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= GPR = February 13th, 2010 2:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackmoonflower (Post 5545270)
Nice. I think I like the tan and scarlet one the best. Although, the section near the end of the tail is bugging me... I can't quite pinpoint what it is, though. Some of the shading seems a little off as well. All in all, I like it.

Thanks for the reply ^_^

Where in the tail is it off? And when you say the shading, do you mean the entire spirte, or the tail section?

Please let me know! I'd really appreciate it! ^^

BTW, redid the first post so some of the newer stuff is in it...

Vorpalis February 14th, 2010 3:22 AM

Wow, these are really, good. Keep it up!

= GPR = February 17th, 2010 1:33 AM

Thnx...

Anyhow, trying my hand at devamping... r/b style here...

Milodos
http://f.imagehost.org/0451/Milodos_rb.png
Seadra pallette... same shading style as seadra as well...reverted to the original milodos design to fill in some negative space using the spikes along the back as well as the lashes... ENTIRELY SCRATCHED

Spinnum
http://f.imagehost.org/0097/Spinnum_rb.png
Gengar's pallette and shading style... traceover existing spinnum sprite... changed the eyes' to the older look...

Eidoleon
http://f.imagehost.org/0202/Eidoleon_rb.png
Shading and pallette based off of original gengar. This one is a resize, then reoutlined.

blackmoonflower February 17th, 2010 2:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by = GPR = (Post 5548321)
Thanks for the reply ^_^

Where in the tail is it off? And when you say the shading, do you mean the entire spirte, or the tail section?

Please let me know! I'd really appreciate it! ^^

BTW, redid the first post so some of the newer stuff is in it...

The long diagonal section near the end of the tail. I don't know what it is about it, but it bugs me. It might not be slimming out enough.

And I don't see much shading on the tan parts of the underscales, face, and legs. Of course, that might just be my laptop screen...

Still a lovely idea for a dragon evolution, though.

= GPR = February 17th, 2010 6:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackmoonflower (Post 5559349)
The long diagonal section near the end of the tail. I don't know what it is about it, but it bugs me. It might not be slimming out enough.
alright, so I went back and added 1 pixel width line to thicken the tail's end... instead of making it black and creating a massive eyesore clumpy, i made it colored to the body.

And I don't see much shading on the tan parts of the underscales, face, and legs. Of course, that might just be my laptop screen...
??? It's there... it's two toned shaded like they do in the actual game sprites... maybe because it's just a bit larger than usual, it looks kinda vast?

Still a lovely idea for a dragon evolution, though.
well, I wish i could take the credit, but it was actually benzophenone-4's design... i just tweaked it a bit...

So here they are...
http://i.imagehost.org/0199/Geisheon_brown.png

http://f.imagehost.org/0684/Geisheon_jade_over_scarlet.png

http://f.imagehost.org/0887/Geisheon_scarlet_over_jade.png

How's that? ^_^

blackmoonflower February 17th, 2010 1:57 PM

That's better, I think. You're quite the spriter. ^_^

DonGGaMilo February 18th, 2010 12:22 AM

seeing your sprite is good...very nice

= GPR = February 18th, 2010 9:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackmoonflower (Post 5560508)
That's better, I think. You're quite the spriter. ^_^

YAY!!! Thanks for taking a peak at it! It looks better already!
Quote:

Originally Posted by DonGGaMilo (Post 5561911)
seeing your sprite is good...very nice

thanks...

= GPR = March 19th, 2010 10:38 PM

So, this is probably a better representation of the topaz ^_^

http://i.imagehost.org/0062/My_Rusty_Topaz.png

Added the rust, the paint scuff on the back fender, and the crack in the bumper lol

Anyways, I refuse to let my thread die! lol... i've put soo much time and work into this stuff, it kills me to know that it may all disappear! :o

Please, I implore you to respond! Thanks so much for all the years of stopping by!

- GP

GFA March 23rd, 2010 1:13 PM

As someone who has seen to many good thread's go, I am here to save you GPR! The car looks excellent! The tires really blend into the shadow though, and that's no good. That is a shadow right? The shadow should be darker, and the wheels should be lighter. May be even the toher way around, it all depends on the lighting. Anyway, I don't want to see this die! Not that I've been on here at all recently... but I'm your interweb buddy, so go! Keep the thread alive!

GFA~

= GPR = March 23rd, 2010 2:59 PM

LOL! Thanks! I hope that is stays alive as well... i don't really make much or post anything anymore because i never get ANY response... the dragons recieved little attention, and i felt that they were some of my best work i've ever produced... unfortunately, i am just not as young and available anymore :( curse you college!!! ^_^

As for the topaz, thanks for your response... that's actually NOT the shaddow... i just put that there so the words and my logo would show nice... lol... otherwise, the tires aren't that bad looking... is the rust okay?

Conan Edogawa March 23rd, 2010 4:20 PM

It's a shame that no one has been posting here. I am a big fan of your work. I really like these dragons, but some parts of the line art is/are to straight(awkward sentence). Specifically the tail directly under the body(where the tan color ends) and towards the end. The palettes are really nice and I like the shading style, though I'm not too sure where the light source is. Overall, great work, which is what I expect from you.

Bichu March 23rd, 2010 4:35 PM

HM Yay new art threads!!! I really like these sprites. :3 I agree with post above, but other than that, they're real good! =D Hope to see more from you!! ( ´∀`)

= GPR = March 29th, 2010 2:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Conan Edogawa (Post 5647740)
It's a shame that no one has been posting here. I am a big fan of your work. I really like these dragons, but some parts of the line art is/are to straight(awkward sentence). Specifically the tail directly under the body(where the tan color ends) and towards the end. The palettes are really nice and I like the shading style, though I'm not too sure where the light source is. Overall, great work, which is what I expect from you.

Thanks sooo much for your thoughtful and helpful response! I appreciate it soo much! ^^

As for the line art, I can go back and redo that. Give me some time to redo it, and I'll have it back up! As for the lightsource, i'm not sure either x) I'll check it out.

Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bichu (Post 5647808)
HM Yay new art threads!!! I really like these sprites. :3 I agree with post above, but other than that, they're real good! =D Hope to see more from you!! ( ´∀`)

New?! lol... you mean old! Anyways, thanks for your thoughts. I appreciate them ^_^

I'll be redoing Geisheon, so be on the look out ^^ till then...

Keep Spriting!

enzo51 April 5th, 2010 9:19 AM

I like Geisheon (based on a Geisha?) and your cars. Very nice sprites.

= GPR = April 5th, 2010 9:20 AM

I promise I'll get back to Geisheon... but I HAVE to post my new Gyarados!!! This is my first EVER Photoshop sprite...

http://j.imagehost.org/0293/Gyarados_Large_Sprite.png
It's partially a trace over some existing line art, but i changed the line art quite significantly... particularly in the overlap of the body segments, the crest, the face, and the tail... I also made his tan scales a bit more "pointy"

What do you guys think?

enzo51 April 5th, 2010 9:22 AM

hmmm. that gyarados ^^ is very nice. You seem like a HUGE Gyarados fan huh. =))

= GPR = April 5th, 2010 9:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by enzo51 (Post 5685007)
I like Geisheon (based on a Geisha?) and your cars. Very nice sprites.

Geisheon is actually my eevee dragon evolution... it's a borrowed concept from benzo-phenone on d/a's Beryleon... but i significantly changed the face, line art and coloration of her concept...

because of the light colored face and the red & green colors of the kimono girls... i figured that my sprite looked kinda like a geisha... so yep ^_^

As for the cars, those are my family's cars... the white Topaz and the Grand Sport are mine, the 5.0 is my stepdad's ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by enzo51 (Post 5685013)
hmmm. that gyarados ^^ is very nice. You seem like a HUGE Gyarados fan huh. =))

Yes, I LUV Gyarados... my all time FAV POKEMON! lol... a bit obsessive at times too lol for example:
http://j.imagehost.org/0149/Fantasy_64_Gyarados.png

But yep, I do have a thing for Gyarados lol!

GFA April 17th, 2010 2:00 PM

Well, the Gyarados looks a tad pudgy if'n you ask me. Other than that though, it's a spectacular job! As for the new "Gyarados Car" the colours are weird, IDK what. They clash and seem un-natural, almost as they have been inversed. You see what I'm trying to say?

GFA~

The Original Darkwiz787 April 17th, 2010 3:35 PM

Hello there! Good work, as always.

Not much to say, other than you're constantly getting better! And we can't let this thread die! :D

terranariko April 17th, 2010 5:12 PM

Interesting, you seem to have quite a fasination with gyarados, it's not a bad thing though. Besides that all of your sprites are good, can't really say much else besides that, it's enjoyable to look at them so thats a huge plus.

= GPR = April 22nd, 2010 10:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GFA (Post 5726032)
Well, the Gyarados looks a tad pudgy if'n you ask me. Other than that though, it's a spectacular job! As for the new "Gyarados Car" the colours are weird, IDK what. They clash and seem un-natural, almost as they have been inversed. You see what I'm trying to say?

GFA~

PUDGY?!? >gasp<

lol... where does he look pudgy?

that car... meh... it was a small little 4 minute quickie that proved my point of gyarados obsession ^^ I'm not overly concearned about it... lol

Thanks for always coming by and giving me quality responses! I've been a bit busy with class work lately... so i'm a bit behind on my spriting... but i will get back to geisheon as well as fix the tires on my topaz ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Original Darkwiz787 (Post 5726315)
Hello there! Good work, as always.

Not much to say, other than you're constantly getting better! And we can't let this thread die! :D

Good to see you back here again! ^_^ Thnx for the support!

Quote:

Originally Posted by terranariko (Post 5726612)
Interesting, you seem to have quite a fasination with gyarados, it's not a bad thing though. Besides that all of your sprites are good, can't really say much else besides that, it's enjoyable to look at them so thats a huge plus.

Yes. It has been determined that I am very attached to gyarados ^^ hell, if i had a choice, i'd be a gyarados! Anyhow, thanks for coming by to see my work! I appreciate your kind words!

---
Anyways, I've been uber busy with school work and (job) work lately... so my spriting prolificy has been flushed down the hole... i have some edits and repairs needed... so look for those to be coming soon(er than later)... ^_^ Thanks everyone for coming by and looking at my stuff...

Keep Spriting!

Golden Corsola April 24th, 2010 6:39 AM

Do you use a pad for the cars?

= GPR = April 25th, 2010 9:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Golden Corsola (Post 5745976)
Do you use a pad for the cars?

Nope ^^ Every single piece of my work is good ol mouse clicking on paint... (except for the new gyarados which was my first photoshop sprite)... but besides that, i only use paint, and i don't have a tablet or nothing...

Any reason in particular?

= GPR = May 19th, 2010 6:19 AM

Okay, so as promised, I revised Geisheon's body on the far right side... the part where the tail looked to ragged and thin...

Old sprite:
http://j.imagehost.org/0667/Geisheon_Old.png

New Sprite:
http://h.imagehost.org/0009/Geisheon_Revised.png

A comparison:
http://h.imagehost.org/0320/Geisheon_tail_comparrison.png

Better? ^^


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