional!! So this is all on Paint, eh? I should experiment more on paint... you just proved to me all the stuff paint can do! Incredible!!!!! So aren't you with team carbon? I just came back after like a million days.
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Lol, the sprite of Obama, cool sprite.
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Thanks to everyone who has been replying!
This Saturday I will be embarking on the greatest adventure of my life! Out of my entire state, 25 students have been chosen, I being one of them, to go to Washington D.C. to bear witness to one of the greatest events in American history: I will be at the white house to witness the inaugeration of our first African American president, Barack Obama. I leave on Saturday, and arrive in D.C. late in the afternoon. I'll be staying at a hotel, with all housing and food costs paid for by the state! It's awesome! Oh, did i mention that the state is paying for my airfare as well?! I'll be going on a night time tour of the city as it's lit up. I'll be going to the D.C. Opera House to see a theatrical production. I'll be going on a tour of the white house. I'll be going to a private lunch-in with my state's senator, Dick Durbin! I'll (the best part) be going to the inaugaration on tuesday!!!!!! I'm so excited!!! I won't be around for a week or so. So... please keep my sprite thread alive, and send me messages on my chat board on my profile, cause my pm box is getting awefully full. Have a great week you guys, I might pop in from now till friday, but you won't here from me after that for a week or so! Take Care!!! Keep Spriting!!! |
I love your Happy Holidays cockatiel. :3
I love those faces of your bird. I can't do anything like that. |
Well, i'm back from my big trip, and let me just say that it was amazing! I have so much stuff i could blab on about, but i'll spare ya all...anyhow, i did make it to the inaug, and i did get a ticket, and i did get a great spot, among the 3 million people...
Anyways, upon being inspired by Barack Obama, heres something new... i'm also entering it in the emblem contest! Hope you like it! http://f.imagehost.org/0859/hope_emblem.png Hope Emblem Inspired by Barack Obama Top Left: Hope Emblem with black outlining Bottom Left: Hope Emblem with cordinated outlining Top Right: Hope Ball with black outlining Bottom Right: Hope Ball with cordinated outlining http://f.imagehost.org/0329/hope_emblem_avi.png Keep Spriting! |
Sleepy Heads... in different mixed media...
http://f.imagehost.org/0057/all_sleepyheads.png |
Something i did for fun... most of the 2009 NASCAR sprint cup paintschemes...
http://f.imagehost.org/0129/2009_schemes.png These will be moving to my new nascar sprite thead... |
I am making a secret base for fun, so i figured that i would make some "custom" pieces...really they are just recolors...please don't hand gesture me to death foxhound... ^_^
http://f.imagehost.org/0485/secret_base_pieces.png I recolored the belly of rhydon doll to greyscale, then recolored greyscale to gold to make golden rhydon! same concept for snorlax... recolored pillar and door to, then plopped them together to make cheap but effective gate. recolor of fissure mat...no explanation there... so when i finish the base, i'll show y'all it! |
Found it again...
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I have practically been molested over the fact that my rpg character's sprite is not scratched, and in fact is only an edit of volkners. So, to put all you nay-sayers in the closet, here it is!
My Original http://g.imagehost.org/0417/Lance_Layer_Sprite.png My Second Take http://g.imagehost.org/0943/Lance_Layer_Sprite_5.png Here it is!!! My SCRATCHED SPRITE!!! ( except for the face...hair is still scratched...) http://f.imagehost.org/0446/Jammin_1.png So, give some feedback, what do you all think? |
Very nice work on the shading, GP. I have to say, I am becoming all the more impressed every time you post new stuff. Very nice work, keep it up!
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You asked me to review. I'll do it.
http://g.imagehost.org/0943/Lance_Layer_Sprite_5.png This looks better in comparison. The skin doesn't "shine" strangely, there are lines on the shirt, you know, all the cool changes... http://f.imagehost.org/0446/Jammin_1.png OMG, this is da best! But I wanna ask. Is his eyes closed? Cuz you know, it kinda looks a bit strange when I zoomed in (using paint)... I added some white spots to make the eyes, and... it's possible! THIS STOMPS MY SPRITES! HARD! So far, I am quite happy. Other than the eye thing. And the guitar looks a bit... too light for a guy. How about using darker colours? :) |
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http://c.imagehost.org/0711/Santoki.png In this sprite, the tail on the left is light colored, just like the foot on the right. Now, pokemon sprites usually have a light source. http://pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dpmfa/dpmfa001.png As you can see, the more left you go, the lighter it is, because the light source is coming from the left. On your sprite, there is a light source on both sides, and it's distracting.(I couldn't find a better word. XD) So, you might want to fix that. http://c.imagehost.org/0740/Milodos.png On this sprite, you used dithering. You should probably avoid that method more often. It doesn't... work well.(I need to learn more words. <_<) |
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http://e.imagehost.org/0331/new_milodos.png i need to learn how to do the tubular shading. if anyone can help, or knows any good tuts, it would be a great help! Thanks so much (aka) pokedude! I appreciate your tips. It's a new cody sprite!!! I made it in like five minutes, so please don't take it to seriously. I was just using it to show my brother how to sprite with ms paint's recoloration tool, grid, and gradients... he's only ten, and doesn't really know how to sprite...yet... http://f.imagehost.org/0261/cody_sprite.png ^_^ Keep spriting everyone! |
these are really good keep up the good work~
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wow cool. these are amazing. i like the fakemon
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Well I'm not entirely sure if I can teach you how to shade tubular things. I mean all of my shading is just guessing on what my mind thinks it would be. I might not be right on how I do shade it.
But I made a very rough tube-ish thing like yours. http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii25/Rachae_Bossier_Art/tubularexam.png I'm not sure if I can explain it, I hope you can understand. After the bend you add a dark color again to the bottom, to make the curve stand out. :x Like a simple halo. http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii25/Rachae_Bossier_Art/halo.png How you have the shade on the bottom, the normal color leads the bend, and then the shade on that. @[email protected] I hope you understand. |
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As for the scratch, i think it's best too, thank you. yep his eyes are closed...i hope they look closed... the head was edited off the old sprite, since i tried to keep my scratched hair and brow and all that... i'll go back and maybe fix them a bit up... i'm not quite sure how i'll do it, but i will. Anyhow thanks for checking him out!!! Quote:
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Thanks though! I appreciate it mucho!!! Thanks to everyone who has been viewing my thread, you know how much that means to me. (if you dont...it means the world!) I'm gonna work on milodos some more, but i can i please get some more crit on lance scratch? THANKS FOR POSTING, AND DON'T STOP!!! GP! |
I redid his collar and jacket zipper, how does it look now?
http://f.imagehost.org/0446/Jammin_1.png->http://f.imagehost.org/0395/Lance_Layer_Sprite_7.png The collar is more rounded, and the zipper turns slightly to the right. Hm... just took it... http://www.dragonflycave.com/wpay/charizard.gif |
I think the new collar looks a little better. It took a while for me to find it~ xD
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Looks great I like the garados trophy best!
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Nice pixel art =)
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Just a friendly service reminder, DO NOT STEAL MY WORK!
So, I have been working on my shading and outlining... as well as just having a bit of fun... Old: http://f.imagehost.org/0709/Cody.png New: http://g.imagehost.org/0530/Cody_1.png I likes it! |
Luvfin is my favorite! It looks so happy. :] And it's a good comparison to Luvdisc.
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I redid the outlining on cody's wing and top left of head.
Old: http://g.imagehost.org/0530/Cody_1.png New: http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6255/cody1a.png It's a bit lighter now... does it look better? |
Thumbs up GP! nice Shading
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Anyhow, NEW gyarados revamp of yellow for foxhound's community project. http://www.iaza.com/work/090315C/yellow_gyarados_revamp_transparent5736165265-iaza.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0229/yellow_red_gyarados_revamp_transparent.png Tell me what you thinks! |
I entered this in March's green contest!
http://g.imagehost.org/0714/muk_s_pad_2.png Muk's Pad (who says a pile of sludge can't have his own digs to relax in?) |
It's been a while since I've been on here. You've been quite hard at work I see ;) your pixel art has definitly gotten much better...we have to to put lance in the game for sure by the way, he looks better and better each time! If you're having shading troubles, I could be of some asistance, I mean my fakemon and Shading aren't the best but they get by...just let me know ;)
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Thanks FMP! I appreciate your help!
Anyhow, i have been getting a whole lot of requests for eggs... and i am not really up to making them... so here is the template... http://f.imagehost.org/0691/template.png It is free for public use, BUT BUT BUT YOU MUST MUST MUST GIVE ME CREDIT FOR THE TEMPLATE. My original eggs are not for public use unless given direct permission from me. some new examples (the new one is to the left, the old one to the right...) http://g.imagehost.org/0260/001_3.png Bulbasaur http://f.imagehost.org/0585/004.png Charmander http://f.imagehost.org/0036/007_4.png Squirtle http://f.imagehost.org/0973/010_1.png\ Caterpie http://f.imagehost.org/0333/104.png if i have to tell you, you shouldn't even be allowed on this site... I used pallettes right off of fr/lg sprites... Remember, ask for permission, don't request me on this thread, and DO NOT STEAL!!! |
These are awesome the one i like the best is the change collection very unique the only thing i want to see is Overworld's for the change one chacter that would be interesting to see.
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I browsed through this thread, and my goodness, you've been hard at work with improvements! No wonder you gave me such a nice crit on my thread. Awesome work! :3 |
Okay then and i also see why you u gave me a lot of crit on my thread your's are awesome what program do you use and i have a request could you try torn world tiles.
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<Achoo!> ^_^ Anyhow, thankyou! I appreciate you thoughts! I have been looking at my recolor and have also come to the conclusion that he looks sleppy... but since that is how the original sprite looked...i really couldn't change it too much... as for the white, i am also now noticing that, since you said it... i will go back and fix that! Again, thanks for the crit, and i'm glad to have helped you... if i did... OMG! This took me forever to sprite! I haven't even shaded it yet (so dont start screaming at me...i know i know...) 1969 Chevy El Camino (my dream car) http://f.imagehost.org/0942/El_Camino_1969_Custom_SHORT.png |
wow these are cool, i like them alot
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What do you like about them? Please give me a bit more info... Anyhow... Something newish...it's really just a different color... which one do you guys think is better, blue or yellow? http://f.imagehost.org/0796/yellow_el_camino.png And even newer: Lance Layer Jammin' Sprite animation! http://f.imagehost.org/0657/Jammin_1_t.gif http://f.imagehost.org/0389/Jammin_2_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0587/Jammin_3_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0644/Jammin_4_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0291/Jammin_5_t.gif http://f.imagehost.org/0102/Jammin_6_t.gif http://www.pokecommunity.com/customavatars/avatar100651_17.gif |
ok the animation looks really bad, but only on the arm. it looks like his arms strecch, give it shoulder motion also dont just extend the arm.
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thanks though! i appreciate the feedback! Does anyone know of a free online animation creator that takes png's and turns them into an animation? the one i used only takes gif's and it distorts my pictures...a bit unfortunate... |
if you want i can take the frames and animate them for you, theyll come out fine.
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These are amazing!!! If I ever make a hack, I'm consulting with you.=p These are beautiful..and I love the original pokemon.=p |
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Thanks Kenji! I also realized that, which was why i mentioned the detail at small size quote... as for the shading, i understand completely what you mean. i wanted a "flat" look though, to contrast with the swamp and the muk... maybe it was to flat... as for the swamp, it was supposed to be that mossy stuff... like duckweed... but still, even the duck weed has a shade variation... Thanks everyone! Until next time...Keep Spriting! (DARN DOUBLEPOST... IT WAS AN ENTIRELY NEW TOPIC...GRRR!) Introducing my newest fakemon!!!!! Laplit! http://g.imagehost.org/0163/Laplit.png Laplit (Shy Shell Pokemon) Height: 2'11" Weight: 145 lbs Laplit, the prevolutionary form of Lapras, is quite a shy pokemon. These water bound pokemon stick close to their mothers for comfort since they are still young and are easily startled. |
I've redone shading on some of them.
http://www.iaza.com/work/090410C/Avelect91266.bmp http://www.iaza.com/work/090410C/Spinum98724.bmp http://g.imagehost.org/0019/Chickadee.png |
there's one like iaza.com or something like that (never tried it out before though)
i could animate for you if you would like (i don't mind) ^^ EDIT: hope you don't mind (got bored) and animated for you http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/9132/28484215.gif it's a bit slow, i could speed it up if you like. :) |
I didn't know that iaza can do animations!
That's what i have been using lately for transparencies! Hmm... that is a helpful site! Thanks for animating it for me! It looks great, and not all jpegy with the divets... I'm still working on my edited frames... so his arm doesnt look like it's just being pulled from it's elbow... Thanks! (p.s. a bit faster would do better...i'll get it though! Thanks!) |
nice job your art is fairly nice
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Hmm... you're right frosslass... he's almost kinda jelly bean shaped isn't he? well, that's alright though, i think it looks good like that... unless others agree with you...then i might change it.
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Also your RP character's guitar looks like it has no shading and outline. Laplit's shell (The part with the light shining on it) Should have a lighter color. It sticks out.Also humsaw's wings looks... uneven... But I like the shading on all of your re-edited fakemon, and your gyarados sprites are beautiful.=p |
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slowqueen... definitely not my best, but i think your right. the clamperl blue isn't cutting it, it seems to detract. I will go back recolor it... As for Lance's guitar... i really don't know what to do about it... i tried to make it look "wooden"... instead it is just a tanned up mess... i might just entirely redo it, or take it out, or something... i don't know... as for laplit, i will not be changing that one... i actually used the pallette directly off Lapras, and as that was the color used on the light spot of lapras, i transfered that tone to laplit. As for humsaw, forget about it. it is LONG GONE! i gave up on it a long time ago! the anatomy is messy, the pose is awkward, the coloration is lacking, and just in general, it is an ugly sprite... wait a minute... i made that one didn't i... But really, THANKS! I appreciate your ideas, and your crit! The slowqueen coloration never came to my head, so thanks on that! Take care everyone! Keep Spriting! |
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My newest and most probably best sprite ever!!! It is the new milodos! I LUV IT!!! My only concern with it is the shading and the back fin (technically milodos' right). I need crit on that please! |
A little something old i dug up! a secret base i had made...
It's called the fissured shrine. http://g.imagehost.org/0694/fissured_shrine.png |
Some wiked cody pop art i made... there's actually some spriting techniques here... among them recoloring and editing...
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I was just playing around when i made this one...
It's a snorlax pokedoll under the possesion of a banette! http://g.imagehost.org/0238/banlax.png <shiver> gosh that's creepy... |
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(a half an hour after fainting and having Cody peck me awake...)
Kenji, there are NO words to describe how i feel right now! Wow, i am gonna pass out (...again...) Truly, you define good critism! From now on, when ever some one spams up my thread with lame crit or comments, i'm just gonna refer them to post #174! (One minute while i take a breather!) Now down to buisness! 1. My sprite has to be 64x64 and 16 bit... which leaves me a little less room and coloration than i would have liked. i can, and will, definitely darken the medium navy tone, or lighten the lightest. 2. Outline shading: i thought it looked a bit weird in some parts, but i guess you really pointed them out. (Thanks, thanks thanks!!!) For the tan and the navy, since i only have three tones of those colors, i can really only outline in those color's darkest tones... it's actually very frustrating! i'm very limited in the outline shading on the crest, which is probably the worst looking outlining anyways... i only have three colors to use for shading and outlining, not including black... same applies with the fins/wings... i'm not sure what to do about that... 3. the shading in the center of the body was also super hard. that has been my problem with milodos. i can't seem to get the tubular shading down. someone (i'm sorry to whom it was, but i dont remember) showed me how to shade tubes, or rather they modeled it, but i still have trouble on that shapes shaddowing. 4. the far right side of the pixel was actually a choice of the lesser evil. it was originally one large line, but it looked WAY to flat. so i gave it a bit more curve, where it did seem to step out a bit to far. But then i think the "Pointyness" comes from that one notch on the left of the segment. maybe by smoothing that out, it will loose the point, sharp look... and become more round. 5. as for the curviture of the body, i'll try it right off your model and see how it looks! It may take me a day or two to redo this one, since i'm also making some other stuff at the moment, but mark my words, it will be redone!!! Thankyou so much Kenji!!! I appreciate it soooooooooooooooo much! Your a great help, a great spriter, and a great friend!!! |
i think all ur gyrados sprites are great and ur sprite guitar man guy..lol i forgot the word for it right now..anyway nice work ^-^
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oooh! my first victim of this ploy!
Cholo, please review post 174 to see how to properly critisize! (Granted, you don't have to be that in depth...) but really, what do like about them? which ones in particular do you like? what do you think i need to work on? why do you think these things? I appreciate your post, but please, give me a hand here! |
haha i had feeling something like that was gonna happen while tryin to get 15 posts so i can make my thread..
lol but now that i have i guess i could be a little bit more thorough the lance layer guy was very well done except i think u need a little bit more shading on the clothing (the hair's perfect) and the guitar looks great also, considering it was made from scratch (it was made from scratch right?) either way it looks good.. and the first 3 gyrados's were beautiful i think it was the way u colored it and the rest of the revamps were also done perfectly.. uhh thats about it i guess haha |
Thanks for being a great sport! I was joking... but thanks anyhow!
I've never had anyone say something about the jacket's shading... where do you think it needs work? As for the guitar... it wasn't scratched...as a matter of fact, it was ripped, recolored, resized and retextured... all resulting in a death trap of heavy crit! I actually agree with most everyone else and say the tones are to light... but if you like it, i'm glad! Your like only the second person... as for gyarados revamps... WRONG!!! they are not done to perfection... as a matter of fact, i am a failure! i did not properly reshade them, hence they are only recolors...at least the old ones are anyways... as for the those two loose pokemon yellow sprites, they are properly done, to perfection! Thanks again for the reply, and i appreciate you feedback! (it was much better than the first time around!) Now you'll know what to expect and you'll have an idea of what you want to recieve on your thread! Keep Spriting Folks! |
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First off, i made a new question mark animation!
http://www.iaza.com/work/090426C/qmark_banana7046514938-iaza.gif Nothing great... i know, but now it shall be used to cover up my new work until i am ready to post it! http://www.iaza.com/work/090426C/skull_black7203224705-iaza.gif this is another little one i made... not sure what i'll use if for... maybe to warn of a horrible sprite or something... http://www.iaza.com/work/090426C/mark_25353632421-iaza.gif and a mark martin quicky one i made! again, nothing great... it honestly took like ten minutes to make... |
They look... drawn. You should've cleaned up the outline a little. A simple Highlight + Base Color + Shadow shading would've been nice too, and probably wouldn't have taken too much more time to recolor for the animation frames.
The shapes are nice, though. :D At the moment.. it's kinda hard to call them sprites. Technically, I think those would be considered graphics. |
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Yeah, I wasn't really expecting you to go back and fix them up, just giving a few comments. XD
I do like that question mark. I've tried spriting one before, and it always turns out awkward and uneven. Yours looks really nice. I like how it indents at the bottom near the dot. The car's pretty nice for a quickie too. Especially for only taking 10 minutes or so on it. XD |
Thanks Kenji!
IS EVERYONE ABLE TO SEE ALL MY SPRITES? IF NOT, PLEASE TELL ME WHICH ONES! |
IS EVERYONE ABLE TO SEE ALL MY SPRITES? IF NOT, PLEASE TELL ME WHICH ONES!
Here it is! The spite that i entered into the april fool's contest! It's sooo cute! Spoiler:
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Nice one GP, I really like the animation in the teddy sprite!
Only while the animation starts to change into the bannete, you should have added some more shading. I think a bigger pallete will fix that problem, but really I think you did a great job on that one! |
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The Snorlax Pokedoll and the Stuffed Animal Bear changed into a Banette are the best you have here. I'd say those things are A work compared to the rest which in my opnion is mediocre.
You should make things in that style of spriting :) I hope I don't sound rude...because I'm not being it. :) |
I also agree I love the Banette Bear transformation, but I don't think everything else is mediocre, He's a pixel artist so all His stuff wont all be like the banette Bear.
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hey GP remember when you said one of my sprites looked like spinum well now it looks exactly like spinum
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Sorry guys, i'll have my new stuff up soon!
edited Lance Layer: http://g.imagehost.org/0736/lance_layer_sprite_8.png check last post to see explanation... edited milodos: http://f.imagehost.org/0810/milodos_wip_wings_kenji_style.png may pixel art contest entrant: http://www.iaza.com/work/090426C/qmark_banana7046514938-iaza.gif I "misplaced" my flashdrive... unfortunately it has all my newest work on it... |
Wow, loving all this stuff. The guitarist is especially awesome! Only thing I guess you could improve a tiny bit on is shading. Maybe its just me, but not all your sprites are shaded really well. Don't get me wrong, they're good, but I think if your shading just a bit better, these would all be incredible.
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It's funny you say that. I know exactly what you mean. I know what to look for in shading. I am able to tell people when the shading is wrong, but when it actually comes down to it, i can't do the shading right myself... does that make me a hypocrit? i don't know...
I wish i could get the shading down, i just need to keep studying up on official sprites. Furry sprites, round sprites, and cylindrical sprites are my downfall when it comes to shading. Currently i'm looking at ekans, dragonair, milotic and some custom sprites to get down the right form of shading of cylindrical pokemon... all so i can perfect my milodos. From there, i have yet to reshade lance's jacket... Then i will probably go back and redo orelect, then oreod... but i'm getting ahead of myself. Thanks for the comment and the critisism. I appreciate it mucho. (look at that incorporation of spanish...A+ for effort...) As i always say, Keep Spriting! |
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Thanks Jackson! Appreciate it greatly!
Ok, i redid Lance Layer, what do you all think? http://g.imagehost.org/0225/Lance_Layer_Sprite_7.pngold ->http://g.imagehost.org/0756/lance_layer_sprite_8.png(new edit by me) Notice the hair has another tone, as well as the jacket. There is more variation among the sleeves, and the shoulders have more depth. As for the neckline, notice how the shirt's curved now. Also, reshaded the guitar, it looks worlds better now! http://f.imagehost.org/0199/milodos_wip_wings.png(original)->http://f.imagehost.org/0810/milodos_wip_wings_kenji_style.png(new edit by me) First, the coloration: I matched the tones up, essentially creating a new color pallette for all the blues. You can tell since there's no sharp contrast between the medium shade and the dark shade. I recolored the crest, and redid some of the outline, as well as the inner outline where the middle crest meets the far left. I also added more color into the outline of the body. As well, i attempted to make the body more "rounded", but adjusting the outline and the shading as well. I removed that point just above the right wing, and rounded the top portion of the body, just before the striped tail... What do you guys think? You like them? Why or why not? |
Much, much better on the shading. The.. dragon¿ looks much more natural. Great job!
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OMG!!! 199th reply!!!
Thanks Jackson! Anywho, did i get the shading down like what you were thinking? I lightened the strumming shoulder, but idk, what do you think? do i need to change anything else? or is it good as is? BTW, thanks everyone for helping my thread reach the milestone of 200 replies...who's gonna be #200?...GO! i appreciate everyone's responses and good intentions. Keep Spriting! |
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